issue23 183 205 215 219 233 155 技术进步和学习的关系(有砖必回)

leo_chenUID: 206840

23"Contemporary technology makes available many small pieces of factual information. As a result, people have become so preoccupied with bits of fragmented information that they pay too little attention to the larger issues and overall perspectives."

183"As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious."

205"As societies all over the world have more and more access to new information, the effects on life-long learning can only be positive."

215"The bombardment of visual images in contemporary society has the effect of making people less able to focus clearly and extensively on a single issue over a long period of time."

219"Now that computer technology has made possible the rapid accessing of large amounts of factual information, people are less likely than ever to think deeply or originally. They feel unable to compete with—much less contribute to—the quantity of information that is now available electronically."

233"Although innovations such as video, computers, and the Internet seem to offer schools improved methods for instructing students, these technologies all too often distract from real learning."

155"Contemporary society offers so many ways of learning that reading books is no longer very important."

观点：
随着技术的进步，人类学习的障碍从以前难以获得信息变为现在信息过多难以处理和理解。因此，重要的是增强信息处理的能力，既能从信息的海洋里找到全貌，又能在需要的时候检索细节。

先说明曾经的信息缺乏导致认识障碍，过于肤浅


再说明信息爆炸导致细节过多，而难以关注整体



加大信息处理的能力有助于掌握全面，且在需要是调查细节


结论：与时具进

84分钟   566 words


With the advancement in technology, the major obstacle of learning for human-being changed form the past difficulties to access pervious knowledge and to exchange ideas with others, to the current inabilities to obtain the interested information from the overwhelming volume of information.   As a result, in order to adapt the changes in present information age, what is necessary to us in learning and research is to strength our skill to process and organize the huge information.

In the past, the major obstacle to handicap people in learning is the inadequate approach to collect information.  Before writing was created, for example, knowledge was only learned and discussed in a family, face-to-face, generation to generation.   It was hard for people in pre-history era to collect information out of the scope of their family and keep their experience safely against the risk of their scholar’s accident death.  Therefore, human civilization advanced extreme slowly before the popularity of books and the establishment of public libraries.  After the age of industrialization, the cost of books, also the cost of information in another word, reduced dramatically and could by afforded by the mass ordinaries.  The widely spread books significantly dismissed the obstacle to access information for human being, and contributed to the progress of the modern civilization greatly.   


With the current emerging of modern technologies, such as computer, Internet and video records, everyone can access the state-of-art information worldwide at home, but not all people could improve their efficiency in learning and research if they failed to refine their skill to acquire information effectively.  Rather than the traditional books which only contain the text and picture, the inventions of computer Internet and video offer people the possibility to access every fresh news taking place in the earth and even out of the earth, as well as the multimedia information on the interested topic, including voices, videos and animations.  However, too much information may distract people's attention from the expected target if we can not process the overwhelming raw data in the right way or do not grasp the methodology on how to summarize the helpful information.  

In order to adapt the current changes contributed by technology advancements, the skill in learning and research should be refined.  The basic idea to process the huge information is to classify and organize the original data.  Only after the classification and summarization, could people reveal the relationship among the fragmented information piece and restore the overall perspectives of the research topics.  Moreover, certain innovative technologies in computer science also ease the pain in information collection and knowledge extraction.  Google, the world famous search engine, is an excellent example.  With the help of Google, people can easily find the related information to their topics, and the even more, hit the correct answer directly if Google understands what people want to know successfully.  As a result, the reduced overhead for people to collect information and summarize information make it possible to devote more attention and efforts in understand and creating knowledge, which strengths our abilities to create innovative issues.

To sum up, the social evolution to information age requires everyone to improve their skills in learning.  Only if people can collect and organize the fragmented information effectively, could they benefit from the changed study pattern, not only ignoring the larger issues and overall perspectives but to exploring into specified detail if necessary.

[ Last edited by leo_chen on 2005-6-11 at 16:31 ]

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215"The bombardment of visual images in contemporary society has the effect of making people less able to focus clearly and extensively on a single issue over a long period of time."

