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yidi mercuryUID: 195299

原帖由 duowq 于 2006-8-6 21:26 发表
30.according to the passage, it is believed that the largest wxtinction of a species occurred()    a  26 million years ago    b  65 million years ago  c  225  million years ago  d  250 million year ...

那我来个人理解一下
tend to 是表示猜测哦，不一定是正确的哦
may 表示猜测哦

总结
你对于英语里面的猜测的词汇都不是很清楚
需要好好总结一下
may can might could 表示猜测哦

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

原帖由 duowq 于 2006-8-6 21:26 发表
30.according to the passage, it is believed that the largest wxtinction of a species occurred()    a  26 million years ago    b  65 million years ago  c  225  million years ago  d  250 million year ...

那我来个人理解一下
tend to 是表示猜测哦，不一定是正确的哦
may 表示猜测哦

总结
你对于英语里面的猜测的词汇都不是很清楚
需要好好总结一下
may can might could 表示猜测哦

duowqUID: 196783

原帖由 yidi mercury 于 2006-8-8 21:45 发表



那我来个人理解一下
tend to 是表示猜测哦，不一定是正确的哦
may 表示猜测哦

总结
你对于英语里面的猜测的词汇都不是很清楚
需要好好总结一下
may can might could 表示猜测哦

恩, 有看过了. 谢谢啊.

easylinUID: 199371

原帖由 yidi mercury 于 2006-8-8 21:32 发表



other than 表示而不是

欢迎yidi MM回来~~~
恩~~我知道other than的意思啊，但我想问的是这句话的意思还有句子结构的分析。。。
31. Luminescence refers to the emission of light by means another than heat.
怎么感觉by means 的位置不大对:confused:

[ 本帖最后由 easylin 于 2006-8-9 01:23 编辑 ]

wingerweskerUID: 2154168

L.为主语，refers to谓语，the emission of light宾语，by means...介宾结构修饰宾语

zhanyi1986UID: 2229180

哪位GTER有老俞的词汇串讲啊

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

原帖由 duowq 于 2006-8-8 22:06 发表

恩, 有看过了. 谢谢啊.

不谢~~应该的哦~~

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

原帖由 easylin 于 2006-8-9 01:21 发表

欢迎yidi MM回来~~~
恩~~我知道other than的意思啊，但我想问的是这句话的意思还有句子结构的分析。。。
31. Luminescence refers to the emission of light by means another than heat.
怎么感觉by means  ...

如果我和你一样分析一道语法题目
我会选择看主语谓语宾语
然后看结构上面是否有错误
而不是意思哦
因为这个题目考得是比较other than 和another than的混淆额
:)

深蓝深圳UID: 2118855

前几天蛮忙的，一直没有时间好好回答问题。辛苦YIDI了：）
现在偶回来了~！欢迎大家提问哈^_^

easylinUID: 199371

冰冰可以再帮我改一篇文章吗?^_^上次看了冰冰的意见真的很受用呢~~
75 Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Coincident with the increasing requirement of well-educated individuals in this modern world has been a growing concern of the importance of subject settings in universities, which evoke a controversy on whether universities should require students take classes in many subjects or specialize in one subject. Since the education in universities is so crucial a basis of one's future career, as far as I am concerned, it is necessary for students to learn various subjects other than focus on only one.

First and foremost, taking classes in many subjects serves as a favorable opportunity for students to learn kinds of knowledge in different areas, so that they could broaden their horizon as well as develop comprehensively. In contrast, for instance, if a student only focuses on his major business but fail to take any class concerning law, in his future career, he is very likely to be cheated, lured or utilized unconsciously by others. Consequently, one would not be successful or even survive without mastering several basic rules of different subjects in this era of sophisticated civilization and complex society.

Furthermore, not only could extensive study make students learn the knowledge of those subjects, it also helps them gain the methods of thought and spirit of those fields and improve their essential abilities as a result. Just as the celebrated philosopher Bacon said, "histories make men wise, poems witty, mathematics subtle, natural philosophy deep, moral grave, logic able to contend." This adage brings forth that ones' qualities could be trained and enhanced by learning sorts of subjects. In other words, the requirement of extensive study in universities will certainly help to develop different kinds of personal capabilities of their students or may even evoke their inspirations in some fields.

