[820互助] Tomm：Madhero

小可可UID: 194883

明白了，先去做题。。~~ THx

TommUID: 177042

呵呵，我怀疑答案错了，我也选“C) effect that repeated rising sea levels might have on glacial ice”， 要不然怎么叫circle？

小可可UID: 194883

这篇我觉得不是最烂的。。最烂有点不敢发。。= =
120. Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion
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Many people cherish the illusion that quickly-made decisions intend to be wrong in any event. In fact, such decisions have always been judged partially just because people spend less time on them. I personally disagree to the statement that decisions that are made quickly are always wrong.

To begin with, a quickly-made decision does not necessarily equate to a bad decision, but an expeditious response to certain matters. It might be done after a careful analysis by a quick mind. For instance, the one-minute manager, a character created by Kenneth Blanchard and Spencer Johnson, never spends more than one minute to make any decision. These decisions are usually based on rational thought, even though they are made in a rather short time.

What is more, flash decisions are preferred in the business competition. They are made by companies to deal with problems such as where to invest and how to take the lead among all competitors. Since marketing resources are limited, those who can decide more quickly often get more opportunities. If these decisions were not effective at all-- which is the assumption that many people have-- companies would not use this type of decision-making in their daily operations.

Additionally, some decisions made by people’s instinct are helpful in emergencies. In one case cited in some news report, a woman was to give birth to a baby on a airplane during its flight; two doctors offered help immediately so that the baby was born safely. The decision made by the doctors was quick, but it did work.

It is true that carefully-thought decisions are well organized and, sometimes, more reasonable, but that is not to say that quickly-made decisions are always wrong. In summary, decisions that are made quickly are right and even more potent than those carefully thought of in many occasions.
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不记得是否发过了。。
下次发一篇30分钟的原版，比较恶，建议做好心理准备~~
Thx 啦

[ Last edited by 小可可 on 2005-8-5 at 21:15 ]

小可可UID: 194883

Originally posted by Tomm at 2005-8-5 20:09
呵呵，我怀疑答案错了，我也选“C) effect that repeated rising sea levels might have on glacial ice”， 要不然怎么叫circle？

94呀~~
我再找找其它题目，刚才写作文去了，，又郁闷了~

MadheroUID: 125272

Originally posted by Tomm at 2005-8-5 18:32
嗯，我建议你应该马上做一套真题。都什么时候了还不做真题？
不要在听力软件上面做，你先做了题以后，然后我再根据你做真题的感觉和你讨论讨论。只有真的实践了，你才能发现你的不足。
语法你做了真的套题没？你 ...

谢谢指教，很有道理啊
刚做了0101，深受打击。。。
十几个听力，7语法，5阅读...
语法20分钟做完，阅读50分钟做完。

MadheroUID: 125272

听力做的时候感觉时间很紧，选项很长，经常没找到合适的选项就到下一题了，找不到一点时间来提前看题。

[ Last edited by Madhero on 2005-8-6 at 00:21 ]

TommUID: 177042

嗯，继续作题。

注意做完题目后好好总结下。做题是为了模拟考试的感觉，总结或者说回顾是为了填补知识的漏洞，从而让你至少在相对于过去的考试来说显得无敌。嗯，多练习下。

嗯，听力你觉得时间紧，那是因为你的反应太慢了，继续做题，练习的太少了，托福高分的至少反应速度上是不应该跟不上的。这个要你自己多练习了。多做几套后再试试。另外，鉴于考试的时候磁带要读个instruction，你可以留30秒钟的时间来给自己提前看看题目，但是不要给自己留多了时间，先紧后松。提前看题目注意从试卷后往试卷前看，速度要快，抓到关键词就赶快扫过。

继续努力！

MadheroUID: 125272

刚做了0105的听力，错了6个，但短对话前5个就错了2个，长对话没错，段子题错了3个，2个集中在了一个段子里。
这次用的gter的mp3，在instruction时扫了一下选项
错了5个语法22分钟
错了5个阅读43分钟

[ Last edited by Madhero on 2005-8-6 at 11:36 ]

MadheroUID: 125272

阅读我现在是看题目，然后回去找，是不是先通读一遍文章比较好呢？那样时间就太紧了

TommUID: 177042

120. Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.

