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[i习作temp] Issue131 V6 冲刺第2篇 艺术揭示社会潜在力量 第一次限时超过700字 [复制链接]

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发表于 2005-8-28 22:10:07 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society.
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I concede that arts--such as painting, music and literature, etc--can reveal certain ideas and ideologies of a society, both on the level of individual and society, and this point is especially true when it comes to the didactic function of art--to inculcate. By adopting the term of "otherwise" the speak, however, implies that without arts these ideas and impulses cannot manifest themselves, to which I would like to take exception. after all, reflecting the ideology of a society is far from the basic and fundamental function of art and there are other ways in which a society can express its ideas and impulses.

Admittedly, art reveals certain impulses and ideas of its society. After all, to indoctrinate individuals with some prevailing ideas and ideologies is just the didactic function of any dominant art works. For fitting examples, one needs to look no further than the grandiose style of Baroque buildings, which is designed to notice the supremacy of pontificate and then reflects the idea that religious force is dominant in that age. Moreover, art works are also utilized to reveal the impulses and emotion of individuals. In fact, as a result of a long-time development, self-expression has become an important function of art. By creating their own masterpiece, artists display their own strong emotions--such as love, hate, sadness, indignation, and so forth, which are also likely to reflect the overall thought of the mass. Consider the masterpiece of Gernica by Picasso as an example. As a reflection of the impulse of the society in that age, the painting is created to reveal the indignation about the invasion from foreigners as well as the sympathy about the suffering of Spanish people. All the examples above indicate that art is indeed an effective reflection of certain ideas and ideologies both on the level of individual and society.

However, by using the word "otherwise", the speaker implies that only through art works, can these impulses and ideas can manifest themselves, which, in my observation, goes against the experience of human history. After all, due to the lack of certain insight and craft, taking art as a expression is not easy for ordinary individuals, who are likely to take other more direct means to express their ideologies and impulses as a result. Let's back to the example Gernica again. For the ordinary citizens of Spain, it is through enrollment in the army rather than paintings that defend the dignity of their nation. In this case, the alternative way, in which people express themselves, is not only as effective as art works but also has certain more direct influence on the society. The rationale also applies to literature. Although many novels describe the malcontention among citizens in the eve of revolution in euro several centuries ago, it is the insurgence by the mass instead of a handful of art works, no matter how accurate and insightful about the situation in that age, overthrow the government by despot. In short, besides arts, there is always other direct and forceful reflections of societal ideas and impulses.

In the fundamental function of art, or its origin, lies another reason why I disagree with the speaker's claim. Since to reveal the ideas and impulses if far from the fundamental function of art, it is unfair for the speaker relegate such important task completely to artistic works and claims that without arts, these ideas and impulses will be hidden forever. In fact, art emerged in the history of human beings primarily as a production, whose function, similar with other products, is to satiate the human need--that is, aesthetic need in this matter. At the birth of art, it just manifest itself in the form of simple curves or blocks of colors, which, by all means, can be used as a reflection of societal ideologies--that is to say, as the derivative function of art, revealing the hidden ideologies and impulses cannot be overstated to the extant that only through the form of art, can certain social ideas manifest themselves.

In final analysis, although the speaker's claim that art works reflect certain ideas and impulses of a society bears some merits and reveals the function of didactics and self-expression by arts to some extent, it is premature for he or she to assert that without art, these ideas and impulses will be hidden forever. After all, we cannot relegate such important mission merely to art, which is difficult for ordinary ones to handle, especially considering the essentials function of art--that is, to provide us aesthetic enjoyment only.

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发表于 2005-8-28 22:48:49 |只看该作者
感觉水平比较难以再有提高,急盼高人指点
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发表于 2005-8-28 23:02:33 |只看该作者

这篇没写过,不过还是觉得不必太在意otherwise

没写过全文,写了提纲,大概看了下面这篇就有思路了,也是GTER上的,应该看过的吧。个人觉得有这篇文章Art类的基本上不用愁了。可以从历史的角度去写,以前是受到social的限制,因为受到宗教和government的资助为主。而之后就要求个性解放,从而可以反映个人内心了。然后讲讲这是一个进步的体现,我的提纲大概是这样的。因为不在我的高频之内,所以比较草率了。

这篇文章你应该看过的吧,我是打印出来精读了一下的,真的很有用。;P

快考了,加油!;P;P

730,太强了。练到一定程度了嘛!:lol

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发表于 2005-8-31 15:11:46 |只看该作者
Although art works can serve to reveal certain ideas and impluses in a society by its didactic nature, the function should not be exaggerated to the extent that only by art can these ideas be revealed.
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发表于 2005-8-31 15:32:52 |只看该作者
楼主,实在事太牛了!竟然在限时情况下写了700多,真是厉害啊!
我对艺术类型的十分头痛,限时根本完成不了!
我一定要来好好学习一下,麻烦楼主有空也去看看我的,
I218 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
等我看完了,再向楼主回报心得!

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发表于 2005-8-31 16:13:11 |只看该作者
The well-organized but pooly-reasoned argument suffers from several logic fallacies. All the recommendation is established on a undetailed, hence probably unrepresentative study, upon which the author further proposes his or her premature advertisement strategy. Later I will analyze one by one.

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发表于 2006-8-9 13:37:49 |只看该作者
我对着文章敲也敲不了那么多,18号就考了真不知道怎么办呢,一直在看A,I只过了一遍题目

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发表于 2006-8-9 14:08:21 |只看该作者
一修老贴你也翻.....

不过这人的文章是写的好~~

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发表于 2006-8-9 14:18:30 |只看该作者
我今天必须得把所有艺术的题目过一遍!!!
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发表于 2006-8-9 18:52:46 |只看该作者
急切问一下,照搂主这个思路可不可以,会不会算跑题啊

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我也要点灵气~~:)
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发表于 2006-8-9 19:29:08 |只看该作者
怎么没人回答我的问题啊
可以把这题理解成艺术不是唯一揭示社会隐藏观点的形式吗

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发表于 2006-8-9 19:55:09 |只看该作者
otherwise hidden
意思就是没有艺术就会被埋没的意思吧

这篇文章写的很赞的, 段间也有呼应, 没有跑题
首段尤其赞, 每一句话都直接可对应下文每段主题, 而且直接提出otherwise的理解问题, 是很多人不会这样去做的

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发表于 2006-8-10 17:17:38 |只看该作者
楼主再造福一下全人类吧.UP!
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