我的作文--音乐是否重要(GTER的同期写作,迟到了)

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Far long ago our ancestor used music as what could amuse themselves when laboring. During a long time about thousands of years developed, music has seized hearts of people who came from nearly every status. Nowadays it attracts more and more musicians probing its essence. In my opinion, that music never fades because of the following reasons.

The main reason to support my view, what is also universally acknowledged, is that music could make audience relaxed. People listening to music, in most sense, are due to the increasing social pressure. Many psychologist assert that music, especially light one has the function of leading a calm and tranquil sense. That’s why people under the intensive mood are long for the music. The first thing after work is to put on stereo and aptly enjoy what music relieves them.

What is also noticeable is the music’s special abstruse meaning. This exists much more in classical music than in other ones. For example, experts discovered that Bach’s sonata surprisingly stimulates children’s intelligence as well as adults’ fountain of ideas. And in some resound music, a lot of motivations that represent the mood such as happiness, sadness, imagination is dependent on one’s age, country, culture, background characteristics and so on. Namely, your view to a music or even one sole melody endlessly changes by growing older.

Last but not least, we should not- although it has been forgotten by many people-deny that music can stride over the boundary of two countries so that it likes an ambassador who conveys mutual culture with each other. Some times we could read from a piece of music the history of a country, the life of a musician, or, believe or not, the fierce confliction of a battle. It records the incidents more vividly than a history book does. Doesn’t the music one of the best treasures of the society?

Thanks to the reason presented above, I can surely get the conclusion that music is fairly important whenever it is.

时间:不知道啦断断续续写的,我发觉一写快就不行,还是慢慢来.
最后一个礼拜攻作文和语法!

[ 本帖最后由 雷鼠 于 2006-5-9 14:33 编辑 ]

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作文题目是

169. People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

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UP 请大家看看呢

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前两句chinglish的味道比较重
观点不错,第3个观点很汗颜啊.

到这个时候了注意背数量自己的常用写法.好好加油吧

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谢谢BZ  还有什么修改意见么