我刚好看到这一题，不知道如何写啊。
关键是visual images到底在整名中应该如何理解，并且如何后面的要求相联系起来。　

我的提纲。

1、确实如所说，由于visual images　的强大的视觉冲击力和vividity使得很多人indulged in this。。例如电视，电影。一些漂亮的彩色照片，
1）、我们无法看到事物真正的本质。
2）、这些视觉的冲击，让更多的人变得不愿意去思考。这使得很多人失去了思考的能力。例如，很多喜欢看电视的小朋友，他们都相比那些喜欢看书的朋友要更不愿意思考一些问题。
3）、因为这些信息的多并且杂，让更多的人无法辩让其真与假，很多人更多的时候，我们不断地在改变我们的思维和想法以及对待事物认识，但并不知道为什么？

当然，这些视觉信息在一定的程度上帮助我们去理解某一方面的相关知识提供一些tools



另外，我觉得大家应该对一些题目多交流一些认识，对题目的理解。这样更加的方便吧。你们认为呢？

可惜以前发过几个帖，没有几个人应。（：

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With the advancement in technology, the major obstacle of learning for human-being changed form the past difficulties to access pervious knowledge and to exchange ideas with others, to the current inabilities to obtain the interested information from the overwhelming volume of information.   As a result, in order to adapt the changes in present information age, what is necessary to us in learning and research is to strength our skill to process and organize the huge information.开头方式不错，但是in order to ….一句 感觉是不是放在结尾更合适呢？因为题目探讨的是现在的人们是不是把精力主要放在了fragmented information上，而不是纵观全局那样的？首先要回答这个问题我觉得更好一些。呼吁要怎么做是后面的话。

In the past, the major obstacle to handicap people in learning is the inadequate approach to collect information.  Before writing was created,create 和 writing的搭配不太合适把 for example, knowledge was only learned and discussed in a family, face-to-face, generation to generation.   It was hard for people in pre-history era to collect information out of the scope of their family and keep their experience safely against the risk of their scholar’s accident death.  Therefore, human civilization advanced extreme slowly before the popularity of books and the establishment of public libraries.  After the age of industrialization, the cost of books, also the cost of information in another word, reduced dramatically and could by afforded by the mass ordinaries.  The widely spread books significantly dismissed the obstacle to access information for human being, and contributed to the progress of the modern civilization greatly.   这一段，从你提纲上看，思路是挺好的，但是觉得还是对人们是不是随着科技的进步越来越关注零碎的信息了，为什么会有这样的现象没有分析透，只是在说过去如何得到信息，现在有如何，科技对获得信息是否更分散没有说清楚，像你提纲说，认识肤浅，是一个不错的方面，但是这个body1里没有很好的表达出这个观点来，觉得就这个方向还有不少发挥的余地，重点要说的是那些曾经的习惯和不发达导致的人们什么样的思想，现在的现实是怎样的，人们如何在关注琐碎的信息


With the current emerging of modern technologies, such as computer, Internet and video records, everyone can access the state-of-art information worldwide at home, but not all people could improve their efficiency in learning and research if they failed to refine their skill to acquire information effectively.  Rather than the traditional books which only contain the text and picture, the inventions of computer Internet and video offer people the possibility to access every fresh news taking place in the earth and even out of the earth, as well as the multimedia information on the interested topic, including voices, videos and animations.  However, too much information may distract people's attention from the expected target if we can not process the overwhelming raw data in the right way or do not grasp the methodology on how to summarize the helpful information.  又看了一个body，知道问题在哪里了。对于举例表示现象的东西描述有些细致，但是对于列举完了的现象缺乏深入的分析，这样的结果就会让论证停留在表面上，显得不够深入。比如这个body段，先说了现在科技如何如何发达，信息发达等等，但是只有however一句是对于这些的分析，最好能仔细说说这样导致的结果例如信息越来越爆炸越来越琐碎，难以顾及整体，或者变化太快，使得larger issues and overall perspectives这个东西本身就不停的变化难以控制，或者说掌握的细节的东西可以如何帮助人们精确的认识，人们也许更愿意从细节上来把握等等。其实说什么分析啊，无非也都是一个意思，但是最好能多几个角度换一些语言来说

In order to adapt the current changes contributed by technology advancements, the skill in learning and research should be refined.  The basic idea to process the huge information is to classify and organize the original data.  Only after the classification and summarization, could people reveal the relationship among the fragmented information piece and restore the overall perspectives of the research topics.  Moreover, certain innovative technologies in computer science also ease the pain in information collection and knowledge extraction.  Google, the world famous search engine, is an excellent example.  With the help of Google, people can easily find the related information to their topics, and the even more, hit the correct answer directly if Google understands what people want to know successfully.  As a result, the reduced overhead for people to collect information and summarize information make it possible to devote more attention and efforts in understand and creating knowledge, which strengths our abilities to create innovative issues.这段我觉得属于为了严谨加入的复杂性的分析，比起前2个body可以不用这么多笔墨，因为题目本身没有问你如何做，或者人们需要什么样的能力，所以可以适当简略点，免得影响到前面的重点部分

