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发表于 2005-8-6 23:45:22 |只看该作者
i don't consider it late at all.
but since you asked...yeah. always. sleeping is some kinda...wasting time, i think
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发表于 2005-8-6 23:45:55 |只看该作者
Are you used to a passive voice. Or you can start with, like , "it is not true that..."
a good sentence cannot be good when it is seperated out from its context. A good sentence is an element of a good passage. It's a whole part. I may give you a good passage which i like very much. You may read it several times to feel the the way the author writes.

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An excerpt from E.B.White’s “Moon Landing”, written in 1969,shortly after astronauts Neil Armstrong and Buzz Aldrin took the first steps on the moon.

The moon, as it turns out, is a great place for men. One-sixth gravity must be a lot of fun, and when Armstrong and Aldrin went into their bouncy little dance, like two happy children, it was a moment not only of triumph but of gaiety. The moon, on the other hand, is a poor place for flags. Ours looked stiff and awkward, trying to float on the breeze that does not blow. (There must be a lesson here somewhere.) It is traditional, of course, for explorers to plant the flag, but it struck us, as we watched with awe and admiration and pride, that our two fellows were universal men, not national men, and should have been equipped accordingly. Like every great river and every great sea, the moon belongs to none, and belongs to all. It still holds the key to madness, still controls the tides that lap on shores everywhere, still guards the lovers who kiss in every lane under no banner but the sky. What a pity that in our moment of triumph we did not foreswear the familiar Iwo Jim scene and plant instead a device acceptable to all: a limp, white handkerchief, perhaps, a symbol of the common cold, which, like the moon, unites us all.
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You must be a tomorrow manager for always saying  the sentence initial with I ...

Damn, the BBS is slowing down. I think it must be too many connections to the web server.
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发表于 2005-8-6 23:51:13 |只看该作者
Wasting time?  Ha, i think sleep is the best way to spend your life. You may experience every feeling in your dreams, the fear, the courage, the happiness, the sorrow, the gain, the lost, and when you wake up again next morning you will find everything is gone. Just like the life itself -- when you die, you feel nothing. and when you wake up again, althought there might be still several slight senses left in your head, and you can find you are like a new born baby. That's the best part of sleep.
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发表于 2005-8-7 00:02:30 |只看该作者
sounds like you are not so realistic... and you have been acting a bit wierd today...somehing wrong?
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发表于 2005-8-7 00:11:28 |只看该作者
Weird? Maybe. I have been spending a lot of time on BBS recently and doing nothing. That's not good. I've got a lot of pressure now. I think I need a stop.
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发表于 2005-8-7 00:13:11 |只看该作者
you bet. just try to get some sleep, as what you have said.
i appriciate your help today

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发表于 2005-8-7 00:16:45 |只看该作者
Feels like that I am a little bit net-alcoholic.

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发表于 2005-8-7 00:21:37 |只看该作者

To Madhero and 小可可

to 小可可:
Thank you for saying that.

to Madhero and 小可可:
I think I need to make a break tomorrow. If you and Madhero get new questions which you guys need to discuss with me, you can send them to me in emails --- you have my mailing address. I've got a mail notifier installed on my computer so I can be notified of your mail arrival relatively soon.

Good night and good luck to you guys!

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缺月挂疏桐,漏断人初静。谁见幽人独往来,缥缈孤鸿影。

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发表于 2005-8-7 12:19:15 |只看该作者
0108,又sb了,11,2,8

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发表于 2005-8-8 11:56:59 |只看该作者
0201,4,2,7
听力和语法渐渐稳定,阅读却开始狂错...

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发表于 2005-8-8 12:02:01 |只看该作者
Originally posted by Madhero at 2005-8-8 11:56
0201,4,2,7
听力和语法渐渐稳定,阅读却开始狂错...


Trust yourself, Never stop!!!
I bet we can crack TOEFL test!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
seven heavenly virtues:
fortitude, temperance, prudence, justice, faith, charity, hope

To be an excellent teacher of New Oriental school!


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发表于 2005-8-8 12:34:06 |只看该作者
To Madhero:  
Good for you, Man!
呵呵,不错不错,但是你的阅读怎么可能错那么多?这个和语法可都是中国人的强项啊。你应该可以控制到3个以内的。

托福的题目不难,细心点儿就行了。


To Angel,
呵呵,把你的作文预期分数改成5吧。4分有点儿低。
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发表于 2005-8-8 12:39:32 |只看该作者
Originally posted by Tomm at 2005-8-8 12:34
To Madhero:  
Good for you, Man!
呵呵,不错不错,但是你的阅读怎么可能错那么多?这个和语法可都是中国人的强项啊。你应该可以控制到3个以内的。

托福的题目不难,细心点儿就行了。


To Angel,
呵呵 ...


Tom,你上了?
改为5分,此话怎讲?
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发表于 2005-8-8 12:54:16 |只看该作者
Originally posted by grapepm at 2005-8-8 12:49
我现在听力做第二遍还要错15个!其实很多答案都记得,你们说说这最后12天我怎么练呀!我的目标是错10个!



我这两天开始有点感觉了。
你除了做真题时规矩的听听力外,其他时间都交给听力突破吧!我每天狂听4小时!

突破上面要求你怎么做你就怎么做!相信科学!!
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