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21.The following appeared in a memo from the new vice president of Sartorian, a company that manufactures men's clothing.
"Five years ago, at a time when we had difficulties in obtaining reliable supplies of high-quality wool fabric, we discontinued production of our deluxe alpaca overcoats. Now that we have a new fabric supplier, we should resume production. This coat should sell very well: since we have not offered an alpaca overcoat for five years and since our major competitor no longer makes an alpaca overcoat, there will be pent-up customer demand. Also, since the price of most types of clothing has risen in each of the past five years, customers should be willing to pay significantly higher prices for alpaca overcoats than they did five years ago, and our company profits will increase."
五年前,当我们在获取可靠的高质量羊毛毛料的渠道方面存在困难的时候,我们停止了高档羊毛外衣的生产。现在有了新的毛料供应商,我们应该重新开始生产。这种外衣应该卖得很好:因为我们已经五年没有供应羊毛外衣了,而且由于我们的主要竞争对手已不再生产羊毛外衣,消费者将有很迫切的需求。而且,由于过去五年中多数种类的服装价格每年都在上涨,消费者应该愿意花比五年前高的多的价格购买羊毛外衣,从而我们公司的利润将会上升。
our company profits will increase
攻击1:since we have not offered an alpaca overcoat for five years and since our major competitor no longer makes an alpaca overcoat, there will be pent-up customer demand
1) 五年的市场如何?现在呢?
2) 主要竞争对手不生产不说明 没有竞争
3) 也许已经没人买了
攻击2:Also, since the price of most types of clothing has risen in each of the past five years, customers should be willing to pay significantly higher prices for alpaca overcoats than they did five years ago
1) 其他涨价,毛衣?
2) 没有证据
攻击3:, and our company profits will increase
1)忽略它因
1、作者的结果基于没有其它客户生产驼羊毛大衣,这是没有根据的,没有说明真正原因
2、此外,作者没有提供证据证明用户愿意用更昂贵的钱来购买衣服
3、作者没有考虑许多其它因素:比如人们越来越重视动物的保护,因此即便是有钱也不一定会购买驼羊毛的大衣;此外,新的材料供应商购买的价格是多少,如果抬高同样会影响盈利
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22.The following appeared in a memo from the president of a company that builds and sells new homes in Steel City.
"Over the past five years, the population of Steel City has increased by more than 20 percent, and family incomes in Steel City have risen much faster than the national average. Nationwide, sales of houses priced above $150,000 have increased more than have sales of lower-priced houses. Such data indicate that we should make changes in our business to increase company profits. First, we should build fewer low-priced houses than we did last year and focus instead on building houses designed to sell at above $150,000. Second, we should hire additional workers so that we can build a larger total number of houses than we did last year."
过去五年中,Steel City的人口增加超过了20%,家庭收入的上涨比全国平均水平快的多。在全国范围,房价在$150000以上的房产销量的增长比低价房产要多。这些数据显示我们的业务应该进行一些变革来增加利润。首先,我们所建设的低价位房产应该比去年少,而集中力量建设房价在$150000以上的房产。其次,我们应该雇佣更多的工人从而保证我们能够比去年建设更多的房屋。
Such data indicate that we should make changes in our business to increase company profits
攻击1:Over the past five years, the population of Steel City has increased by more than 20 percent, and family incomes in Steel City have risen much faster than the national average. Nationwide, sales of houses priced above $150,000 have increased more than have sales of lower-priced houses
1) 人口和收入的上涨都不意味着买房
2) 全国的趋势不用于地区
3) 高价房卖的比低价房多,多多少,总共多少?不说明他们会买
攻击2:First, we should build fewer low-priced houses than we did last year and focus instead on building houses designed to sell at above $150,000. Second, we should hire additional workers so that we can build a larger total number of houses than we did last year.
1) 要是当地买的全是低价的?
2) 雇佣工人多了,支出就会多,效率最重要
攻击3:忽略它因
1、Steel城市的人口增长和收入高并不意味着这里的人愿意购买高价房子
2、此外,全国购买高价房的人增加也不一定意味着Steel城市里的人也愿意购买高价房
3、此外,作者忽略了其他因素:比如,全国高价房的销售量增长比低价房高并不说明目前市场的情况,可能高价房的市场本来就小,而低价房的销量本来很大。还有,Steel城市居民目前所拥有的房子数量和类型
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23.A recent sales study indicated that consumption of seafood dishes in Bay City restaurants has increased by 30 percent over the past five years. Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants that specialize in seafood. Moreover, the majority of families in Bay City are two-income families, and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home-cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about eating healthily. Therefore, a new Bay City restaurant specializing in seafood will be quite popular and profitable.
