issue51 希望表太丢人了~~ >_<

virginia730UID: 208873

我这辈子的第一篇issue~~~哈哈。。。。希望不会太丢人~


     education being the most important issue of a society,plays the crucial part of teaching and inspiring the young,insuring them not only well informed in knowledge but able to think independently and soundly.facing such decisive matter,it is worthy to ponder that what should be done in order to make education most effective.traditionally, teachers are the center of educating, it is said a good teacher will make the most of a student.however, doubts arouse in present  time claiming  education can be truely effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the students' need and interests.

      As far as i am concerned, the prevailing idea that education should be student-based is indeed very reasonable.let us review the goal of education first.to put it in a simple way, teachers~parents ~students which are the main roles involved,their final aim along with educating is to get the students informed,cultivated,prepared for future carees and dreams.so it is impossibe to form a successful educational system without the participation and support of students.should a student be indifferent about learning,it will be futile to offer the most experienced teachers and eager parents.As techology should be rightly  applied to its certain field, education should be student-oriented according to one's specific needs and interests.only when a student learned that what is imparted to him is of  great need for his future plan and passionately  engrossed in such knowledge,can he work diligently and devotely. otherwise, however intrigued,the  education will become nothing but vain fantasies or mass production of same simple mind people.we should not oversimplify education as to "get something  done", but put students as the priority  and consider what is the best way to prepared every student  for a promising life ,moreover  how to get them involved to the most.

     however, it does not mean that we should blindly cater to every desire of the students. rudimental knowledge is indispensibel, certain discipline is also necessary. it is possible to encounter resists from kids   who are unwilling to make efforts.when facing these conditions, educations shows its other side that is compulsion,without which the effect of  teachers and parents can not be carried out,and schools will end up in  chaos. in order to satisfy the studentes, the result however will be counterproductive, students will be malcontent  for they learned nothing.

    education is somewhat a double-edged sword, with its clement side that tries  to win the support of students, be inferior to their need  and interest.On the other side, it should be relentlessly  strict in some case so that students be persistent  on their way persuing  success

[ Last edited by virginia730 on 2005-11-21 at 21:18 ]

neso124UID: 174451

MM应该才上大二吧，第一次写就那么好，除了一些拼写错误，文章的用词和句式是偶怎么学都不会的，比起我的烂文章，当哥哥的偶那叫一个汗啊！！！
education being the most important issue of a society,(把education放在plays前面好些吧)plays the crucial part of（play part in） teaching and inspiring the young,insuring them not only well informed in knowledge but able to think independently and soundly.facing such decisive matter,it is worthy to ponder that what should be done in order to make education most effective.traditionally, teachers are the center of educating, it is said a good teacher will make the most of a student.however, doubts (are) arouse(d) in present  time claiming  education can be truely effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the students' need(s) and interests.

      As far as i am concerned, the prevailing idea that education should be student-based is indeed very reasonable.let us review the goal of education first.to put it in a simple way, teachers~parents ~students which are the main roles involved,their final aim along with educating is to get the students informed,cultivated,prepared for future caree(r)s and dreams.so it is impossib(l)e to form a successful educational system without the participation and support of students.should a student be indifferent about learning,it will be futile to offer the most experienced teachers and eager parents.As techology should be rightly  applied to its certain field, education should be student-oriented according to one's specific needs and interests.only when a student learned that(去掉that) what is imparted to him is of  great need for his future plan and passionately  engrossed in such knowledge,can he work diligently and devotely. otherwise, however intrigued,the  education will become nothing but vain fantasies or mass production of same simple mind people.we should not oversimplify education as to "get something  done", but put students as the priority  and consider what is the best way to prepared (prepare) every student  for a promising life ,moreover  how to get them involved to the most.

     however, it does not mean that we should blindly cater to every desire of the students. rudimental knowledge is indispensibel,(indispensable) certain discipline is also necessary. it is possible to encounter resists from kids   who are unwilling to make efforts.when facing these conditions, educations(去掉s) shows its other side that is compulsion,without which the effect of  teachers and parents can not be carried out,and schools will end up in  chaos. in order to satisfy the student(e)s, the result however will be counterproductive, students will be malcontent  for they learned nothing.

    education is somewhat a double-edged sword, with its clement side that tries  to win the support of students, be inferior to their need  and interest.On the other side, it should be relentlessly  strict in some case so that students be persistent  on their way persuing (pursuing) success

[ Last edited by neso124 on 2005-11-21 at 23:27 ]

qiuzirumengUID: 199691

issue51 希望表太丢人了~~ >_<

我这辈子的第一篇issue~~~哈哈。。。。希望不会太丢人~


     education being the most important issue of a society (as the most important issue of a society可以放在后面), plays the crucial part of（in） teaching and inspiring the young, insuring them not only well informed in knowledge but able to think independently and soundly. facing such decisive matter, it is worthy to ponder that what should be done in order to make education most (More)effective. traditionally, teachers are the center of educating, it is said a good teacher will make the most of a student. however, doubts arouse in present  time claiming  education can be truely (truly)effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the students' need(needs) and interests.

      As far as i am concerned, the prevailing idea that education should be student-based is indeed very reasonable. let us review the goal of education first. to put it in a simple way, teachers~parents ~students which are the main roles involved, their final aim along with educating is to get the students informed, cultivated, prepared for future carees （careers）and dreams. so it is impossibe(impossible) to form a successful educational system without the participation and support of students. should a student be indifferent about learning, it will be futile to offer the most experienced teachers and eager parents. As techology (technology)should be rightly  applied to its certain field, education should be student-oriented according to one's specific needs and interests. (很多开头都没有大写和空格，以后注意一下哦)only when a student learned that what is imparted to him is of  great need for his future plan and passionately  engrossed in such knowledge, can he work diligently and devotely（devotedly）. otherwise, however intrigued, the  education will become nothing but vain fantasies or mass production of same simple mind people. we should not oversimplify education as to "get something  done", but put students as the priority  and consider what is the best way to prepared every student  for a promising life ,moreover  how to get them involved to the most.

     however, it does not mean that we should blindly cater to every desire of the students. rudimental knowledge is indispensibel(indispensable), certain discipline is also necessary. it is possible to encounter resists from kids   who are unwilling to make efforts. when facing these conditions, educations shows its other side that is compulsion, without which the effect of  teachers and parents can not be carried out, and schools will end up in  chaos. in order to satisfy the studentes(students), the result however will be counterproductive, students will be malcontent  for they learned nothing.

education is somewhat a double-edged sword, with its clement side that tries  to win the support of students, be inferior to their need  and interest. On the other side, it should be relentlessly  strict in some case so that students be persistent  on their way persuing (pursuing) success
赞一下，第一次就写那末好

[ Last edited by qiuzirumeng on 2005-11-22 at 10:46 ]

virginia730UID: 208873

非常感谢~~！！辛苦了
我会多练习下打字~~一避免打错打漏等低级错误。

下午得上课~~
晚上回来好好研究~~  ^ ^