To sum up, the social evolution to information age requires everyone to improve their skills in learning.  Only if people can collect and organize the fragmented information effectively, could they benefit from the changed study pattern, not only ignoring the larger issues and overall perspectives but to exploring into specified detail if necessary.结尾不错

总的来说还不错，从提纲上看对题目的把握还比较到位，但是在论证的过程中，好像并没有很明确的表达出你提纲的意思，主要是因为现象之类的东西过于细致，而分析性的文字有些缺乏。还有就是开头那句结论感觉不够扣题，上来就开始说人们应该如何如何。继续努力！ 多看看imong的特训 可以让你对题目的理解更精确。加油！刚吃饭去了 改的慢了 呵呵

leo_chenUID: 206840

With the advancement in technology, the major obstacle of learning for human-being changed form the past difficulties to access pervious knowledge and to exchange ideas with others, to the current inabilities to obtain the interested information from the overwhelming volume of information.   As a result, in order to adapt the changes in present information age, what is necessary to us in learning and research is to strength our skill to process and organize the huge information.开头方式不错，但是in order to ….一句 感觉是不是放在结尾更合适呢？因为题目探讨的是现在的人们是不是把精力主要放在了fragmented information上，而不是纵观全局那样的？首先要回答这个问题我觉得更好一些。呼吁要怎么做是后面的话。

有道理，我一直在为开头和结尾怎么写苦恼，总感觉是同义重复。或者改成在开头说XXX是个problem，结尾说我们该怎么做。

In the past, the major obstacle to handicap people in learning is the inadequate approach to collect information.  Before writing was created,create 和 writing的搭配不太合适把 for example, knowledge was only learned and discussed in a family, face-to-face, generation to generation.   It was hard for people in pre-history era to collect information out of the scope of their family and keep their experience safely against the risk of their scholar’s accident death.  Therefore, human civilization advanced extreme slowly before the popularity of books and the establishment of public libraries.  After the age of industrialization, the cost of books, also the cost of information in another word, reduced dramatically and could by afforded by the mass ordinaries.  The widely spread books significantly dismissed the obstacle to access information for human being, and contributed to the progress of the modern civilization greatly.   这一段，从你提纲上看，思路是挺好的，但是觉得还是对人们是不是随着科技的进步越来越关注零碎的信息了，为什么会有这样的现象没有分析透，只是在说过去如何得到信息，现在有如何，科技对获得信息是否更分散没有说清楚，像你提纲说，认识肤浅，是一个不错的方面，但是这个body1里没有很好的表达出这个观点来，觉得就这个方向还有不少发挥的余地，重点要说的是那些曾经的习惯和不发达导致的人们什么样的思想，现在的现实是怎样的，人们如何在关注琐碎的信息

这一段是想说过去，学习的障碍是获取信息不便。然后和现在的信息过量无法有效的分析利用做对比。另外writting是指文字的发明。

With the current emerging of modern technologies, such as computer, Internet and video records, everyone can access the state-of-art information worldwide at home, but not all people could improve their efficiency in learning and research if they failed to refine their skill to acquire information effectively.  Rather than the traditional books which only contain the text and picture, the inventions of computer Internet and video offer people the possibility to access every fresh news taking place in the earth and even out of the earth, as well as the multimedia information on the interested topic, including voices, videos and animations.  However, too much information may distract people's attention from the expected target if we can not process the overwhelming raw data in the right way or do not grasp the methodology on how to summarize the helpful information.  又看了一个body，知道问题在哪里了。对于举例表示现象的东西描述有些细致，但是对于列举完了的现象缺乏深入的分析，这样的结果就会让论证停留在表面上，显得不够深入。比如这个body段，先说了现在科技如何如何发达，信息发达等等，但是只有however一句是对于这些的分析，最好能仔细说说这样导致的结果例如信息越来越爆炸越来越琐碎，难以顾及整体，或者变化太快，使得larger issues and overall perspectives这个东西本身就不停的变化难以控制，或者说掌握的细节的东西可以如何帮助人们精确的认识，人们也许更愿意从细节上来把握等等。其实说什么分析啊，无非也都是一个意思，但是最好能多几个角度换一些语言来说

