Issue185 第12篇 丑闻，可是却没话说

amanda1011UID: 2106668

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从2005年8月2日23时10分到2005年8月2日23时50分

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Scandals-whether in politics, academia, or other areas-can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.

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I strongly agree with the claim of the speaker that scandals can be useful for focusing our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could-whether in politics, academia, or other areas.

First of all, people tend to be more curious about the scandals than preach given by the speakers or reformers. Scandals, as some real stories, would be so vivid that they can give people a profound impression about what is bad behavior in our society. Also, as an old proverb says, actions speak louder than words. Since scandals are what had happened around us and people would be somewhat interesting for the private affairs about other people, so many mass media would like to use scandals to call the attention to the people they would derogate. In modern times, scandals, as a strong tool, could destroy one person immediately no matter what contribution he had ever done to our society.

Furthermore, scandals use negative examples to call our attention on the existing problems or phenomenon in the society as well as in many specific fields. For example, the media reveals the scandal of Water Gate. Nixon, the former president of United States, abused his power to seek his own benefit. Through these scandals in political realm, we would find out a lot of problems, such as corruption or misuse of authority of some leaders. In the economic realm, scandals could also reveal the problems hided in the company. For example, the President of Chang Hong Group in China peculated the public money for his own use. When his bad conduction was disclosed in the newspaper and other media, many of us would have a thought about the problems in the management of a company. In the academic realm, some professors plagiarize the theses from other ones or from their own students. Their behavior would motivate us to think about that we may lack of the creativity in the study or the research environment would be so bad that those professors could not produce any fruits by their own effort.

Whereas, we should look on the scandals in a calm and fair way, in other words, we should make a difference between the contribution and the mistake of a person. Even if some one commits a mistake, we should use an objective criterion to evaluate him/her. The feat should be acknowledged and the scandals should be disclosed. Besides, the more important work we should do is not only to excavate and criticize the scandals but also to avoid committing similar mistakes. Otherwise, scandals would lose their real functions and become just stories prevailing in the streets.

In sum, scandals, as a mirror of the society, could help us pay attention to some problems hidden in many fields and motivate our thinking of the development of society. However, we should utilize this tool carefully and effectively.

MIMOSARLUID: 2112846

也许换个方式，从个人，社会，科学细分，就会有话说的

MIMOSARLUID: 2112846

I strongly agree with the claim of the speaker that scandals can be useful for focusing our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could-whether in politics, academia, or other areas.

First of all, people tend to be more curious about the scandals than preach given by the speakers or reformers. Scandals, as some real stories, would be so vivid that they can give people a profound impression about what is bad behavior in our society. Also, as an old proverb says, actions speak louder than words. Since scandals are what had happened around us and people would be somewhat interesting for the private affairs about other people, so many mass media would like to use scandals to call the attention to the people they would derogate. In modern times, scandals, as a strong tool, could destroy one person immediately no matter what contribution he or she had ever done to our society.

Furthermore, scandals use negative examples to call our attention on the existing problems or phenomenon in the society as well as in many specific fields. For example, the media reveals the scandal of Water Gate. Nixon, the former president of United States, abused his power to seek his own benefit. Through these scandals in political realm, we would find out a lot of problems, such as corruption or misuse of authority of some leaders. In the economic realm, scandals could also reveal the problems hided in the company. For example, the President of Chang Hong Group in China peculated the public money for his own use. When his bad conduction was disclosed in the newspaper and other media, many of us would have a thought about the problems in the management of a company. In the academic realm, some professors plagiarize the theses from other ones or from their own students. Their behavior would motivate us to think about that we may lack of the creativity in the study or the research environment would be so bad that those professors could not produce any fruits by their own effort.(写的很好啊)

Whereas, we should look on the scandals in a calm and fair way, in other words, we should make a difference between the contribution and the mistake of a person. Even if some one commits a mistake, we should use an objective criterion to evaluate him/her. The feat should be acknowledged and the scandals should be disclosed. Besides, the more important work we should do is not only to excavate and criticize the scandals but also to avoid committing similar mistakes. Otherwise, scandals would lose their real functions and become just stories prevailing in the streets.（是不是，很多的SCANDALS是分散人的主意力的呢？面对丑闻，我们应该高区分力）

