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[作文] 笑来老师对“作文题目预测”的澄清 [复制链接]

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发表于 2002-10-4 12:58:46 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
I DID single out 15 TWE topics, but please do [B]NOT[/B] regard them as alleged prophecy. We are all capable of researching, and could draw some inferences from several latest rubrics. Nevertheless, each and every one of us might and almost must have reached distinctive version. And nobody dare or is able to say he KNOW which topic will be the next coming rubric. In fact, such proclaim usually is not only unnecessary, but also unreliable. Even though I have my own judgment, I would rather call those 15 topics the Representative Sample.

The fact is, our responses to TWE topics typically fall into three distinctive Essay Types: 1) Simple Expository Essay; 2) Compare / Contrast Essay; 3) Argumentative Essay. The Representative Sample includes 7 argumentative essay topics, 5 Compare/Contrast essay topics, and 3 Simple Expository essay topics respectively.

The most obvious difference between TWE and other kinds of Writing Test we have experienced is that we will respond to the rubric that we have already known – anyway, it is among the publicized official topic pool. On this wise, we would better take full advantage of the opportunity of prearrangement. However, it is absolutely unrealistic for most of examinees to write each and every topic in the pool before the test date, for we all have limited time, which ETS knows unerringly – that's why ETS arrange those topics in to jumble, rather than put them with order.

Now, as is clearly stated, the original purpose of The Representative Sample is for the sake of saving time. Those prudent test takers should best discuss those topics in detail, and try to think [B]ACADEMICALLY[/B]. Once those sample topics are well discussed, the rest of the topics in the official pool are ready to grasp. In fact those topics could fortunately be categorized either by type, genre, theme, or by key words, they are all similar.

Here are some simple suggestions:
1.        The more [B]logically and reasonably[/B] the idea is organized, the more syntactic and grammar errors are acceptable, that is, the less those errors affect the final score.
2.        [B]Do not[/B] use over-complex sentence structure. 2 or 3 long sentences to show the ability of syntactic skill are enough. Do [B]NOT[/B] split the subject and the corresponding predicate too often, or make them too distant. After all our writings are expected to be clear, not to be confused.
3.        [B]Do not[/B] use common transition words such as "firstly, secondly, finally" at the beginning of the paragraph. Actually these devices are used to link sentences within the paragraph. [B]Do[/B] connect your paragraph with hard devices such as "repetition", "logic order" etc. [B]Do[/B] restate your opinion at the end of essay, which means a well enclosed structure.
4.        [B]Do[/B] keep sentences in [B]balance[/B], especially after THAN, AS, perhaps you need add the word THAT OF/ THOSE OF…
5.        [B]Do[/B] diversify [B]VERBS[/B] [argue; maintain; claim; believe… NOT I think…, they think…, and others think…] and [B]ADJECTIVES[/B] [important, essential, indispensable…]; but DO [B]NOT[/B] diversify [B]NOUN PHRASES[/B].
6.        Be careful when using phrasal verbs and idioms. Use them [B]unless[/B] you are sure about their usages.
7.        Replace "YOU"; "YOUR" with "WE"; "OUR";
8.        Do [B]NOT[/B] use cliches as arguments.

Good luck, may God bless you all.

and the url below might be useful: [official topics categorized by key words]
http://www.xiaolai.net/TWE/989563wt.html


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据说这世界80%的人是疯子;剩下的20%已经被关起来了…… ^5^
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发表于 2002-10-4 19:31:51 |只看该作者
啊!谢谢你呀。。。。老师。。。。^_^
走自己的路,穿别人的鞋,让别人找去吧。。。。。:p

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发表于 2002-10-4 22:32:22 |只看该作者
Thanks a lot:)
Good Luck!
Give me a smile .
Don't be unhappy.
The bright world .The bright heart.
Yes ,that's just ^U^!!!

