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savagettUID: 2134686

ISSUE161
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In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any woman or man as a hero. The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scurtiny will eventurally be diminished.

提纲：有保留的反对
首先，的确有名誉受损
1。媒体为了满足公众的好奇心，所以大量的报道公众人物。
但是，媒体还是有建立好的榜样，表彰英雄的
1。为了经济利益，读者观众喜欢看英雄。
2。为了教育目的
3。舆论监督，所以要严格报道
最怕的是题目分析的不好，大家帮忙看看~~

In the assertion, the speaker mentioned that our media is always focusing on public figures, especially about their flaws, gossips and privates. It’s not easy for them to keep their reputation. This is a trend we can't deny. Nevertheless, it's still possible for our society to regard someone to be heroes under the media coverage.

The reason for my agreement with the speaker is that in order to cater to the curiosity of public, media sometimes have to do intense scrutiny. Usually, those who enjoy high reputation are thought to be perfect person and far from the ordinary people. As for readers and audience, they just want to know more about them. Media help them take a closer look at those famous people. Since this kind of news is welcomed, media focus more on these highly respected person, particularly interest in their personal lives, flawed characters. Their reputation might be diminished. It's very common in this fierce media competition do anything to sell more newspapers , to gain a higher audience ratings.

Having recognized the fact that media scrutiny hurt reputation sometimes, in my view, media still try to find woman or man as a hero.

Firstly, for business reasons, media have to produce or erect heroes to earn more profits. Most of us have a dream that we can rise to fame at one night. It is almost impossible to realize so we are expecting to see other people do so, from an ordinary people to be a hero. Media did a good job at this point. There are a lot of reality shows on TV these days, for example, <American Idol> and <Survivor>.Young participants stood out from the show , and become the hero , enjoyed a great fame. Media succeed in dig the potential of ordinary people and make these virtues known to all . When they build a hero , they can then make huge profits from him or her.

Secondly , from a more positive view, media help to build heroes for our social to regard to some virtues which is lost. <Time> magazine always chooses persons of the year , through these good examples, media take advantage of their reputation to show virtues. Such virtues as integrity, brave , charitable is always found in media, in this way ,media magnify those neglected quality for us to regard and appreciate. Media, which convey culture, belief, is still try to find heroes to give a good influence on us , especially on next generation. If our media give up this , our social will turn out be cool and cruel.

And even for the intense scrutiny of media, the intention is not to ruin their reputation, it is the basic duty for media. One of the major function of mass media is supervision by public opinion. For those who gain more reputation ,they unconsciously enjoy more social resource. Our media is responsible to be a object witness to record what they do .If their behavior is not identified with their reputations, media should reveal it to public. This can help to form an equal and fairness social.
  
In sum , I still have a optimistic view on this issue. It's prevailing for media to ruin reputation of celebrities, politicians and other famous people. However, mass media never forget the responsible of them. To entertain or to educate their readers, audience, media is still try to find heroes, even through intense scrutiny.

[ 本帖最后由 staralways 于 2006-1-18 22:09 编辑 ]

@amy@UID: 209096

别急，一会儿来拍

@amy@UID: 209096

提纲：有保留的反对
首先，的确有名誉受损
1。媒体为了满足公众的好奇心，所以大量的报道公众人物。
但是，媒体还是有建立好的榜样，表彰英雄的
1。为了经济利益，读者观众喜欢看英雄。
2。为了教育目的
3。舆论监督，所以要严格报道
最怕的是题目分析的不好，大家帮忙看看~~

In the assertion, the speaker mentioned that our media is always focusing on public figures, especially about their flaws, gossips and privates. It’s not easy for them to keep their reputation. This is a trend we can't deny. Nevertheless, it's still possible for our society to regard someone to be[as就行了吧] heroes under the media coverage.

The reason for my agreement with the speaker is that in order to cater to the curiosity of public, media sometimes have to do intense scrutiny. Usually, those who enjoy high reputation are thought to be perfect person and far from the ordinary people. As for readers and audience, they just want to know more about them. Media help them take a closer look at those famous people. Since this kind of news is welcomed, media focus more on these highly respected person, particularly interest in their personal lives,[就说了两点，用and就行了吧] flawed characters. Their reputation might be diminished. It's very common in this fierce media competition do anything to sell more newspapers, to gain a higher audience ratings.

Having recognized the fact that media scrutiny hurt reputation sometimes, in my view, media still try to find woman or man as a hero.

Firstly, for business reasons, media have to produce or erect heroes to earn more profits. Most of us have a dream that we can rise to fame at one night. It is almost impossible to realize so we are expecting to see other people do so, from an ordinary people to be a hero. Media did [do] a good job at this point. There are a lot of reality shows on TV these days, for example, <American Idol> and <Survivor>.Young participants stood out from the show , and become the hero[这种算hero吗？] , enjoyed a great fame. Media succeed in dig the potential of ordinary people and make these virtues known to all . When they build[这个词好像不太合适，你确定吗] a hero , they can then make huge profits from him or her.

Secondly , from a more positive view, media help to build heroes for our social to regard to [to regard to？我没见过这种说法阿] some virtues which is lost. <Time> magazine always chooses persons of the year , through these good examples, media take advantage of their reputation to show virtues. Such virtues as integrity, brave , charitable is always found in media, in this way ,media magnify those neglected quality for us to regard and appreciate. Media, which convey culture, [and就够了] belief, is[去掉is] still try to find heroes to give a good influence on us , especially on next generation. If our media give up this , our social will turn out be cool and cruel.

And even for the intense scrutiny of media, the intention is not to ruin their reputation, it is the basic duty for media. One of the major function of mass media is supervision by public opinion. For those who gain more reputation ,they unconsciously enjoy more social resource. Our media is responsible to be a object witness to record what they do .If their behavior is not identified with their reputations, media should reveal it to public. This can help to form an equal and fairness social.
  
In sum , I still have a optimistic view on this issue. It's prevailing for media to ruin reputation of celebrities, politicians and other famous people. However, mass media never forget the responsible of them. To entertain or to educate their readers, audience, media is still try to find heroes, even through intense scrutiny.

我有几点意见：
（1）发到坛子上来之前一定要放到word里进行拼写检查，去掉所有的绿杠和红杠。
（2）标点符号前面不用留空格，后面要留一个空格。
（3）关于这个题目，虽然我没有写过，但我的理解是：因为媒体的巨大覆盖性，现在的情况是无论是hero或者是丑闻，媒体都能进行大幅度的报道，有时甚至会有些夸张，两者都能找到很多例子。而且不是有句俗语“苍蝇不叮无缝的蛋”，媒体也不可能任何人名声扫地。
（4）你的提纲列的有些乱，文章中间来个firstly，虽然我知道是说“另一个方面”的“第一点”，但整文看上去还是有点凌乱，你再整理整理。
（5）继续加油吧，呵呵，说的不对的地方请谅解。

savagettUID: 2134686

谢谢~
标点符号前面不用留空格，后面要留一个空格。这个我真的没注意过呢~~
关于那个hero的例子,我也一下没有想到更好的,媒体宣传的.........
再次感谢

gadbeesUID: 2522376

完全偏题了