最近的销量调查显示Bay City餐馆的海鲜菜肴的消费量比过去五年增加了30%。而现在该市还没有专门经营海鲜菜的餐厅。而且,Bay City的大多数家庭是双收入家庭,一次国家调查显示这类家庭在家做饭的数量比十年前显著减少,同时他们更关注健康饮食。因此,在Bay City开设一家新的专营海鲜食品的餐馆将会非常受欢迎而且有利可图。
Therefore, a new Bay City restaurant specializing in seafood will be quite popular and profitable
攻击1:A recent sales study indicated that consumption of seafood dishes in Bay City restaurants has increased by 30 percent over the past five years
Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants that specialize in seafood
1) 每年增长缓慢
2) 增长了到底多少?
3) 调查了多少餐馆
4) 没有正是说明不景气,或者他们是搭配着吃
攻击2:Moreover, the majority of families in Bay City are two-income families, and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home-cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about eating healthily
1) 双收入家庭就一定吃海鲜么
2) 全国的不适用于地方
3) 做饭少是否出去吃?吃海鲜?
4) 吃海鲜就健康?
攻击3: profit 其他因素
1.最近的海鲜食品的需求比去年上升30%并不意味着海鲜食物的市场变得很大
2.全国对于双收入家庭的调查并不意味着Bar City同样适用
3.作者同样忽略了其他因素:比如Bar City当地的餐厅数量很多而且对于海鲜食品的供应是否已经足够丰富;或者是否Bar City的居民的饮食习惯
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24.The following appeared in a memo from the president of Viva-Tech, a manufacturer of high-tech medical equipment.
"In order to reduce costs, we should close some of our existing small assembly plants and build a large central plant. Grandview would be an ideal location for this new plant. First, of the locations that we have considered, Grandview has the largest adult population, so that we will be able to staff our plant quickly and easily. Second, since the average wage earned by workers in Grandview is less than that in the other locations, we should be able to keep production costs low. Last, as an inducement for us to build there, Grandview's town council has offered to allow us to operate for the first three years without paying city taxes."
为节约成本,我们应该关闭一些现有的小型组装车间而建设一个大型核心厂房。Grandview可能是这个新厂房建设的理想位置。首先,在我们所考虑过的地区中,Grandview拥有最大的成年人口,因此我们可以很快很轻易地招收到工作人员。其次,由于Grandview工人的平均收入比其他地区低,我们能够把生产成本压低。最后,我们在那里建厂的诱因之一就是Grandview的市委允许我们运营的头三年可以免付城市税。
In order to reduce costs, we should close some of our existing small assembly plants and build a large central plant
Grandview would be an ideal location for this new plant
攻击1:First, of the locations that we have considered, Grandview has the largest adult population, so that we will be able to staff our plant quickly and easily
1) 成年人口是否都没有工作?
2) 是否适合我们的要求?
攻击2:Second, since the average wage earned by workers in Grandview is less than that in the other locations, we should be able to keep production costs low
1) 是否工人效率低?
2) 他们要求多
3) 地理环境?
攻击3:Last, as an inducement for us to build there, Grandview's town council has offered to allow us to operate for the first three years without paying city taxes
1) 以后呢?
2) 是否很高
1.作者没有提供足够的证据证明尽早一个大的中心工厂要比保留老的小装备厂要解约成本
2.作者使用工人的工资低推导出制造成本低是错误的,可能那里的工人效率低,或者需要为当地的工人提供比别的地方更好的工作环境
3.著作还忽略了其他因素:首先,作文没有说Grandview税收的具体数据,可能很高;另外,作者也没有考虑Grandview的地理位置,如果很偏僻,运输费用昂贵也是不划算的
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25.The following appeared in a memo from the mayor of the town of Hopewell.