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发表于 2002-10-5 18:13:01 |只看该作者
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我说人生哪,如果赏过一回痛哭淋漓的风景,写一篇杜鹃啼血的文章,与一个赏心悦目的人错肩,也就够了。不要收藏美、钤印美,让美随风而逝。生命最清醉的时候,是将万里长江视为一匹白绢,裂帛。(简桢)

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发表于 2002-10-6 08:20:04 |只看该作者
请问那些涂了黄色的是什么?
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发表于 2002-10-6 08:59:35 |只看该作者
已经考过的。
据说这世界80%的人是疯子;剩下的20%已经被关起来了…… ^5^

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发表于 2002-10-6 15:35:02 |只看该作者
thx!!

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发表于 2002-10-7 01:19:01 |只看该作者
最初由 笑来 发表
[B]已经考过的。 [/B]

已经考过的就不会再考了吗?
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发表于 2002-10-7 08:14:10 |只看该作者
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发表于 2002-10-8 02:13:27 |只看该作者
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怎么笑来老师不来呀!?!?
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发表于 2002-10-8 02:15:20 |只看该作者
来自学生习作修改。[]内的文字是修改内容

WE VS. YOU

As far as our personal or everyday life is concerned, there are a great deal of things we have to do. For example, when you are ill, you must go to the doctor’s and take medicine. [YOU-->WE/US; Keep alert! We/our/us by definition include you and I.] Few of us like the taste of medicine, but we have no choice but to take them. Why? It’s good for your[our] health. Without a healthy body, you can[could] do nothing. Getting up early, doing physical exercises, do not smoking or drinking may sound[seem/be] uncomfortable [to you删掉], but they really benefit [yourself删掉].


We should sometimes do things that we do not enjoy doing. [A good life should, among other things, be like what you want it to be. Yet, the society is anything but that.

A happy life ought to be what we want it to be, yet that simply seldom happens. 前面是we, 后面就变成you了。we 包括you and me;这也是我一再提醒要把you/your换成we/our/us的原因。
据说这世界80%的人是疯子;剩下的20%已经被关起来了…… ^5^

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发表于 2003-10-10 19:37:19 |只看该作者
谢谢笑来老师~~~~这些你在课上都给我们讲过了呀,受益匪浅:)关于十月份的twe请指点一下吧,thank you very much!!!

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发表于 2003-10-10 19:40:44 |只看该作者
对对,关于10月份的twe请指点一下,顺带说一句,我也曾经是笑来老师的学生~~:)
有人说我灌水,我在此郑重声明,本疯子从不灌水!!如有此事,纯属误会。现在沦为日本留学中
怎么说大家才能明白,我虽是个文明的疯子,也不好惹D~

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发表于 2003-10-10 21:27:39 |只看该作者
欢迎笑来!!!!
正犯愁twe呢!
还一个礼拜了,您的15篇范文已经背了,感觉自己主要问题是
1.没有素材,阅历不够
2.时间太短,不知道能不能发挥出来
NEVER NEVER GIVE UP.
男人要凶悍,女人要彪捍
这句话我妈都知道!
Por una cabeza
de un noble potrillo
que justo en la raya
afloja al llegar,
y que al regresar
parece decir:
No olvidé, hermano,
vos sabés, no hay que jugar.
Por una cabeza,
metejón de un día
de aquella coqueta
y burlona mujer,
que al jurar sonriendo
el amor que está mintiendo,
quema en una hoguera
todo mi querer.

Por una cabeza,
todas las locuras.
Su boca que besa,
borra la tristeza,
calma la amargura.
Por una cabeza,
si ella me olvida
qué importa perderme
mil veces la vida,
para qué vivir.

Cuántos desengaños,
por una cabeza.
Yo jugué mil veces,
no vuelvo a insistir.
Pero si un mirar
me hiere al pasar,
sus labios de fuego
otra vez quiero besar.
Basta de carreras,
se acabó la timba.
¡Un final reñido
ya no vuelvo a ver!
Pero si algún pingo
llega a ser fija el domingo,
yo me juego entero.
¡Qué le voy a hacer..!

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发表于 2003-10-10 22:04:48 |只看该作者

miss xiaolai

感谢笑来,我作文的了满分

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