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黑崎猫猫UID: 209414

issue 183
As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious.
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提纲
1、        开头
2、        作者混淆了两个基本概念，新问题的增多并不代表事情更复杂神秘
3、        很多例子证明事物的难以理解只是过程，问题终会得到解决
4、        很多时候，迷惑会持续相当长一段时间以致人们误以为事物变得更复杂。
5、        结尾
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     Does knowledge make things more comprehensible, or more complex and mysterious? In my view, feeling mysterious or complex is just a phase in the process of people cognizing things.
      Firstly, the speaker mistakes two basic concepts. As we acquire more knowledge, we will become more clear, what puzzle us are not the things we know, but the things we don't very sure about, which will gradually clear in the future. So it is human nature to feel complex or mysterious before we have a thoroughly and clearly perception, the feeling is inevitable in the process of people understanding the world.
     Secondly, I concede that the speaker's assertion is acceptable, but the speaker ignores that although people would feel mysterious or complex for a while, they would finally be clear about what happened or what it is. Feeling mysterious is only a phase of the process of people cognizing things. We can have many examples to certified it. In the past, people were mysterious about why people fall ill or dead, as time pass by, with the development of medicine research, we have saved many people's lives from illness and death. From the discovery of penicillin to the finish of the DNA group, from the accomplishment of periodic table to Stephen Hawking's theory of the big bang, human beings are endlessly make tremendous effort to explore ourselves and the world. Although new question will generate, which not means we leave the truth, to the contrary, we approach it.
     At the same time, we should be aware that sometimes the mysterious phase may take a too long time that people mistakenly think the things become more and more complex and unclear. For examples, when scientists failed to explain some physical phenomenon by only using the Newtonian mechanics at the 17th century, they don't know what happened till the invention of Einstein's theory of relativity telling the truth. We still can't foresee whether there are any theory can tell us the mistakes of Einstein’s in the future. The same things happened in 1918 when a strange contagion snatched away millions of people's lives. People thought it the punishment of god till several years ago an American scientist finally found the killer-the influenza virus which can't be scanned at 1918.
     While there are impermanent confusions and puzzles, great deal of facts still urge people insist on that our sustained effort on the exploration will be eventually more and more close to the truth.
      In sum, the statement mistakes two basic concepts, normally speaking, we only feel mysterious to what we are not feel sure about. On the other hand, feeling mysterious is only a phase of the process of people cognizing things. Eventually, things will become more comprehensible.

[ 本帖最后由 黑崎猫猫 于 2006-1-29 21:30 编辑 ]