"Two years ago, the town of Ocean View built a new municipal golf course and resort hotel. During the past two years, tourism in Ocean View has increased, new businesses have opened there, and Ocean View's tax revenues have risen by 30 percent. The best way to improve Hopewell's economy, and generate additional tax revenues, is to build a golf course and resort hotel similar to those in Ocean View."
两年前Ocean View建造了一个新的市立高尔夫球场和度假旅馆。过去两年中,Ocean View的旅客增加了,开设了很多新的商业,而且税收增加了30%。改Hopewell的经济,产生更多税收的最好途径就是建立一个和Ocean View类似的高尔夫球场和度假旅馆。
The best way to improve Hopewell's economy, and generate additional tax revenues, is to build a golf course and resort hotel similar to those in Ocean View
攻击1: Two years ago, the town of Ocean View built a new municipal golf course and resort hotel. During the past two years, tourism in Ocean View has increased, new businesses have opened there, and Ocean View's tax revenues have risen by 30 percent
1) 过去的趋势是否能够保持
2) 具体数值?
3) 是否由于开设球场和旅馆?
攻击2:
1) 地区不同,是否适用
2) 有没有其他方法
1.没有足够的证据表明在Hopewell修建地方性的高尔夫球场和度假胜地会和Ocean View一样收到更高的税收和促进经济
2.此外,作者提供详细的说明Ocean View的经济提高是因为修建了市高尔夫球场以及度假酒店的结果
3.作者还忽略了其他因素:作者没有提供Hopewell居民的信息,可能当地的风俗习惯排斥旅游;此外,作者没有考虑其他更好的提升经济的方法,可能有更好的方式,比如厂办企业等来提高当地经济
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26.The following appeared in a memo from the chairperson of the school board in the town of Saluda.
"For the past five years, Mr. Charles Schade has been the music director at Steel City High School, and during that time the school band from Steel City High has won three regional band competitions. In addition, the quality of the music rehearsal facilities and musical instruments at Steel City High has improved markedly over the past five years. Because of such successes at Steel City High, the Saluda school board should hire Mr. Schade to plan and direct the general music education programs for the entire Saluda school system."
过去五年中,Charles Schade担任了Steel City高中的音乐教学主任,在那期间学校乐队在三次地区乐队比赛中获胜。而且,Steel City高中的音乐排练设备和乐器在过去五年中明显得到改。由于Steel City高中所获得的这些成就,Saluda学校委员会应该雇佣Mr.Schade来为整个Saluda学校系统规划和指导总体音乐教育计划。
Because of such successes at Steel City High, the Saluda school board should hire Mr. Schade to plan and direct the general music education programs for the entire Saluda school system
攻击1:For the past five years, Mr. Charles Schade has been the music director at Steel City High School, and during that time the school band from Steel City High has won three regional band competitions
In addition, the quality of the music rehearsal facilities and musical instruments at Steel City High has improved markedly over the past five years
1) 趋势能否保持?
2) 是不是他的原因
3) 以前的情况
4) 是不是他改善的?
攻击2:hire Mr. Schade to plan and direct the general music education programs for the entire Saluda school system
1) 两个高中的情况?
2) 为什么是整个学校的系统规划?
1.首先,作者不能提供足够的证据证明3次赢得地方性的乐团比赛是Mr. Charles Schade的功劳
2.也没有足够的证据表明是Mr. Charles Schade帮助改善的音乐排练设备和乐器
3.作者还忽略了其他因素:首先,即便上述功劳都是Mr. Charles Schade的结果,他是否会在Saluda学校也能取得这样的成果;聘请Mr. Charles Schade的费用会不会很高
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27.The following appeared as part of a memo from the president of Automate, a company that manufactures automobiles.
"It has come to my attention that Sparks, Inc., the manufacturing company that just moved into our state, is advertising job openings at salaries that are twice as high as those paid to our experienced assembly-line workers. Some of our employees have already left to work for Sparks. In order to keep our best staff, we must pay them salaries equal to those Sparks pays its employees. Otherwise we will continue to lose employees in the future, because Sparks must staff the additional new plants that it plans to build in the state."
