issue4 [smile] 第六次作业

yxjessieUID: 194526

TOPIC: ISSUE4 - "No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."
WORDS: 526                  DATE: 2006-8-3

时间到时最后一段只写了一句话。本文完全同意题目观点。

We live in a world that almost all the information is knitting into a seamless web. There is no single subject can exist without any relationship with other areas. As a result, the speaker's idea that no filed of study can improved significantly without the help of other filed of study is right from my point of view.

No single subject can develop without the introduction of other studies. The knowledge existed already appeared; the unknown areas remain unknown for us if nobody tries to find them out. But in the field itself, researchers or experts are always spend all of their energy and intelligence to develop what they can research which can be called the neck of bottle. What they need is flash idea and new research fruit which is possibly from other subjects. Take the economics for example, since the founder, Adam Smith, first established the system of economics, there are so many economist study in this area. Nevertheless, the distinct explosive change happened in this subject is after the introduction of math which is used by the economist to demonstrate their theory and make them convinced to the public. Even today, more and more economists are utilizing the ideas which are from psychology, physics, and sociology to develop their theory and solve the problems of the real world.

As a matter of fact, breakthrough of one subject can also speed the advancement of other areas. Math and physics is a perfect combination here. Galileo and Copernicus are able to examine the aspects of the physical world. However, no principle was available to define what they saw at that time. After several decades, Newton's work in developing calculus allowed him to codify the laws of motion for all the moving bodies. By applying his new form of mathematics to the physical actions he observed, Newton was able to precisely explain what was going on in the nature. Continually, almost all the physics at present are using the complicated math methods which advanced by the mathematicians to achieve the acme of the tower one after another.

Some people will doubt speaker's idea by providing that the pure disciplines such as math are probably developed by itself. Nevertheless, those people overlook a fact that even the development of math is depend on other areas. Without the help of highly developed instruments such as calculus or computers, the mathematicians are likely to calculate a simple statistics in several days even a whole month while with the help of electronic instruments the results will come out in less that one seconds. There are also a lot of famous math puzzles, such as four color problem, been solved until the big and complicated calculators invented.

While is true that every field of study is basically put forward on the foundation on their own knowledge accumulated. Without the help of other subject, no field of subject can be further advanced significantly. We should clear keep such idea in our minds so we can understand the development of the science and our society easier. Moreover, it is the outsiders who bring new aims and instruments and who might enjoy the fruit of the various study.

[ 本帖最后由 yxjessie 于 2006-8-3 20:44 编辑 ]

dychangfengUID: 2216148

TOPIC: ISSUE4 - "No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."
WORDS: 526                  DATE: 2006-8-3

时间到时最后一段只写了一句话。本文完全同意题目观点。

We live in a world that almost all the information is knitting into a seamless web. There is no single subject can exist without any relationship with other areas. As a result, the speaker's idea that no filed of study can improved significantly without the help of other filed of study is right （个人感觉在gre作文中最好避免用right wrong 之类的词，相信作者绝对可以有其它词代替）换成reasonable, sound 等会好看些:)）from my point of view.

No single subject can develop without the introduction of other studies. The knowledge existed already appeared; the unknown areas remain unknown for us if nobody tries to find them out. But in the field itself, researchers or experts are always spend all of their energy and intelligence to develop what they can research which can be called the neck of bottle. What they need is flash idea and new research fruit which is possibly from other subjects. Take the economics for example, since the founder, Adam Smith, first established the system of economics, there are so many economist study in this area. Nevertheless, the distinct explosive change happened in this subject is after the introduction of math which is used by the economist to demonstrate their theory and make them convinced to the public. Even today, more and more economists are utilizing the ideas which are from psychology, physics, and sociology to develop their theory and solve the problems of the real world.

As a matter of fact, breakthrough of one subject can also speed the advancement of other areas. Math and physics is a perfect combination here. Galileo and Copernicus are able to examine the aspects of the physical world. However, no principle was available to define what they saw at that time. After several decades, Newton's work in developing calculus allowed him to codify the laws of motion for all the moving bodies. By applying his new form of mathematics to the physical actions he observed, Newton was able to precisely explain what was going on in the nature. Continually, almost all the physics at present are using the complicated math methods which advanced by the mathematicians to achieve the acme of the tower one after another.（例子后面来些透彻的分析总结，效果会更好）
Some people will doubt speaker's idea by providing that the pure disciplines such as math are probably developed by itself. Nevertheless, those people overlook a fact that even the development of math is depend on other areas. Without the help of highly developed instruments such as calculus or computers, （这些都是现代仪器，在每个学科开始时，他们内部的一些定律确实是自己发展起来的，所以这段不写太绝对就可以了，话说回来，自圆其说，什么都行）the mathematicians are likely to calculate a simple statistics in several days even a whole month while with the help of electronic instruments the results will come out in less that one seconds. There are also a lot of famous math puzzles, such as four color problem, been solved until the big and complicated calculators invented.

While is true that every field of study is basically put forward on the foundation on their own knowledge accumulated. Without the help of other subject, no field of subject can be further advanced significantly. We should clear keep such idea in our minds so we can understand the development of the science and our society easier. Moreover, it is the outsiders who bring new aims and instruments and who might enjoy the fruit of the various study.（开头结尾都满新颖，特别是这最后一句话）
总体感觉：
真佩服你能写仅仅同意的作文，这样实在是很难写好，不过你写得在我看来已经很不错了，如果能把正文第三段改一改，写一下让步的，就更好了。

加油！:victory: