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谢谢大家多多排砖。。不算跑题吧？？
嗯，很多地方我想表达的东西表达不出来，大家帮帮我改改句子，，谢谢了谢谢了。。
快要考了。。 写不完。。。5555
提纲：
观点：个人的伟大不仅可以由后代人来决定，同时也是能够被同时代来决定。
1.从历史的角度来看，我们现在所承认伟大人物中很多都是没有在他们那个年代所被认可的。科学界：Bruno，Dawin，艺术界：Van gogh.
2.导致这样的原因往往是他们的观点超越了同时代所能接受的界限。因此不能得到同时代人的认可。他们的伟大，往往要等到很多年以后，等人们的水平，认识足以意识到他们的伟大的时候，才能得到公认。comet Halley.并且确实从后人的角度会更加全面地看到一个人的伟大指出。
3.但是同时，也有很多伟大的人物在当时就有很高的声誉，他们的伟大被人们所接受的。Newton, Einstein.因为他们的成就很容易迅速对大众所接受，或者被实验所验证，并带来对生活的直接影响，这些伟大都在他们同时代的人就看到，因此能够被同时代的人所决定，而不需要等候人来评价。
4.而现在社会的发展，我们可以看到个人的伟大越来越容易得到同时代的人的认可。Nobel prize。就是用来给与同时代的伟大人物的认可。这是一个好的趋势，因为要成为伟大的人物，需要艰苦的努力，如果努力的结果不能得到认可，可能会打击人们的信念，丧失进取的动力。
结论：伟大是可以被同时代的人决定的，只要不是远远脱离了人们实际需求和高于他们的认识水平。现在社会的发展，使得越来越多的人能得到及时的认可，对他们也更加的公正。
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The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
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The greatest individuals, as it defines, refer to those who make great contributions in the realm of science, humanities, or social science. These contributions, which distinguish celebrities from normal people, may be come to be realized in their own times, or may be recognized by the public only several centuries later. Whether the greatness of individuals can be decided by their contemporaries or just only by those who lived after them, largely depends on whether their contributions can be wildly come to exemplify great influences on public immediately. I firmly believe that we should acknowledge the greatness of those people as soon as possible for the sake of justice to those people's endeavor.

If we cast a look back at the long history of human beings, it is easily to identify that the majority of celebrities we concede now were seldom recognized by their contemporaries. In the realm of science, for example, Bruno was sentenced to death as his new idea was conflict with his contemporaries. Darwin, who discovered the theory of evolution, outraged the religious members and even the public. In the literature area, Van Gogh, a greatest painter, came to be reverenced only after his death. Such situations are also quite common in all other realms such as in philosophy, humanity and so forth.

The reason behind these phenomenon is that those celebrities' ideas, conceptions, cognitive abilities transcend their times. Their greatness is not fully exhibited to the public, or their ideas are beyond their contemporaries’ ability to understand or accept it. Bruno, Copernicus, and Darwin are all such examples. Halley, a great physicist, was also not appreciated by his contemporaries. By carefully and long time observing the orbit of comets, and complex calculation, Halley conclude that some comets are just ordinary objects that run around the sun periodically, and forecasted that the comet Halley, which was named by his name, will come to near the earth again 76 years later. His great discovery was not conceded by the public until 35 years later after his death. The comet Halley’s reappearance approved Halley’s forecast.

While it is true that in many cases that those who live after the celebrities may have a better and thorough estimation of their greatness, their contemporaries are also have the abilities to evaluate their contributions. There are also some great individuals who were recognized by the society in their own time. Newton, for instance, was the most outstanding physicist in his time, and regarded as the founder of classic mechanics. Albert Einstein, who wrote 3 great papers that had profound influence on modern physics when he was only 25 years old in 1905, was known all around the world in his time. Those great individuals’ contributions have immediate influence on people’s live or the contemporary science granted their greatness be recognized at their own time.

In fact, along with the development of mass media and the increase in people’s cognitive faculty, nowadays’ celebrities are more easily to be recognized by the public. Nobel Prize, which is offered to those who make great contributions to the society, is actually a sign of public’s more awareness to those great individuals. This is really a good trend in some extent. To make an outstanding achievement, it requires one to work diligently and persistently. Thus, those celebrities deserve public’s reverence in their own time. For most of people, it really discourages one’s confidence without the public’s recognition of their contributions and greatness.

Nevertheless, people in our times should feel lucky for that the public are willing to and able to recognize their greatness. As the public’s ability increases, it is sure that the greatness of individual will be more easily recognized by their contemporaries.

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The greatest individuals, as it defines, refer to those who make great contributions in the realm of science, humanities, or social science. These contributions, which distinguish celebrities from normal people, may be come to be realized in their own times, or may be recognized by the public only several centuries later. Whether the greatness of individuals can be decided by their contemporaries or just only by those who lived after them, largely depends on whether their contributions can be wildly come to exemplify great influences on public immediately. I firmly believe that we should acknowledge the greatness of those people as soon as possible for the sake of justice to those people's endeavor.

If we cast a look back at the long history of human beings, it is easily to identify that the majority of celebrities we concede now were seldom recognized [venerated] by their contemporaries. In the realm of science, for example, Bruno was sentenced to death as his new idea was [去掉was] conflict with his contemporaries. Darwin, who discovered the theory of evolution, outraged the religious members and even the public. In the literature area, Van Gogh, a greatest painter, came to be reverenced only after his death. Such situations are also quite common in all other realms such as in philosophy, humanity and so forth.

The reason behind these phenomenon is that those celebrities' ideas, conceptions, cognitive abilities transcend their times. Their greatness is not fully exhibited to the public, or their ideas are beyond their contemporaries’ ability to understand or accept it. Bruno, Copernicus, and Darwin are all such examples. Halley, a great physicist, was also not appreciated by his contemporaries. By carefully and long time observing the orbit of comets, and complex calculation, Halley conclude [concluded] that some comets are just ordinary objects that run around the sun periodically, and forecasted that the comet Halley, which was named by his name, will [would] come to near the earth again 76 years later. His great discovery was not conceded by the public until 35 years later after his death. The comet Halley’s reappearance approved Halley’s forecast.

While it is true that in many cases that those who live after the celebrities may have a better and thorough estimation of their greatness, their contemporaries are also have the abilities to evaluate their contributions. There are also some great individuals who were recognized by the society in their own time. Newton, for instance, was the most outstanding physicist in his time, and regarded as the founder of classic mechanics. Albert Einstein, who wrote 3 great papers that had profound influence on modern physics when he was only 25 years old in 1905, was known all around the world in his time. Those great individuals’ contributions have immediate influence [impact] on people’s live or the contemporary science granted their greatness be recognized at their own time.

In fact, along with the development of mass media and the increase [upswing] in people’s cognitive faculty, nowadays’ celebrities are more easily to be recognized by the public. Nobel Prize, which is offered to those who make great contributions to the society, is actually a sign of public’s more awareness to those great individuals. This is really a good trend in [to] some extent. To make [attain] an outstanding achievement, it requires one to work diligently and persistently. Thus, those celebrities deserve public’s reverence in their own time. For most of people, it really discourages one’s confidence without the public’s recognition of their contributions and greatness.

Nevertheless, people in our times should feel lucky for that the public are willing to and able to recognize their greatness. As the public’s ability increases, it is sure that the greatness of individual will be more easily recognized by their contemporaries.

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