我注意到刚刚搬到本州的制造公司Sparks, Inc.正在登广告提供比我们公司生产线的熟练工人薪水高一倍的工作岗位。我们的有些员工已经离开公司到Sparks就职。为留住我们最好的员工,我们必须付给他们与Sparks付给其员工相同的薪水。否则我们在未来将继续流失员工,因为Sparks必须为他们在本州新建的工厂招募工人。
In order to keep our best staff, we must pay them salaries equal to those Sparks pays its employees
攻击1:It has come to my attention that Sparks, Inc., the manufacturing company that just moved into our state, is advertising job openings at salaries that are twice as high as those paid to our experienced assembly-line workers. Some of our employees have already left to work for Sparks
1) 他们是因为薪水走得?
2) 走了多少?代表性
3) 我们两个公司的工作不同
攻击2:In order to keep our best staff, we must pay them salaries equal to those Sparks pays its employees. Otherwise we will continue to lose employees in the future, because Sparks must staff the additional new plants that it plans to build in the state
1) 趋势何来?
2) 其他方式?
1.首先,作者基于两个工资水平不同就推断如果不提升工资Automate的工人一定会走掉是没有根据的。可能工作条件要好,或者有提他的福利
2.其次,作者没有根据的说Automate离开的工人是因为工资不高而离开的
3.作者还忽略了其他因素:比如,没有提供足够的证据证明Automate公司将会持续有工人离开,很可能由于本公司条件好,而吸引更多的工人来;此外,作者也没有提供Sparks公司的其他资料,可能这个公司生产的东西和Automate不同。
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28.The following is a memo from the superintendent of the Mylar school district.
"A recent six-month study, in which breakfast was made available at school for 100 schoolchildren ages five to twelve, found that children on the breakfast plan were less likely than other children to be absent from or late for school. Clearly, eating breakfast before school plays a role in reducing student absenteeism and tardiness. It is also well known that children who regularly eat a healthful breakfast tend to perform better in school. Therefore, in order to reduce absenteeism and tardiness and to improve academic performance in all of Mylar's elementary and secondary schools, we should provide breakfasts for all students before each school day."
在一项最近的为期6个月的研究中,我们为100名5至12岁的小学生在学校提供早餐;研究发现参加早餐计划的儿童比其他儿童更不容易缺席或迟到。显然,上学前吃早餐对于减少学生的缺席和迟到作用很大。而且众所周知经常吃健康早餐的儿童一般在学校的表现也更好。因此,为减少缺席和迟到以及提高Mylar所有小学和初中的学习成绩,我们应该在每天上课前为所有学生提供早餐。
Therefore, in order to reduce absenteeism and tardiness and to improve academic performance in all of Mylar's elementary and secondary schools, we should provide breakfasts for all students before each school day
攻击1 :A recent six-month study, in which breakfast was made available at school for 100 schoolchildren ages five to twelve, found that children on the breakfast plan were less likely than other children to be absent from or late for school.
1) 很难让人相信
2) 比例?
3) 数量太少
4) 谁做的调查?
攻击2:It is also well known that children who regularly eat a healthful breakfast tend to perform better in school
1) 证据
2) 全国有效是否地区适用
3) 忽略它因
:
1.作者不能提供足够的证据证明这项计划是否具有代表性(representativeness is open to doubt)
2.其次,作者不能提供足够的信息证明是吃早餐造成这些孩子不迟到和早退
3.作者还忽略了其他因素:首先,没有提供任何证据说明吃早餐能够让孩子们在学校的表现更好;其次,也没有说明即使这个计划在全国有效,在Mylar是否有效,可能当地习俗不符
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29.When Ida McAllister ran for mayor of Lake City four years ago, she failed to win even 30 percent of the vote. But since then, McAllister has made public her commitment to environmental causes. She would be wise, therefore, to announce her intention to close all Lake City parks to automobile traffic, thus following the example of the former mayor of Plainsville, Alecia Yu . On the recommendation of a small group of concerned citizens, Mayor Yu prohibited automobile traffic in all Plainsville parks, and therefore was credited with solving the pollution problem and improving the quality of life in Plainsville. This action would have great appeal to the citizens of Lake City, most of whom participate in the community's recycling program, and would guarantee McAllister's success in her current quest to be Lake City's new mayor.
