5T互助小组 第六组 专用贴

lyhcynthiaUID：2178647

原帖由 安婧 于 2006-4-11 00:49 发表
感谢gpctext斑竹，还记得安婧。这个小丫头被感动了。

今天背一个LIST看几页帖子，四个LIST过去，帖子居然还没有看完！而且数量成上升趋势！我也要努力做题，争取在组里面题问题！和大家一起进步！

PS：马上 ...

你们什么学校阿？ 体育还这么重视？ 是不是身体都特别强壮的？ 我体育一塌糊涂。。。;P  反正每次奖学金评定都是体育让我很头大。。。。。。

lyhcynthiaUID：2178647

原帖由 安婧 于 2006-4-11 00:54 发表
越来越喜欢我们组了！

赞一个，睡觉去！明天早点起来，背单词，上课，做课题报告，做题，精听，背单词。恩，安婧加油！大家加油！

PS：貌似明天/今天要写作文了。我才刚刚告别AW啊：（

赞一个，小安很有斗志的说！！！ :lol 值得大家学习阿，，， 唉。。。年轻真好：）

lyhcynthiaUID：2178647

原帖由 cannylee0621 于 2006-4-11 08:18 发表
大清早起来上网看看组里大伙说啥了，
昨天十一点熄灯以后开应急灯补经济法作业到一点
从复习托福以后，基本都是这时候写作业的，呼呼
怎么能把大白天的宝贵时间给别的学科呢?haha
今天这节经济法准备逃课，做 ...

我觉得题目做到一定的数量其实就不需要在题海战术了，因为其实就是保持状态， 分析过去的错题就可以了， 我觉得我到后来的时候提高不大。 听得材料永远不过时， 你过去的听到过的都是好的资源，可以反复听， 我特别喜欢TOEFL 的听力，太棒了。 很地道！真题如果年头久的， 你就分专项做题目。

nostrumUID：2124189

斑斑好负责，多谢多谢
同主题写作偶木占上沙发:(
不过还好还好:)

[ 本帖最后由 nostrum 于 2006-4-11 10:59 编辑 ]

cannylee0621UID：2177843

这是第二篇自己写的文章，也不求大家帮着改，如果有时间看看帮着提提意见吧
觉得写得最差的是开头。……谢谢啦
It is generally believed that the members of our society make contributions through which we get many benefits of being more comfortable and convenient .There has been, however, a heated debate that who contributes more to our society, the scientists, or the artists? Even though it is not easy to choose, I would like support the idea that the scientists make more contributions to our society .
   
Undeniablely , the artists are the significant elements of the members in the world for the simple reason that through their works , such as paintings, sculptures and music, they broaden our horizons and deepen our insights. Compared with these esthetical works that give us mental influence, however, those scientific achievements are more beneficial to us in materials aspect.

Hardly can we ignore that the convenience and comfort the scientists give us. Without Edison, we could not enjoy the happy hour after sun set. Without Wright Brother, we would spend more than eighty days to travel around the world. Without Bell, we might still communicate with our friends who live far from us by sending letters. There are numerous scientists whose inventions benefit us greatly. That each step they make may mean a big leap in improving the quality of our life.

In addition to those technological developments we can really feel in daily life ,a great number of achievements the scientists make actually increase the knowledge of ourselves and the world around us. For instance, Darwin’s works about nature lead us to the mysterious world. Einstein’s researches fill up the blank of our common sense about universe. All of these improvements may not obvious, yet they do have fundamental influences on our society .Such scientist have been devoting their whole life to getting rid of our ignorance and conveying us more information about the world.

From my perspective, the impact that scientists have had on our daily life and society in general, is undeniable, it will become even greater as modern technologies become more and more indispensable and so rapid that virtually all of us cannot live without them.

lyhcynthiaUID：2178647

原帖由 cannylee0621 于 2006-4-11 10:58 发表
这是第二篇自己写的文章，也不求大家帮着改，如果有时间看看帮着提提意见吧
觉得写得最差的是开头。……谢谢啦
It is generally believed that the members of our society make contributions through which  ...

写的不错。　喜欢你的第三段特别有力量的说！每个段落再分明点就好了。　不错！:victory:

lyhcynthiaUID：2178647

大家踊跃发言，下午我值班，　一边写论文一边帮助大家：）来者不拒！哈哈哈～～～

[ 本帖最后由 lyhcynthia 于 2006-4-11 11:54 编辑 ]

xiaobian731UID：2140176

恩,我理解斑斑们的辛苦,不管怎样,我会支持你们组的~

lyhcynthiaUID：2178647

原帖由 xiaobian731 于 2006-4-11 12:58 发表
恩,我理解斑斑们的辛苦,不管怎样,我会支持你们组的~

听到你这句话很欣慰，:)　你也要好好加油哦！:D还有给你解答问题的话我们几个人分析问题的出发点可能都不一样，但是都是解决方法，你参考着看，我觉得总结非常重要。

nostrumUID：2124189

本组牛人颇多哈，但是偶小菜也想发表一下个人意见哈，抛砖引玉啦

It is generally believed that the members of our society make contributions through which we get many benefits of being more comfortable and convenient .（这句话读起来狂累人噢，而且我有点看不懂所以不好给你改）There has been, however, a heated debate that who contributes more to our society, the scientists, or the artists?（我不喜欢there be打头的句子，给你该下a heated debate which focuses on the more contributions for our society between the scientists and  artists has attracted the public’s attentions nowadays . ） Even though it is not easy to choose, I would like support the idea that the scientists make more contributions to our society .
  Undeniablely , the artists are the significant elements of the members in the world for the simple reason that through their works , such as paintings, sculptures and music, they broaden our horizons and deepen our insights. Compared with these esthetical works that give us mental influence, however, those scientific achievements are more beneficial to us in materials aspect.

Hardly can we ignore that the convenience and comfort the scientists give us. (感觉这句话哈，有点突兀)Without Edison, we could not enjoy the happy hour after sun set. （没有建立二者的明显的因果关系，说的详细点，因为没有灯的时候我们也是很快乐的哈）Without Wright Brother, we would spend more than eighty days to travel around the world. Without Bell, we might still communicate with our friends who live far from us by sending letters. There are numerous scientists whose inventions benefit us greatly. That each step they make may mean a big leap in improving the quality of our life.

In addition to those technological developments we can really feel in daily life ,a great number of achievements the scientists make actually increase the knowledge of ourselves and the world around us. For instance, Darwin’s works about nature lead us to the mysterious world. Einstein’s researches fill up the blank of our common sense about universe. All of these improvements may not obvious, yet they do have fundamental influences on our society .Such scientist have been devoting their whole life to getting rid of our ignorance and conveying us more information about the world.

From（from or in? I ma not sure） my perspective, the impact that scientists have had on our daily life and society in general, is undeniable, it will become even greater as modern technologies become more and more indispensable and so rapid that virtually all of us cannot live without them.
8错8错，我的意见有不对的地方请大家批评指正哈
有个疑问，托福作文理的例子用名人好吗？我记得以前看过个帖子说不要用名人的好，大家指点下

[ 本帖最后由 nostrum 于 2006-4-11 13:49 编辑 ]

lyhcynthiaUID：2178647

原帖由 nostrum 于 2006-4-11 13:44 发表
本组牛人颇多哈，但是偶小菜也想发表一下个人意见哈，抛砖引玉啦

It is generally believed that the members of our society make contributions through which we get many benefits of being more comforta ...

ｎｏｓｔｒｕｍ　ＲＰ　没的说！在帮助他人的时候也在提高自己的ＲＰ。　这种精神需要我们大家发扬下去。　赞一个！:handshake