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题目：How do movies or televison influence people's behevior?   use ressons and specific exemples to support your answer.

   After movies were created ,it has been a significant characteristic of the time, which influence various aspects of people's behevior, from some small details like hairstyle, clothes to some important decisions and behevior.
   First of all, movies play an important role in affecting some small details, represented by the hairstyle, clothes and so on.  Everyone could find some kind of clothes are popular every year and it differs from each other. However, when a movie star wear a new different sort of suit and this movie is welcome by audiences, the kind of suit is very possible to become the stylish clothes. The hairstyle meet some condition .It's usual that an actor has long hair so that many boys and girls follow him.
   Moreover ,movies influence how people think about some problems and what decisions people make. When people fail in some competition, they are encouraged by the spirit of an encouraging movie. As a result ,they can continue to work hard in order to win the match next time. Some movies have far-reached meaning which can educate people to follow the disciplines and not to break the laws. Through the movies ,people think deeply about the life, success and failure, which makes people confront freely with such problems as failure in an examination and unemplyment.
   In summary ,i think movies influence deeply all sorts of aspects of people's behavior, including the mode of clothes, the feature of hairstyle ,even methods of thinking and making decisions.

Faye-wangUID: 2147574

After movies were createdinvented ,it has been a significant characteristic of the time, which influence various aspects of people's beheviosr, from some small details like hairstyle, clothes to some important decisions and behevior.
   First of all, movies play an important role in affecting some small details, represented by the hairstyle, clothes and so on.  Everyone could find some kind of clotheswhich are popular every year and it they are differdiffers from each other. However, when a movie star wear a new different去掉differenta new fashion 也可以 sort of suit and this movie is welcome by audiences, the kind of suit is very possible to become the stylish clothes. The hairstyle meet some condition .It's usual that an actor has long hair so that many boys and girls follow him.例子显得太单薄了
  Moreover ,movies influence how people think about some problems and what decisions people make. When people fail in some competition, they are encouraged by the spirit of an encouraging movie. As a result ,they can continue to work hard in order to win the match next time. Some movies have far-reached meaning which can educate people to follow the disciplines and not to break the laws. Throughthroughout the movies ,people think deeply about the life, success and failure, which makes people confront freely with such problems as failure in an examination and unemplyment.
In summary ,i think movies influence deeply all sorts of aspects of people's behavior, including the mode of clothes, the feature of hairstyle ,even methods of thinking and making decisions.最后一段太模式化.再复杂一下句型..

整个文章字数少了点..基本分肯定能拿到了.

[ Last edited by Faye-wang on 2005-12-28 at 11:03 ]

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nebelUID: 190376

感觉谈的是movie&TV,是不是2个都提到一下呢。
第三段，讲的感觉有点乱，主题和里边的内容不是很搭配似的，可以谈谈一些具体的电影名字，什么励志的电影了，好的方面，也可以谈点差的。
一点拙见，大家互相进步