天才之梦UID: 2159126

其他地方写的不错，除了最后一段。最后一段可以把这种总结换一种说法，和开头或者是文章中的语言太一样了，有种重复的感觉。再斟酌一下吧

lydia31358UID: 2155356

issue 183
As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious.
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提纲
1、        开头
2、        作者混淆了两个基本概念，新问题的增多并不代表事情更复杂神秘
3、        很多例子证明事物的难以理解只是过程，问题终会得到解决
4、        很多时候，迷惑会持续相当长一段时间以致人们误以为事物变得更复杂。
5、        结尾
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     Does knowledge make things more comprehensible, or more complex and mysterious? In my view, feeling mysterious or complex is just a phase in the process of people cognizing things.(开头简洁,8错)
      Firstly, the speaker mistakes two basic concepts. As we acquire more knowledge, we will become more clear, what puzzle us are not the things we know, but the things we don't very sure about, which will gradually clear in the future. So it is human nature to feel complex or mysterious before we have a thoroughly and clearly perception, the feeling is inevitable in the process of people understanding the world.(感觉有点像在挑逻辑错误,注意不要写成argu:)     
     Secondly, I concede that the speaker's assertion is acceptable, but the speaker ignores that although people would feel mysterious or complex for a while, they would finally be clear about what happened or what it is. Feeling mysterious is only a phase of the process of people cognizing things. We can have many examples to certified it. In the past, people were mysterious about why people fall ill or dead, as time passed by, with the development of medicine research, we have saved many people's lives from illness and death. From the discovery of penicillin to the finish of the DNA group, from the accomplishment of periodic table to Stephen Hawking's theory of the big bang, human beings are endlessly make tremendous effort to explore ourselves and the world. Although new question will generate, which not means we leave the truth, to the contrary, we approach it.
     At the same time, we should be aware that sometimes the mysterious phase may take a too long time that people mistakenly think the things become more and more complex and unclear. For examples, when scientists failed to explain some physical phenomenon by only using the Newtonian mechanics at the 17th century, they don't know what happened till the invention of Einstein's theory of relativity telling the truth. We still can't foresee whether there are any theory can tell us the mistakes of Einstein’s in the future. The same things happened in 1918 when a strange contagion snatched away millions of people's lives. People thought it the punishment of god till several years ago an American scientist finally found the killer-the influenza virus which can't be scanned at 1918.
     While there are impermanent confusions and puzzles, great deal of facts still urge people insist on that our sustained effort on the exploration will be eventually more and more close to the truth.
      In sum, the statement mistakes two basic concepts, normally speaking, we only feel mysterious to what we are not feel sure about. On the other hand, feeling mysterious is only a phase of the process of people cognizing things. Eventually, things will become more comprehensible.
感觉文章思路有点像中文的思维方式，不过也许我说得不对，猫猫同学自己想想吧:)
[ 本帖最后由 黑崎猫猫 于 2006-1-29 21:30 编辑

黑崎猫猫UID: 209414

我也觉得自己很中式思维呢

freud5027UID: 2165870

Does knowledge make things more comprehensible, or more complex and mysterious? In my view, feeling mysterious or complex is just a phase in the process of people cognizing things.

Firstly, the speaker mistakes two basic concepts. 刚看到混淆概念，感觉像驳论，不是立论的说。不过我能接受你的观点。As we acquire more knowledge, we will become more clear, what puzzle us are not the things we know, but the things we don't very sure about, which will gradually clear in the future. So it is human nature to feel complex or mysterious before we have a thoroughly and clearly perception, the feeling is inevitable in the process of people understanding the world.

Secondly, 这一段应该是上一段对于事物使我们迷惑部分的进一步分析，是不是用一个表示深层分析的连接词，比把上下两段分成两个分论点好点？这样逻辑感觉更清晰。还是我太挑剔了？I concede that the speaker's assertion is acceptable, but the speaker ignores that although people would feel mysterious or complex for a while, they would finally be clear about what happened or what it is. Feeling mysterious is only a phase of the process of people cognizing things. We can have many examples to certified it. In the past, people were mysterious about why people fall ill or dead, as time pass by, with the development of medicine research, we have saved many people's lives from illness and death. From the discovery of penicillin to the finish of the DNA group, from the accomplishment of periodic table to Stephen Hawking's theory of the big bang, human beings are endlessly make tremendous effort to explore ourselves and the world. Although new question will generate, which not means we leave the truth, to the contrary, we approach it.

At the same time, we should be aware that sometimes the mysterious phase may take a too long time that people mistakenly think the things become more and more complex and unclear. For examples, when scientists failed to explain some physical phenomenon by only using the Newtonian mechanics at the 17th century, they don't know what happened till the invention of Einstein's theory of relativity telling the truth. We still can't foresee whether there are any theory can tell us the mistakes of Einstein’s in the future. The same things happened in 1918 when a strange contagion snatched away millions of people's lives. People thought it the punishment of god till several years ago an American scientist finally found the killer-the influenza virus which can't be scanned at 1918.

While there are impermanent confusions and puzzles, great deal of facts still urge people insist on that our sustained effort on the exploration will be eventually more and more close to the truth.

In sum, the statement mistakes two basic concepts, normally speaking, we only feel mysterious to what we are not feel sure about. On the other hand, feeling mysterious is only a phase of the process of people cognizing things. Eventually, things will become more comprehensible.