5.30 上海 F1 1000 MS-EE 全自费 Rejected [复制链接]

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发表于 2006-5-31 20:01:20 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

昨天从上海回来，心情已经很不好了，所以今天上来发个签经，大家帮忙讨论一下，然后准备二签。

我个人背景：国内本科，EE，去读MASTER，自费，去读的学校和国内的学校都非常一般。
去年毕业，没工作，在家一年。

先按指纹。
me: hello, sir
VO: what are you doing right now?
me:(一楞) I have no job now, but I did an internship for half a year. I have the certificate, do you want to see it?
VO: ok.
me: （递过去实习证明，还有那个单位的support letter 还有人力资源的主管的名片）
I want to go to the *** University to study the MSCES program, which focus on Computer hardware and software systems, specialized in embedded systems and DSP(digital signal processing).
VO: what do your parents do?
me: (没听清)pardon?
VO: what do your parents do? parents.
Me: my father is a Mechanical Engineer, and my mother is the director of financial department.
VO: what is the company?
me: my mother's company is ******company.(我一下忘了我父亲的公司的名称了，于是赶紧拿在职证明)I have the certificate, do you want to see it?
VO:ok, give me.
me:(赶紧递过去，看VO不吭声，就主动说） I also have the bank statement.
VO: ok, give me
me: （把所有关于资金的东西递上去了，有银行的存款证明和股票上的资产证明，还有房产证）
VO: (看我的银行证明，突然发现了什么，抓起我的I20给我看，指着学习的时间问)why is 36 months?
me: the university usually sign longer time, but most student can finish the MSCES program in 18 months.(不过，这时候有点紧张，然后就忘了拿和学校讨论过的学习时间的EMAIL给VO了,也没有把那个program一共只需要15000美元的学费的钱仔细算给VO听)
VO: （摇头,然后在电脑上点了很多东西，而且手上指着我的银行的存款一项一项的，我自己估计，他是用电脑里的计算器算我的银行存款的总和）
me: （感觉不太好了，想转移话题）the university give me two supportletters,do you want to see ?
VO: they give you money?
me: no
VO: no, I do not need it.
VO:(算完银行的钱)you do not have enough money to study. you have another cetificate?
me: I have enough money because you know my mather have stock investment and there also are lots of money.
VO: （仔细盯着股票的资产证明看，一共有12万多）
VO：（拿起一张银行证明指给我）where is the money from?
me: one part is from my parents income, and another is from the stock. My mother sell some stocks and save the money to the bank.
VO: (在电脑上敲东西，至少敲了一分钟，我没听懂。然后)blabla***（我没听懂）
ME：（发楞）
VO： do you have some materical to certificate this ***** stock? or bankbook?
me: no, I am sorry.(这时候就感觉会被拒了，因为交流上并不顺利，VO讲话我也有没听懂的)
VO: ok, according to *****()
ME：（打断他）sorry, sir, I forget this one. (从材料里拿出两年的股票对帐单，很厚很多)
VO：（翻，翻，翻，翻了很多，然后摇摇头）sorry, it is not useful.
VO: ok, according to *****(没听懂). welcome to apply the visa again, but you need to take more details certificate concerning the financial history. (盖拒签章，还在一张纸上盖章给了我)
ME： thank you anyway.

回来以后，我自己分析了一下，觉得我中间犯了很多错误，在语言上也有问题，而且说的时候不够自信。
想想，被拒也是在情理之中的。所以希望大家帮我分析一下哪里毛病很大，而且给点建议，二签需要解决什么问题，需要再补充什么材料。
谢谢

[ 本帖最后由 kevinhrm 于 2006-5-31 21:35 编辑 ]

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