In order to adapt the current changes contributed by technology advancements, the skill in learning and research should be refined.  The basic idea to process the huge information is to classify and organize the original data.  Only after the classification and summarization, could people reveal the relationship among the fragmented information piece and restore the overall perspectives of the research topics.  Moreover, certain innovative technologies in computer science also ease the pain in information collection and knowledge extraction.  Google, the world famous search engine, is an excellent example.  With the help of Google, people can easily find the related information to their topics, and the even more, hit the correct answer directly if Google understands what people want to know successfully.  As a result, the reduced overhead for people to collect information and summarize information make it possible to devote more attention and efforts in understand and creating knowledge, which strengths our abilities to create innovative issues.这段我觉得属于为了严谨加入的复杂性的分析，比起前2个body可以不用这么多笔墨，因为题目本身没有问你如何做，或者人们需要什么样的能力，所以可以适当简略点，免得影响到前面的重点部分

To sum up, the social evolution to information age requires everyone to improve their skills in learning.  Only if people can collect and organize the fragmented information effectively, could they benefit from the changed study pattern, not only ignoring the larger issues and overall perspectives but to exploring into specified detail if necessary.结尾不错

总的来说还不错，从提纲上看对题目的把握还比较到位，但是在论证的过程中，好像并没有很明确的表达出你提纲的意思，主要是因为现象之类的东西过于细致，而分析性的文字有些缺乏。还有就是开头那句结论感觉不够扣题，上来就开始说人们应该如何如何。继续努力！ 多看看imong的特训 可以让你对题目的理解更精确。加油！刚吃饭去了 改的慢了 呵呵

其实这么写的目的是想让一篇文章多cover几个topics，提高效率。难免对某些题目稍有偏题：）

多谢拍砖。

[ Last edited by leo_chen on 2005-6-12 at 13:28 ]

qwerty_123UID: 201741

With the advancement in technology, the major obstacle of learning for human-being changed form the past difficulties (to access pervious knowledge and to exchange ideas with others)这个用法新，我是第一次看见, to the current inabilities to obtain the interested information from the overwhelming volume of information.   As a result, in order to adapt the changes in present information age, what is necessary to us in learning and research is to strength our skill(skills) to process and organize the huge information.

In the past, the major obstacle to handicap people in learning is the inadequate approach to collect information.  Before writing was created, for example, knowledge was only learned and discussed in a family, face-to-face, generation to generation.   It was hard for people in pre-history era to collect information out of the scope of their family and keep their experience safely against the risk of their scholar’s accident death.  Therefore, human civilization advanced extreme slowly before the popularity of books and the establishment of public libraries.  After the age of industrialization, the cost of books, also the cost of information in another word, reduced dramatically and could by（be） afforded by the mass ordinaries.  The widely spread books significantly dismissed the obstacle to access information for human being, and contributed to the progress of the modern civilization greatly.   


With the current emerging of modern technologies, such as computer, Internet and video records, everyone can access the state-of-art information worldwide at home, but not all people could improve their efficiency in learning and research if they failed to refine their skill to acquire information effectively.  Rather than the traditional books which only contain the text and picture, the inventions of computer Internet and video offer people the possibility to access every fresh news taking place in the earth and even out of the earth, as well as the multimedia information on the interested topic, including voices, videos and animations.  However, too much information may distract people's attention from the expected target if we can not process the overwhelming raw data in the right way or do not grasp the methodology on how to summarize the helpful information.  

In order to adapt the current changes contributed by technology advancements, the skill skills in learning and research should be refined.  The basic idea to process the huge information is to classify and organize the original data.  Only after the classification and summarization, could people reveal the relationship among the fragmented information piece and restore the overall perspectives of the research topics.  Moreover, certain innovative technologies in computer science also ease the pain in information collection and knowledge extraction.  Google, the world famous search engine, is an excellent example.  With the help of Google, people can easily find the related information to their topics, and the even more, hit the correct answer directly if Google understands what people want to know successfully.  As a result, the reduced overhead for people to collect information and summarize information make it possible to devote more attention and efforts in understand and creating knowledge, which strengths our abilities to create innovative issues.

To sum up, the social evolution to information age requires everyone to improve their skills in learning.  Only if people can collect and organize the fragmented information effectively, could they benefit from the changed study pattern, not only ignoring the larger issues and overall perspectives but to exploring into specified detail if necessary.
楼主是综合几个题目写的，所以感觉有点不像真多一个题目写的，不过辛好有提纲
就题纲而言，写得还是不错， 即使论证缺少一些深刻的东西，显得有点浅，
度地怎么论证，我现在也有点迷惑，是举例+解释，剖析例子+总结论点？ 还是说理+举例+说明+总结论点？一直不是很清楚

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