Many people cherish(为什么要cherish，这个是珍藏的意思，对于一个对于生命并非太重要的观点，为啥要去珍藏？不过，鼓励下可可的勇敢的用词尝试啊！) the illusion(这里的illusion也用得不太合适总觉得，别人的不一定是幻想啊，也可能有他们的逻辑支撑啊。illusion感觉用在一种信仰式的想法上面。你自己找本字典看看里面的例句体会下) that quickly-made(这里可以不用hyphen,如果用hyphen请把那个quickly换成形容词形式，关于heyphen和复合词的构成，你自己多看几个复合词的例子就知道了。) decisions intend to(intend to有一种主观意愿的意思，而并非单纯的“倾向于”的意思，你可以用 is tend to be 或者 incline to be ) be wrong in any event. In fact, such decisions have always been judged partially just because people spend less time on them.(这句说的不好，你是不是想表达，in fact, such decisions cannot be taken as wrong just because people spend less time on them) I personally disagree to(with) the statement that decisions that are made quickly are always wrong.

To begin with, a quickly-made decision does not necessarily equate to a bad decision, but an expeditious(呵呵，可可的词用得好啊。) response to certain matters. It might be done after a careful analysis by a quick mind. For instance, the one-minute manager, a character created by Kenneth Blanchard and Spencer Johnson, never spends more than one minute to make any decision.(建议不好用电影里面的事例来做论据，尤其是那些非写实的电影，因为他们本身都是虚构的，怎么来证明别的观点？有好多例子可以举啦！比如：many good photographs are taken in a blink. A good photograph requires the photographers to make a quick decision and take a snapshot to capture a precious accidental scene that happens in split second. 嗯，我举过的例子就不要在考试中举了，因为可能有不少其他人也会举这些例子。) These decisions are usually based on rational thought, even though they are made in a rather short time.

What is more, flash decisions are preferred in the business competition. They are made by companies to deal with problems such as where to invest and how to take the lead among all competitors. Since marketing(marketing 是营销的意思，market才是市场的意思) resources are limited, those who can decide more quickly often get more opportunities. If these decisions were(are) not effective at all-- which(这里就不要用which了，你用了一个em dash，而且应该是三个小hyphen，不是两个，插入语应为一小句子，不是一个从句。关于标点符号，你可以参考下语法书。) is the assumption that many people(加一个may, 你有时候说话太绝对了，如果说话总是这么绝对的话，那么英语要那么多的情态动词和语气干吗？) have-- companies would not use this type of decision-making in their daily operations.

Additionally, some decisions made by people's instinct are helpful in emergencies. In one case cited in some news report(不要用cite，毕竟这是新闻，比较讲究原创性的，你就说I have read on the newspaper), a woman was to give birth to a baby on a airplane during its flight; two doctors offered help immediately so that the baby was born safely. The decision made by the doctors was quick, but(考虑下用and, 你觉得哪个好？呵呵，你自己推敲下，这个没有标准答案) it did work.

It is true that carefully-thought(slow and careful-thought, 加一个slow，以示和前面的fast decision区分) decisions are well organized and, sometimes, more reasonable, but that is not to say(mean 你觉得哪个好？自己推敲下) that quickly-made decisions are always wrong. In summary, decisions that are made quickly are right and even more potent than those carefully thought of in many occasions. (这里不好这样做总结，你整篇文章一直只是在说快速决定有很多时候是正确的，你不是在做比较，所以我上个帖子同你说的你要开始亮出你的观点，时刻记住你的purpose，你是在证明你的观点，而不是在论证一个偏的观点。不好写到最后竟然偏了)


