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130. Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
May spending a great amount of time practicing sports bring a bright future to children as some people concern? Some people do去掉 believe so because建议和后面句子合起来. Nowadays, we are emerged in a media world that去掉 full of high earning stars, especially famous athletes. Some handsome这个词不合适,毕竟是运动员,特点不是handsome,用world known之类的 football player, say, Beckham David是David Beckham is admired worldwide and become a millionaire because of sports. Yet, such phenomenon is misleading for the media seldom publicize the negative effect of being an athlete. I strongly claim that the disadvantage for children to spend extraordinary用excessive time on sports for去掉 outweighs its advantage.
The major reason contributing to my declaration is that if children are deprived of most of their time for learning other skills, like knowledge and communication capability, they may encounter去掉 用suffer a lot of hardship in the rest of their life the whole life去掉 once they can not succeed as a famous athlete. Although we learn from TV that sport stars earn a great deal of money, rarely do we take further consideration of those who have spent their whole life struggling for sports but never achieve their goals. Since these people are trained as athletes from 加the very young age, they spend less time than ordinary children in school work. 加Therefore Often they end up with low knowledge level and can not enter university. Once they fail in their sport career, they find it hard to start up another job that rightly meet the society’s demand.多余
Another factor buttressing my statement lies in that exceedingly large amount of sport training is detrimental to our health. Sometimes it may even lead to handicap because of accidents 加which constantly happen during practicing. Childhood is a period when children‘s bodies are undergoing great physical development. Nevertheless, if not being protected appropriately, their bodies can be damaged easily. Case in point, WangMing, a child trained as a basketball player living in my neighborhood, unfortunately broke his arm at the age of 12. It is really a pity that he can never achieve 换成chase his dream as a famous sportsman. What’s more, he cannot even live an ordinary life as other people enjoying an ordinary but happiness’ life.不用
All in all, despite most people consider a job as a sport player would bring high salary不合适,用income as well as building up one’s body strength; it is far from true when taking into account of the cost opportunities. Besides, if practicing goes too far, it will even ruin a child’s life considering accidents that may occur.
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