Last but not least, only after taking part in a variety of classes could a student really find out what is his interest concentrate in so that he could make a better choice of which subject to specialize in. Einstein said, "interest is one's best teacher", vividly describing the importance of interest in education. Accordingly, it is important for universities to offer wider chance of numerous classes for students rather than restrict them in the given specialty.

To sum up, given those sagacious reasons which are discussed above, I strongly commit to the notion that in order to bring up more versatile elites for our increasingly advanced society, universities had better require students to take classes in diverse subjects instead of forcing them to specialize in one subject.

深蓝深圳UID: 2118855

75 Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Coincident with the increasing requirement of well-educated individuals in this modern world has been a growing concern of the importance of subject settings in universities, which evoke[建议改为evokes] a controversy on whether universities should require students take classes in many subjects or specialize in one subject. Since the education in universities is so crucial a basis of one's future career, as far as I am concerned, it is necessary for students to learn various subjects other than focus[建议在focus前加to，因为other than连接的是两个并列成分：to learn与to focus] on only one.

First and foremost, taking classes in many subjects serves as a favorable opportunity for students to learn kinds of knowledge in different areas, so that they could broaden their horizon as well as develop comprehensively. In contrast, for instance, if a student only focuses on his major business but fail[建议改为fails] to take any class concerning law, in his future career, he is very likely to be cheated, lured or utilized unconsciously by others. Consequently, one would not be successful or even survive without mastering several basic rules of different subjects in this era of sophisticated civilization and complex society.[此段的结尾句——“这是一个需要复合知识的时代。。。”建议将它放在段落的开头，作为taking classes…knowledge in different areas的动机]

Furthermore, not only could extensive study make students learn the knowledge of those subjects, it also helps them gain the methods of thought and spirit of those fields and improve their essential abilities as a result. Just as the celebrated philosopher Bacon said, "histories make men wise, poems witty, mathematics subtle, natural philosophy deep, moral grave, logic able to contend." This adage brings forth that ones' qualities could be trained and enhanced by learning sorts of subjects. In other words, the requirement of extensive study in universities will certainly help to develop different kinds of personal capabilities of their students or may even evoke their inspirations in some fields.

Last but not least, only after taking part in a variety of classes could a student really find out what is his interest concentrate[建议改为concentrate] in so that he could make a better choice of which subject to specialize in. Einstein said, "interest is one's best teacher", vividly describing the importance of interest in education. Accordingly, it is important for universities to offer wider chance of numerous classes for students rather than restrict them in the given specialty.

To sum up, given those sagacious reasons which are discussed above, I strongly commit to the notion that in order to bring up more versatile elites for our increasingly advanced society, universities had better require students to take classes in diverse subjects instead of forcing them to specialize in one subject.

感觉比上一篇文章有了很大进步哦：）尤其是在举例方面，很有说服力：）
只要注意以下几点就没问题了：
1．        希望能更加细心一些，使语法错误尽量降到最低。
2．        全文的五段文字有一个共同特点：它们的第一句话的字数都很多，句式都比较复杂。这样的特点使得文章读进来不够错落有致：）建议对其中的部分句子作一些小小的改动，将复合句拆成两个简单句，然后用连接词连接起来。比如，第二段的第一句话就可以改为“First and foremost, taking classes in many subjects serves as a favorable opportunity for students to learn kinds of knowledge in different areas. For the reason given above, students could broaden their horizon as well as develop comprehensively.”

继续加油：）5分以上很有希望呢。

nostrumUID: 2124189

AW考完了，先冒个泡：）

深蓝深圳UID: 2118855

原帖由 nostrum 于 2006-8-9 18:49 发表
AW考完了，先冒个泡：）

:)辛苦了。欢迎回来：）

nostrumUID: 2124189

谢小冰冰哦

开始在这里干活

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

原帖由 nostrum 于 2006-8-10 09:49 发表
AW考完了，先冒个泡：）

欢迎欢迎哦:)