issue155 一定回拍 我觉得好像有点跑题了

clylizeUID: 150642

155 "Contemporary society offers so many ways of learning that reading books is no longer very important."
155．当代社会提供了很多学习的途径，读书这种学习方式已经不是很重要了
In the present age, people have a lot of ways to learning. Is reading book not important？ In my point of view, although we can learn knowledge for so many ways, nothing can instead of reading books.

  The development of science brings multifold ways to study. People can use walkman to study foreign language everywhere. A person wants to learn something about animal, makeup, and housekeeping, he/her can watch TV. Someone wants find some music afflatus, he/she can choose CD player. If he/she wants to find more information, the internet is the good choice.

However, reading book is the most important way in learning.

First, TV, CD player, walkman and computer need power to run, but book do not. Persons can read book when they wait a bus, during their travel, and so on. They can use it in anytime and decide how long they want to use.

Second, book is cheaper than other implements. Everyone can afford a book, but not all the people afford a computer or TV. In country, some schools can not give the children the computer lesson, because they do not have enough money to buy computers and schools can not give more power to make the computer run. But they can teach other lessons with reading book. Another example is book is very popular in citizen, because of its price. This make most writers become their composing into books. And the book can bring more money to writers than the composing in internet.

Third, book which is applied for students often design by famous teachers and educators. It is more useful to students. It includes the spirit of the nation, some important custom and moral. However other implements can not reach the level.

In sum, reading book is important way to study. The other implements are adjuvant tools. Every person should read a book if his/her wants to get more knowledge.

我真的真的很努力再憋了 可是字数还是不多 伤心

[ Last edited by clylize on 2005-7-24 at 23:09 ]

阿择菜UID: 2110339

你的文章字数不够完全是你自己没有展开,比如说用其他方式学习啊walkman,cd player,computer,you can list the use the purpose of these implements.显示出不仅读书是学习的重要方式,这些方式也是!
在你论证reading book is the most important way in learning时,你只说明了book的优点,因为书随处可以读,书便宜并且是由专家设计的,但是并没有论证你的TS ,为什么要读书学习?你说这些只是外在的东西,其实书是一种表达作者内心的最好的方式,看书可以理解作者的真实意图.
读书学习也可以使老师统一教学统一管理..
reading books比起其他方式更 convenience,easy to make a note,如果和其他方式比较来论述更能表达你的观点: reading book is really  important...

clylizeUID: 150642

In the present age, people have a lot of ways to learning. Is reading book not important？ In my point of view, although we can learn knowledge for so many ways, nothing can instead of reading books.

  The development of science brings multifold ways to study. People can use walkman listening tape and radio to improve their foreign language. If they want to know something about animal, makeup, and housekeeping, they can watch TV. Want to listen music?  CD player is the best choice. And the internet is a powerful implement for students. An amount of information in it includes math, music, languages, country and so on. People can find most useful thing from it. They can view the beautiful place which they can not visit, can learn how to cook a delicious food which is from foreign country, can get a lot of animal’s information which can not live in there.

However, reading book is the most important way in learning.

First, book is cheaper than other implements. Everyone can afford a book, but not all the people can afford a computer or TV. In some country, students can read books to learn knowledge in stead of use computer. They can not buy walkman to study foreign language but they can study it with book. The advantage of price makes book is more popular than other implements.  Book can sell in every area. Most writer prefer book to internet, because book can bring more money than internet.

Second, book is lighter than other implements, and it does not need power to work. People can read book for a long time, and do not worry about it power off. The other implements such as TV, walkman, computer can not work with out power, so people can not use them in every place. Book is so light to carry out and need no battery. Most people like reading book during their travel, having a picnic and waiting a bus.

Third, book which is applied for students often design by famous teachers and educators. It includes the spirit of the nation, some important custom and moral. It describes knowledge particular and understandable. People can learn everything step by step form books. However other implements can not reach the level. For example, walkman can use to study foreign language. We can use tape to listen language, but information in tape is limited. And the tape can not teach students form easy to difficult. Internet can afford an amount of messages to study language. However, it is not good to beginner. In fact, most beginners often do not know how to deal with messages from internet. They can not distinguish which is useful to them, and which is not important.

In sum, reading book is an important way to study. The other implements are adjuvant tools. Every person should read a book if his/her wants to get more knowledge.


我又改了改 终于字数够了 多谢菜菜指点我