当Ida McAllister在四年前竞选Lake City市的市长的时候,她失败了,甚至未能赢得30%的选票。但从那以后,McAllister公开了她对环境事业的支持。因而,如果她宣布她将会让Lake City所有公园禁止汽车通行的话将会是十分明智的,这里有Plainsville前市长Alecia Yu的先例。在一小群关注该问题的市民的建议下,Yu市长在Plainsville的所有公园都禁止汽车通行,因而被称赞为解决了Plainsville的污染问题和提高了生活质量。这一行动对于Lake City的市将会有极大吸引力,这些市大部分参加了社区循环再生项目,也会保证McAllister在这次市长竞选中获得成。
This action would have great appeal to the citizens of Lake City, most of whom participate in the community's recycling program, and would guarantee McAllister's success in her current quest to be Lake City's new mayor
攻击1:When Ida McAllister ran for mayor of Lake City four years ago, she failed to win even 30 percent of the vote
1) 是否由于不支持环境?
2) 是否有着别的缺点?
攻击2:She would be wise, therefore, to announce her intention to close all Lake City parks to automobile traffic, thus following the example of the former mayor of Plainsville, Alecia Yu . On the recommendation of a small group of concerned citizens, Mayor Yu prohibited automobile traffic in all Plainsville parks, and therefore was credited with solving the pollution problem and improving the quality of life in Plainsville
1) 两市的情况一样?
2) 那个市长得到了人民的支持,这个?
3) 少部分人支持,不代表市民支持
4) 改变了公园的就改变了全市?
攻击3:This action would have great appeal to the citizens of Lake City, most of whom participate in the community's recycling program, and would guarantee McAllister's success in her current quest to be Lake City's new mayor
1) 参加不代表对环境感兴趣
2) 感兴趣不一定支持她
1.作者没有提供信息说明为什么McAllister在上次的选举中失败了,他可能有别的缺点,而不是不支持环保
2.没有足够的证据证明在前市长Alecia Yu的成功也能够在McAllister上再次成功
3.作者还忽略了其他因素:比如没有足够的证据显示这些市民即使参加了社区循环计划,还会对环境问题那么感兴趣,可能Lake City的污染本来就不重,如果静止了汽车通行反而会受到反效果;此外,作者没有考虑是否还有更好的方法让McAllister当选
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30.According to information recently reported in the Eliottown Gazette, the number of people who travel to Eliottown has increased significantly over the past several years. So far this year over 100,000 people have arrived on flights to Eliottown's airport, compared with only 80,000 last year and 40,000 the year before. Eliottown's train station has received more than 50,000 passengers this year, compared with less than 40,000 last year and 20,000 the year before. Clearly tourism in Eliottown has been increasing, thanks to the new Central Park and Museum of Modern Art that opened last year. Therefore, the funding for the park and museum should be increased significantly.
根据Eliottown
Gazette最近报道的信息,到Eliottown旅游的人数在过去几年中显著增加。今年到现在为止,乘飞机抵达Eliottown机场的人数已经超过了100000人,而去年和前年则分别只有80000和40000人。Eliottown的火车站今年接待了超过50000名乘客,而去年和前年则分别为不到40000和20000。显然Eliottown的游客数量增加了,这要感谢去年开放的新的Central Park和Museum of Modern Art。因此,拨给这个公园和博物馆的基金应该大幅增加。
Therefore, the funding for the park and museum should be increased significantly
攻击1:So far this year over 100,000 people have arrived on flights to Eliottown's airport, compared with only 80,000 last year and 40,000 the year before. Eliottown's train station has received more than 50,000 passengers this year, compared with less than 40,000 last year and 20,000 the year before
1) 人数增长并不意味旅游者的增多?
2) 只有三年,不足以说明问题,前几年是否开了公园和博物馆?
3) 是否有其他的方式如汽车,轮船
攻击2:Clearly tourism in Eliottown has been increasing, thanks to the new Central Park and Museum of Modern Art that opened last year. Therefore, the funding for the park and museum should be increased significantly
1) 是否是这两个造成的?
2) 投资给他们是否会吸引游客?
3) 是否还有其他的方法?
1.作者没有提供信息证明是去年开的中央公园和现代艺术展提升了Eliottown Gasette的旅游业
2.没有足够的信息证明大幅增加投资给展览馆和公园有利于吸引更多的乘客
3.作者还忽略了其他因素:首先,是否有其他因素导致了火车和飞机乘客的上升,人口增长,作生意的;其次,是否应当修建其他类型的建筑或者其他方法来吸引游客,比如建旅馆。 |
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