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robbieyangUID：2146518

原帖由 深蓝深圳 于 2006-7-30 08:11 发表
People always say that if you want a success, you will not only have the natural ability you are born but also have to work hard. I think that this view is to some extent correct,  however, as far  ...

怎么才能够引用全文阿，就这里版主提到的语法想再确认一下：
“因为表示可数名词有两种方法：1。The+单数；2。直接用复数”，下面两道题：
The manufacture of (automobile) was (extremely) expensive (until) assembly-line techniques (made) them cheaper to produce. 我看到的答案是B，有人告诉我是A，
改为automobiles, 那改为 the automobile也对的，是马？

While studying the (chemistry) (of human body), Dr. Rosalyn Yalow won a Nobel Prize for the research she (conducted on) the (role of) hormones.
答案是B，某牛人说改为the human body， 那么改为human bodies也是对的，是吗？

还是“因为表示可数名词有两种方法：1。The+单数；2。直接用复数”这句话和尚两个题没有关系？希望我说清楚了要表达的意思

[ 本帖最后由 robbieyang 于 2006-7-31 22:59 编辑 ]

深蓝深圳UID：2118855

原帖由 easylin 于 2006-7-31 00:28 发表
问下关于听力的问题，觉得现在听不出来的完全就是连读和弱化了，那要怎么克服呢？
反复听那些听不出来的地方，然后跟读我试了，但是连读和弱化的具体单词每次都不一样，所以下一次还是听不出来，该怎么办哦~~

提高是需要一个过程的:)由量变到质变需要时间。继续加油！：）

深蓝深圳UID：2118855

topic21 In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

The earth is rotating every day; and things in the world are changing every moment, so is our human society. [此句感觉有些头重脚轻。可改为Our human society, just like things in the world, is changing everyday.] With the rushing waves of the development of human society, the average life expectancy has been remarkably increased in the past few decades. Among the countless reasons attributed to this phenomenon, as far as I am concerned, three most conspicuous factors are as follows. [开头段写得不错，简单、与下文衔接顺畅。]

First and foremost, the improved medical treatments serve as [添加the] important opportunities for people to prolong their lives. At the beginning of last century, hardly could people survive in case they infect[改为infected] with the deceases such as variola or chincough; whereas at the end of the century, most of these fatal deceases could be cured on account of the rapid advancement of medical technology and method. Virtually no disease exists today for which there is no drug that can be given, either to cure the disease or to alleviate its symptoms[这句话的问题比较多。首先，“现今的任何疫病都能被治疗或缓解”——这句话个人认为极端了些同时；其次，此句的第一个分句中出现了两套定从，显得不流畅；第三，主句的主语为disease，而to cure/alleviate的主语为drug，这两者不一致，不符合语法规则。]

Furthermore, the much higher living standard is another significant factor for people’s longevity. The past decades have witnessed the amazing development of people’s living condition: high buildings and large mansions took the place of old houses and small shelters; air condition or central heating kept people away from suffering to [suffering to建议删去]hot or cold weather. Now all these convenience not only provide people [应添加with]more comfort than before, but also alleviate their laborious work and keep them in good mood. Hence, there is no denying that people will live longer.

Last but not least, the nutritious food in people’s daily life nowadays also plays an important role. In the past, many people were even not able to feed themselves full, not to mention getting any nutritious food; however, people in the modern world not only can get plenty of nutrition from their daily meals, but also care much for the palatable as well as healthy food[not only…but also…形式在上文中已经使用过，建议换成…as well as…]. It is the progressed healthy diet that offers people health and will surely prolong their lives

In conclusion, the reasons resulting in modern people’s longevity are multi-faceted, but all these aspects can come down to the speedy development of science and technology of human society which mainly manifests in the above three factors.



全文的形式和结构挺不错的：）

但在内容方面，还需要进一步充实。请注意题目中很重要的一句话“Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.”specific的含义是“relating to one thing and not others”，它不是要求你的理由和举例要“广”，而是要求它们“特定、明确”。这一点，在第一个理由段中讲到“variola or chincough”的部分就体现得很好，因为这个例子是“特定，明确”的；但在第二段中，用这个例子——“high buildings and large mansions took the place of old houses and small shelters; air condition or central heating kept people away from suffering to hot or cold weather.”来证明“the much higher living standard is another significant factor for people’s longevity”就是一个不够明确的举例，因为我可以对此提出问题：“为什么住在新的大房子中、有了温度调节设备，人就能活得更久？”如果想使它成为一个明确的举例，可以增加这一句说明——“有了新的大房子，人的活动范围就广了，同时，心理上的压抑感就少了；有了设备，人患上因为气温骤变所导致的疫病的可以性就降低了。因此，寿命也就相应的更长了。”
一句话，建议你在内容上应尽量避免空泛，要使内容更加的“言之有物”，举例更加清晰明确，这样，你所谈到理由、举到的例子，也就更具有说服力了：）。。。

