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zsyysUID: 2104219

[size=3][size=4]Some people think that it is the happiness the people enjoy in a country that symbolizes the success of this country and the success has nothing to do with money. But others think it is the strong economy that symbolizes the success of this country. What is your opinion?


What indicates the success of a country? Some people claim that the happiness the people enjoy in a country is the sole standard of the success of this country; others believe that the strong economy plays the most important role in the success of a nation. My personal opinion sides with later.
First of all, only under the condition of the strong economy, can people be provided with various jobs that require different background, that is, either higher education or less education; everyone can easily find an appropriate job, thus the strong economy guarantees internal stability of a country.
At the same time, the strong economy can also bring the external security of a country by developing military, which will produce a threat force to other countries that want to disturb our country. For instance, Russian occupy an important position in the world because of it strong military.
Lastly, strong economy means that a nation own much more money, then the government can build some foundation facilities, such as factories, hospitals etc. besides, government also can input more funds to education that produce more and more higher education talents, in turn, these talents are the basis of development and success of a country.
Therefore, from the above analysis we can conclude that it is more reasonable that the strong economy, rather than happiness of people, that symbolizes the success of a country.

qiaoUID: 2103572

其实这个话题挺有趣的，偶是觉得很多因素的，所以楼主的第四段不如用last but not least
第四段owns，基础设施，楼主记得去查查字典
再次提醒楼主写作格式，看着不舒服

偶个人意见，其实这两个观点不是相互对立的。只是他们有交叉，有不同。

1。当代社会，除非原始社会，个人，公民能觉得幸福一定是建筑在有一定经济基础之上的，不然穷人温饱都解决不了，怎么可能觉得幸福？注意，偶说得前提是当代社会。

2。而基本的生存需求解决后，就有分歧了。幸福的定义是很主观的，每个人对幸福定义不同。有人要挣很多钱才是幸福，有人只要平平淡淡才是真。但总体来说，公民对生活满意，说明了国家对保障人们的基本权利和福利作出了努力，比如养老保险，医疗保障，基础设施建设等。

3。国家只有发展经济，不断壮大自己，才能保证持续的发展，从而保持现有的人民满意度。发展经济也是当今社会的主流。不至于落伍。
小结：只有国家在不牺牲公民利益的前途下，大步发展经济，才是真正的做到了国家的成功，人民才能真正的幸福。

楼主不妨试着想想我的思路是否可以成文呢？这样你就可以拜托八股了。祝你成功！

qiaoUID: 2103572

偶想顶一顶，偶说得观点，包括楼主的，不知道对不对？有建议没？

蜻蜓切UID: 201589

个人觉得楼主的结构很清晰，但是比较老套，写得再好，估计也很难得到高分。（很难达到7分）
2楼的结构不错，但没有强有力的论据支持，有点例子什么的会好些。

[ Last edited by 蜻蜓切 on 2005-6-4 at 21:32 ]