大家帮忙翻译个东西么

子轩寒冰UID: 153540

浓艳的彩妆,协调的颜色,绚烂而不失高贵典雅.即使是红,黄,蓝,绿. 明亮鲜快的彩色调配再加上雪纺与真丝的完美结合,就像是一只在胜夏草丛中翩翩飞舞的蝴蝶在舞场中肆意的旋转飞扬

这可咋翻啊.....

princetonUID: 153488

:L好恶心啊

princetonUID: 153488

:L好恶心啊

coffeegirlUID: 137942

让我想起了芙蓉JJ。。。

foolboy007UID: 28322

typical 村姑??

digitclaUID: 150299

Rich color 妆,Coordinated color,Brilliant but does not lose noblly is elegant Even if is red,Yellow,Blue,Green Bright fresh is quick colored mixes adds on the snow to spin again
with the pure silk perfect union,Is the butterfly which flutters in the victory summer thick patch of grass recklessly revolves on the picture in the dance hall flies
upwards

imongUID: 140258

Originally posted by Rittub at 2005-6-15 23:01
Rich color 妆,Coordinated color,Brilliant but does not lose noblly is elegant Even if is red,Yellow,Blue,Green Bright fresh is quick colored mixes adds on the snow to spin again
with the pure silk ...

ciba result?

冰火花UID: 101908

浓艳 the color 妆, the coordinated color, brilliant but does not lose noblly is elegant Even if is red, yellow, blue, is green Bright fresh is quick colored mixes adds on the snow to spin again with the pure silk perfect union, the picture is the butterfly which flutters in the victory summer thick patch of grass recklessly revolves in the dance hall flies upwards

子轩寒冰UID: 153540

谢谢~~

dewdrop~UID: 20420

还没翻好吗？我才看见，下午来试一试。你最好能给出稍微长点的语段(因为..小声说,我连汉字写的..主语都确定不了)  如果想质量好点的话，我可以问问我的老师，不过他多数晚上才会看邮件。

冰火花UID: 101908

嘿嘿，楼上这位漂亮姑娘，有身份证么．

:D:D

dewdrop~UID: 20420

MY answer is :

Along with harmony colors even if there are red,yellow,blue and green , the rich and gaudy makeup presents gorgeousness  while never losing nobility and elegance.

Such (a)  bright and lively color mixture,added by the perfect combination of chiffon and nutural silk, shows as if a butterfly, which  dances lightly about the hassock in midsummer, is revolving and flying recklessly in the ballroom.


注：makeup就是彩妆的意思。

treesUID: 82785

学习英语ING

蜻蜓切UID: 201589

Originally posted by dewdrop~ at 2005-6-16 14:06
MY answer is :

Along with harmony colors even if there are red,yellow,blue and green , the rich and gaudy makeup presents gorgeousness  while never losing nobility and elegance.

Such (a)  bri ...

Well done, but I think "gaudy" means “华而不实”.
In my opinion, pageantry seems better
:)

dewdrop~UID: 20420

其中一个老师没给出答案，但是他给了评价，555：

The first sentence is not well-formed in sentence structure (ungrammatical). You may want to rewrite it so that the sentence can make sense. The second sentence is grammatical, but not idiomatic. For one thing, it is hard to imagine what it means when you say "[a] mixture ... is revolving and flying ...."
    You're advised to first make sense of a typically Chinese
description of things (pompous, empty, often illogical) or any other Chinese sentence you happen to encounter before translating it. No matter how pompous, empty of illogical the original is, you've got to read sth. into it so that it becomes sensible in some way. Then you can render the sense you've made of the original into English. And remember: never write a ungrammatical sentence unless the sender of the original is purposefully so.

    Best,
    KP