嗯，你的功底还是很好的，只要对内容方面要求得再高一些，相信你能在8T中取得5分以上的优秀TWE成绩。

加油哦。等你的好消息^_^
GOOD LUCK！~

[ 本帖最后由 深蓝深圳 于 2006-7-31 20:46 编辑 ]

expire7UID：2160574

各位组长很认真阿，orz.
各位组员也加油哦。

wp123UID：2187508

路过~加油~

绿洲里的骆驼UID：2112781

原帖由 expire7 于 2006-8-1 12:07 发表
各位组长很认真阿，orz.
各位组员也加油哦。

正解！

只可惜我今天不能再评分了...:(

shan_yfUID：2182345

阅读在做完题目之后   ,该怎样分析文章
是不是应该精读  那读的时候注意力是放在学科生词上么?

wingerweskerUID：2154168

不用放在学科生词上，这种词汇认识一下即可
精度阅读做三件事：找题目对应点；分析文章和段落的结构；通过分析结构揣摩作者写作意图，这里写作意图不是指写文章 的目的，而是根据文章内部靠前的内容猜测后面的内容。前两项比较重要，最后一项可以不做~

shan_yfUID：2182345

PART B 和 C 部分里的生词在精听的时候该怎么处理呢?

robbieyangUID：2146518

问几个语法：
0101：
16. A (variation) of collodion photography was the tintype, (which) captured images on a black (or) dark brown metal plate (instead) from on glass.  
答案为D，如何修改？

31. Copper was the first (metallic) used by humans (and is) second only (to iron) in its utility through (the ages).
答案是A。B对吗？second only又是怎么回事？

37. Wampum, beads used as (a form) of exchange (by) some Native Americans, was made of (bits of) seashells cut, (drill), and strung into belts.
是不是只有a bit of的用法？

0105:
32.The lemur is (an unusual) animal (belonging to) the (same) order (than) monkey’s and apes.
答案为D，为什么不能选C，将same改为higher之类的词。我是这样想的，既然是一个unusual的动物，那么就不太可能the same as后面的了，所以选了C，改为比较级。

40. (Many of) species of milkweed are (among) the most dangerous of (poisonous plants), while others have (little), if any, toxicity.
答案为A，many of the？species没有复数形式了把？

easylinUID：199371

原帖由 深蓝深圳 于 2006-8-1 11:44 发表
topic21 In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

The earth is rotating every day; and things in th ...

冰冰改得好仔细，偶太感动了~~醍醐灌顶，茅塞顿开，豁然开朗……

深蓝深圳UID：2118855

这两天有点别的事情要忙，所以没有及时回复你的问题，，，久等了哈。。。：）

原帖由 robbieyang 于 2006-7-31 07:58 发表


怎么才能够引用全文阿

:)
1.点击"回复主题"键
2.点击"插入引用"键
3.将"Sample Text"换成你想引用的内容就可以了

改为automobiles, 那改为 the automobile也对的，是马？

这道题我自己也不太清楚为什么要选B，不好意思。。：）：）

While studying the (chemistry) (of human body), Dr. Rosalyn Yalow won a Nobel Prize for the research she (conducted on) the (role of) hormones.
答案是B，某牛人说改为the human body， 那么改为human bodies也是对的，是吗？

对的，从语法上来说，两种改法都没有错。但the human body更好，因为"可数名词复数"更强调"个体意义"，而"the+可数名词单数"，更强调"整体意义"、"概念意义"。而在这句话中，“人体的化学物质”，还是用反应“整体”的表达更好些，因为这种研究，更多的是对“人类”这个群体的特征、区别于其他群体的特征进行研究，而不是对不同的两个人之间的特征进行研究。
：P也不知道我把意思表达清楚没有。。。
当然了。。这些语法概念已经很细的了，大概了解一下就好，并不需要对它们太过深究：）

深蓝深圳UID：2118855

原帖由 绿洲里的骆驼 于 2006-8-1 01:57 发表


正解！

只可惜我今天不能再评分了...:(

;)你可以积分转账的哦。。。。。。

深蓝深圳UID：2118855

原帖由 shan_yf 于 2006-8-1 07:12 发表
PART B 和 C 部分里的生词在精听的时候该怎么处理呢?

用本子记下来，平时在零碎时间多看看。并不需要清楚的将它们背下来，只需要在下一次听到时，知道它大概是动物还是用具，是褒义词还是贬义词就行了：）

深蓝深圳UID：2118855

原帖由 robbieyang 于 2006-8-1 08:24 发表
16. A (variation) of collodion photography was the tintype, (which) captured images on a black (or) dark brown metal plate (instead) from on glass.  
答案为D，如何修改？

instead+句子
instead of+名词和短语

在本句中，两个需要连接的万分是on a black or dark brown metal plate和from on glass，是两个介词短语，因此要用instead of

31. Copper was the first (metallic) used by humans (and is) second only (to iron) in its utility through (the ages).
答案是A。B对吗？second only又是怎么回事？

这句表达的含义是“铜是第一个被人类运用的金属，而且在被人类的使用程度上，也仅次于铁”
1。metallic一般来说是形容词，在做名词的时候，表“金属纤维纺织物”，而不是“金属”。因此，A处应该改为“metal”。
2。be second only to——“仅次于”

37. Wampum, beads used as (a form) of exchange (by) some Native Americans, was made of (bits of) seashells cut, (drill), and strung into belts.
是不是只有a bit of的用法？|

不知道这道题目的答案是什么？个人认为bits of似乎没有错啊。我觉得可能是drill错了哦，应该改为drilled。因为drilled和cut,strung这两个被动形式是并列的。：）要不你再去查查怎样？