求助~~~ issue51 超高频 超复杂~~

hokuto8UID: 2188958

多亏了olivemm的求拍贴，我终于写出了自己的第一篇:D~~~
虽然比我的argu水平差远了，但是，写出了就是胜利:victory:~~~

感觉自己的文章轻飘飘的，没有具体的事例压阵，没办法。
发上来，大家拍~~~~:lol

还有，我现在真正体会到帮别人改文章的好处，所以欢迎求拍的人。
但是希望是高频题，无论是argu还是issue。

这个贴是我的argu，下面贴的是issue，觉得我水平可以的，就留下链接。
我的argu：
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2


issue 11  应该建立全球性大学解决社会问题吗？

1）好想法~~
2）但是不实际。学生无法达成一致，没有能力找到解决方法，也没能力确实解决问题
3）参与国家之间的差别和矛盾会造成问题，违反初衷。


Is it necessary and effective for all nations to help support the development  of a global university? This argument confirms it, because it is designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems. But I doubt whether such an university could play its role.

Admittedly, establishing such an university reflects the nice desire of sponsors to deal with the social problems. Since the internet presents itself, it knit the world together in a web of information and phone lines, and then the trend of globalization drives the world's economy more and more blossomy。 At the same time, many global problems attract people's attention, such as the environment pollution, the terrorism and the indigence of energy. If we can develop a global university with the support from different countries, and centralize elite all over the world, and then give them the best education to make sure them of the ability to solve the most persistent social problems, does it not promise the human being a better future?

However, the reality is ruthless, that just can be a fantasy. The current world is so complicated that such an university cannot cultivate the eligible students, who are able to solve the persistent social problems. As a global university, its students come form different countries, and then they are raised within various backgrounds. Someone may be Christian, someone may believe in Islam, and someone may be atheists. Communicating with people having diverse thoughts does broaden one’s insight, but I wonder whether or not such people can make an agreement on the same problem at most time. Taking the feminism as an example, students form Europe and America may highly praise it, but how about the students from Moslem? Absolutely they will oppose it. In addition, even students can agree with each other on some most persistent social problem around the world, will their solutions work? They are not only lacking of enough practical social experience to bring such a solution, but also devoid of the economic and political power to achieve it. Furthermore, considering that some problems concern the advantages and disadvantages of manifold countries, it is just seems to impossible for student to succeed.

On the other hand, thinking over this suggestion more deeply, where is divergence, there must be conflict. A global university supported by manifold countries with various values, will be dominated by some specific countries. May be due to the funds they provide, may be due to the majority of students coming form these countries, these countries can determine the ideology of the university to satisfy their own benifits. Afterwards, it will aggravate the inequality between the developed countries and the developing countries, which has already been a serious global problem. And that's just so satirical, considering the original purpose to establish such an university.

In conclusion, developing a global university is just an unreal conceit. In order to solve the social problems, we must look for other ways. May be promoting the culture intercourse will improve the comprehension among countries.


大家随便拍~~~~:lol

runningpiggyUID: 194977

首先我得说的是，I51是相当简单的一篇Issue了，教育类的文章从来都是不难写的，你觉得写不来只是因为平时练得少。

如果一开始就不限时，那么就应该好好得把文章写出来，不要写到一半就不写，不管在这中间会遇到什么问题，怎么难以解决，都要坚持下来。

例子的方面，如果可以，尽量还是要用一些，熟记一些名人的例子，不一定很多，因为很多都能相通的，一个例子在很多很多地方都能用上，变化只在于你怎么去阐述这个例子。

hokuto8UID: 2188958

嗯，谢谢斑竹指教~~~~~

那好，我今天就拼到底，一定把那半途而废的I51写完~~~~~~~

我不会勉强去记例子，而是在要用时，就去查一些，写一些，记一些，再深入挖掘一些，能这样得到、掌握多少例子就算多少，一点一点来总比光盯着电脑发呆强~~~

果然，写出了第一篇后，整个人的精神状态大大提高了呢~~~~还有8天多一点就考，但没有前两天那么恐惧的感觉了~~~~~仿佛再努力一点就完全可以准备好~~~~