In sum, scandals, as a mirror of the society, could help us pay attention to some problems hidden in many fields and motivate our thinking of the development of society. However, we should utilize this tool carefully and effectively.

esmeirasUID: 202885

I strongly agree with( the claim of the speaker  好长哦， speaker 前面的删了 ) that scandals can be useful forin focusing our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could-whether in politics, academia, or other areas. ( 要是嫌开头短第一句可以提问试试)

First of all, people tend to be more curious about the scandals than preaches given by the speakers or reformers. Scandals, as some real stories, (丑闻，和某些真实的故事一样？ 是这个意思吗？建议再考虑一下， 因为有些丑闻本身就是真实的。 ) would be so vivid that they can give people a profound impression about (what is bad 改 “the “) behavior in our society. Also, as an old proverb says, actions speak louder than words. Since scandals are what had happened around us and people would be somewhat interesting for the private affairs about other people, so many mass media would like to use scandals to call( catch) the attention to the people they would derogate( 媒体报道丑闻不一定是可意要诋毁某人吧？有时也是因为需要卖点啊)  . In modern times, scandals, as a strong tool, could destroy one person immediately no matter what contribution he had ever done to our society. 说理很清楚，这里加个例子就能混到500多字了！ 什么明星妮可。基得曼啊， 总是绯闻漫天飞的 。 不过，偶也是在写完想到的。。。~~~就要考了，同病相怜啊。5555555555555~~~~~~~~~~

Furthermore, scandals useinclude negative examples to call our attention on the existing problems or phenomenon in the society as well as in many specific fields. For example, the media reveals the scandal of Water Gate. Nixon, the former president of United States, abused his power to seek his own benefit. Through these scandals in political realm, we would find out a lot of problems, such as corruption or misuse of authority of some leaders. In the economic realm, scandals could also reveal the problems hided in the company.( 这句好)  For example, the President of Chang Hong Group in China peculated the 去the ,不必用定冠词，这里public money for his own use. When his bad conduction was disclosed in the newspaper and other去 media, many of us would have a a ??  thought about the problems in the management of a company. In the academic realm, some professors plagiarize the theses from other ones or from their own students. Their behavior would motivate us to think about that we may lack of the creativity in the study or the research environment would be so bad that those professors could not produce any fruits by their own effort.  ( 分角度论述比较好的。 但是有一点啊，到这里也没提 丑闻比speaker and reformer 更有效啊 )

Whereas, we should look on the scandals in a calm and fair way, in other words, 加一句， we should keep an eye on the scandals reported by the newspapers and medias and make our own judgments.we should make a difference between the contribution and the mistake of a person. Even if some one commits (have committed) a mistake, we should (use put on 吧？)an objective criterion toin evaluate (evaluating) him/her. (The feat should be acknowledged and the scandals should be disclosed. 很突兀的说，their feats should be....and their merits/contributions…. 后面那个scandal 觉得不能并列啊 )Besides, the more important work we should do is not only to excavate and criticize the scandals but also to avoid committing similar mistakes. 这个提醒的好，偶怎么想不到呢 Otherwise, scandals would lose their real functions and become just ， fall intostories prevailing in the streets. 这个结尾很棒！！

In sum, scandals, as a mirror of the society, could help us pay attention to some problems hidden in many fields and motivate our thinking of the development of society. However, we should utilize this tool carefully and effectively.  结尾比偶的好多了


Comments:  
偶排人比较重，别介意哈
偶限时和你一样的，开始还查了好多资料，写得狂烂， 后面改了4个多小时，才成点象样的东西。 急啊！！！！！~~~~~
你写同主题150， 环境的哪个了吗？ 那题照道理好些， 可我死活只熬了400字，T_T  
天哪。。。~~~不感相信自己就要考了。。。！~~


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偶的，狠狠派哈：）

[ Last edited by esmeiras on 2005-8-10 at 18:16 ]