(恩，整篇文章的结构还不错啊，不像你自己说的那么糟糕了。考虑到你的小小年纪，呵呵，喜欢用些新词，不错不错，但是考试的时候就不好用太多自己拿不准的词了；平时练习的时候乱用没关系，但是用完了后，自己要好好查查字典。另外，感觉你的分论点的排列的逻辑不是那么清晰，是不是托福的作文不是很强调逻辑？我看了下托福的6分标准，你可以在你的bulletin上面找到，就只有一句话，Demonstrates clear competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactics level, though the essay may have occasional errors. 竟然没有提到逻辑。呵呵，如果不涉及到写作的逻辑问题，那么你的文章还是不错的，恩，我等会儿在外面发个帖讨论下托福的写作强不强调逻辑。尽管，我觉得，就算不强调，但是，你也应该注意逻辑，一个好的文章逻辑是很顺畅的。逻辑不是形式，不是每段开头把to begin with, what is more, additionally摆上去了，就有逻辑了，的确，这些形式上的东西可以帮助你形成逻辑，但是不能替代逻辑，逻辑是你的写作思路，是一气呵成的思维。有一个中心的思想，这个是你的最核心的idea和你最根本的purpose， 然后围绕着你的这个核把你的这篇文章展开，你的论点只是用来支撑你的核，去论证你的purpose.


嗯，我给你把一些细节改了下，哎，竟然改了我一个小时，faint，主要是要在输入法间来回切换，遇到我要评论时还要自己手动加些变色的代码，麻烦死了。

好吧，你自己思考思考，我的观点只是我的观点，你同意就同意，不同意可以攻击。呵呵，我只是希望为你形成你最后的自己的写作的风格提供些帮助。)

[ Last edited by Tomm on 2005-8-6 at 11:51 ]

TommUID: 177042

大家以后作文可以发到我的邮箱，这个坛子有防拷贝的机制，所以，在每个贴子的字里行间藏了很多其他的字符。拷贝到其他地方就显示出来了。这样我不好给你在原文上面拍砖。 作文就发到我的邮箱来， 呵呵，随便发，有美图什么的也可以发过来，2G的，嘿嘿。

TommUID: 177042

呵呵，进步神速啊！你真牛B！
听力继续做题和练习，有时候要虐待下自己的耳朵，不断给自己的耳朵提要求，这样才能越来越牛B。
就是语法错多了，你注意每次做完题后总结下你的错误，把错题更正了，做了几套题后然后做个统计看看,看看是哪种语法现象错多了，这样就发现了你的语法的知识漏洞。然后集中攻克掉。知识挖掘原理上就是这么做的。

关于阅读的方法，从来这个问题就是众说纷纭，你按照你自己的习惯来。反正我是不习惯先读题再到原文中定位的。你可以试试先通读，再看题找答案。找到最适合你自己的方法。

[ Last edited by Tomm on 2005-8-6 at 12:45 ]

MadheroUID: 125272

Originally posted by Tomm at 2005-8-6 09:59
嗯，继续作题。

注意做完题目后好好总结下。做题是为了模拟考试的感觉，总结或者说回顾是为了填补知识的漏洞，从而让你至少在相对于过去的考试来说显得无敌。嗯，多练习下。

嗯，听力你觉得时间紧，那是因为 ...

嗯，收到。
听力从后往前看是什么意思呢，先看后面的题目的选项么？比如说part a先看30题，part c先看50题吗？

TommUID: 177042

我要下去看书了。这几天丫的光在论坛上面溜达了，啥事儿也没做。还有好几本1000页左右的书没有读。

继续加油，少上论坛多做题，这才是正道。

大家留完帖后不要等回复，这样太浪费时间了，看半天书后再来看看就行了，还是以自己为主，立足自己。准备考试的时候是要稍微有点儿个人英雄主义的。

TommUID: 177042

Originally posted by Madhero at 2005-8-6 12:04

听力从后往前看是什么意思呢，先看后面的题目的选项么？比如说part a先看30题，part c先看50题吗？

嗯，对头！ part a从30题往前看起，part c 从50题往前看起。这样是为了让你越往后做心里面越不虚，至少心里面不怕。你觉得呢？