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Issue152  第1篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：51分19秒     440 words
从2005年7月20日11时33分到2005年7月20日12时51分
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The only responsibility of corporate executives, provided they stay within the law, is to make as much money as possible for their companies.
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It is true that to consider for one's own benefits, to make as much money as possible is an important responsibility for the corporate executives, however, these executives should not neglect other things such as moral, and if they pay enough attention on moral they may receive additional profits.

Admittedly, it is the corporate executives' responsibility to make money for the companies. Usually the most important purpose of a company is to make money through which they can survive in this competing world. Maybe a company is a money making machine which employ its executives and workers working for making money. If the executive can not achieve this aim very well, he (or) she may be discharged. Hardly can we imagine that a company employs a executive paying him (or) her but not for making money. On the other hand, to consider in individual level, if a corporate executive gain more profits for his (or) her company, usually as encouragement he (or) her can receive more money. Thus, it is very important for an executive to make money for the company.  

However, there are also other valuable things which may very important such as moral. We can not imagine a corporate executives use nearly every methods within the law to make money. Maybe at a short time the company can make profits, but in fact it is very dangerous for the future. For example, if a executive do not honest, and he (or) she may make a lot of money in a short time, but as time goes by, his (or) her partners in the other companies may distrust he (or) she any more, and how can this executives go on to make profits? Thus, the executives have to take many other things except money into account,

Furthermore, the corporate executives may receive additional profits for the company if they pay enough attention on other things. Still discuss moral. Taking care of moral can receive good reputation for a company. Usually when a executive gain a good reputation for his (or) her company, he (or) she also make money for the company in the long run. People may like to work in the company and thus more experts may come, other companies may like to work with the company and thus the power of the company may increase, wealth people may like to invest in the company and thus the company may be able to do much more business. Thus, the executive does can gain more profit for the company if taking other aspect into account.

To sum up, although it is the corporate executives' responsibility to make money for the companies, but if they throw moral away, they may abandon many things which are more valuable than money.

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------题目------
The only responsibility of corporate executives, provided they stay within the law, is to make as much money as possible for their companies.
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It is true that to consider for one's own benefits, to make as much money as possible is an important responsibility for the corporate executives, however, these executives should not neglect other things such as moral, and if they pay enough attention on moral they may receive additional profits.【开头简接有力！】

Admittedly, it is the corporate executives' responsibility to make money for the companies. Usually the most important purpose of a company is to make money through which they can survive in this competing world. Maybe a company is a money making machine which employ its executives and workers working for making money. If the executive can not achieve this aim very well, he (or) she may be discharged. Hardly can we imagine that a company employs a executive paying him (or) her but not for making money. On the other hand, to consider in individual level, if a corporate executive gain more profits for his (or) her company, usually as encouragement he (or) her can receive more money. Thus, it is very important for an executive to make money for the company.  

However, there are also other valuable things which may very important such as moral. 【用however, too much focus on ××money×× wil bring negative efforts...这样连接跟顺畅些!】We can not imagine a corporate executives use nearly every methods within the law to make money. Maybe at a short time the company can make profits, but in fact it is very dangerous for the future. For example, if a executive do not honest, and he (or) she may make a lot of money in a short time, but as time goes by, his (or) her partners in the other companies may distrust he (or) she any more, and how can this executives go on to make profits? Thus, the executives have to take many other things except money into account.[这段还可以加入law beyond border与本国的law不同，那么既使再国内遵守，去了国外照样违反。。]

Furthermore, the corporate executives may receive additional profits for the company if they pay enough attention on other things. Still discuss moral. Taking care of moral can receive good reputation for a company. Usually when a executive gain a good reputation for his (or) her company, he (or) she also make money for the company in the long run. People may like to work in the company and thus more experts may come, other companies may like to work with the company and thus the power of the company may increase, wealth people may like to invest in the company and thus the company may be able to do much more business. Thus, the executive does can gain more profit for the company if taking other aspect into account.

To sum up, although it is the corporate executives' responsibility to make money for the companies, but if they throw moral away, they may abandon many things which are more valuable than money.

整体思路不错。语言也明显进步了！加油了！

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