请求：帮助

winnie1005UID: 2101598

我知道这里有很多的牛人，所以请求你们的帮助哦~
# U) x) e2 ]2 m. }( x# o: V5 n我去看过了，文书机构都好贵哦，天价开的吓死人了，recommendation letter最低的也要700块。。。舍不得银子的我怎么办呢？
' f0 h  U4 L& W7 ?各位有没有什么好的文书机构推荐，要有点真材实料的，。。。还有不要太贵
我把自己胡乱写的一封RL先发上来，知道一定漏洞百出，希望各位有侠义心肠的大虾们帮我修改一下~我就一把眼泪一吧鼻涕的送上我的感激了。。。
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1 n" O1 B" o* o+ u/ V( W* HDear Admission Officers,
" {  k7 G/ y9 I2 V* kIt is a pleasure for me to recommend Ms Xxx  as a quality candidate for admission to your school. As the class teacher of Xxx, I am very familiar with her abilities and consider her to be an outstanding girl with a bright future in her college studies.
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Xxx is the monitor of my class. In her works, she has shown great dedication and leadership ability. I saw the depth of her familiarity with the interpersonal problems among her fellow classmates when I noticed her being able to solve all kinds of problems. She has also show a special maturity which most of her peers do not have. She has a unique understanding of life. Xxx is always setting up future goals and can always manage to find proper approaches to clear up the barristers in her way to success. I am very fortunate to have Xxx as my assistant in managing the class affairs.

Xxx is also a very enthusiastic participant in the school activities. Each year, she directed short plays for the class in the school Art Festivals, showing her talents in performing arts and ability to assigning tasks. As a volunteer of the school library, Xxx was selected as the “best volunteer of the year” last term. She has also used up her English abilities as an advantage for her voluntary work as an interpreter for foreigners during the school activities. Furthermore, she is a persistant participant of the all sort of contests. She won Third Prize in the 2003 National English Proficiency Competition through her outstanding performance. Only a few of the best students can get this honor in China. Xxx was also honored the scholarship offered by the Shanghai Education Development Office.
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As the mathematics teacher of Xxx, I would not hesitate to compliment her academic achievements. She often discussed with me her creative ideas on different ways to solve the maths problems after class. She is a very diligent and has a positive attitude towards her studies. Xxx is always able to get good scores in her exams. Her score ranks the best of the class of 40 and she is always in the top 10% of a grade of approximately 160 intelligent students.

Occasionally, her fortitude and persistence can turn into stubbornness, but because of her good nature and many other good qualities, I like this diligent young woman and have no hesitation in recommending her as one of my favorite students.

tolkien_SUID: 2130759

RL一定要文笔多好吗?内容才重要的.

winnie1005UID: 2101598

那么你觉得我的内容怎样呢？给点批评吧