大家来谈谈自己的ISSUE开头的方法

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主要是抛砖引玉,票可以不投,但是大家一定来都说说,讨论讨论自己的ISSUE开头方法.
我就想到了上面的三点,其实很不全面,所以希望大家都来说说自己开头的时候怎么构思的,怎么写的，毕竟开头是作文的门户啊!

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引出古代的一个人,随便一个谁,有名没名的胡乱编造的,
说他在古代也遇到过类似情况
然后在下文当中,
如果举例子,就把他弄出来
然后说:"一些空想家认为,这人在现在会如何如何生活的愉快疯狂"
然后我说:"你丫放~他要是真到了现代肯定死定了.各种各种都不一样~~~现代这么乱~~~"

sarahzhanUID: 2111348

我好像从来没什么章法 想到什么写什么
这样是不是很菜啊

wangxiuyuanUID: 2178240

我一般是先写一些背景知识，随便写一，两句话，主要是把作者的观点引出来(many people, such as the author, may feel that....)，然后再表明自己的观点：basically agree or disagree，结束。一般在50－100字左右。

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哦,对了,昨天我给ETS弄的那个文章是转述了一下题目,改了几个同意单词.然后它给我的反馈是,我有抄袭原文的嫌疑.

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ls
那就是说不让RESTATE题目了？

efficientbillUID: 180781

restate稳定军心,不过我的做法和5楼很像

pewcg8UID: 2143213

restate
我觉得没必要

pewcg8UID: 2143213

顶了继续接受投票

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关于题目引出问题,然后回答问题写出自己观点

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这样,建议投票的XDJM帖几个自己的开头上来!!

cherry_851201UID: 2201461

我觉得是先写一下相关的背景，在指出自己的观点（这时可以不必写太完全），因为在结尾处仍需点题，把所有内容都规划好后，再次补充开头的观点，这样比较全吧～～～

sarahzhanUID: 2111348

我写过的全部issue的开头
有人有兴趣提点建议吗
先谢过了~

TOPIC: ISSUE55 - "Competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at all levels of education."     
Competition, being the central characteristic of our life today, is an indispensable element of a society with high developing speed, which serves as an incentive for any individual and group to the process of self-actualization and self-improvement. While talking about competition in the field of education, most people will recall a transcripts of grades, be it high or low. For the question whether or not the quality of learning at all levels of education has been seriously limited by the competition for high grades, I have my point slightly different from the speaker, who overlooked the merits of competition and varieties of education in every level. To better present my viewpoint let me illustrate it in details.


TOPIC: ISSUE29 - "Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy."
Every individual seeks to be famous in this upset society; celebrities are honored and welcomed everywhere around the world. Indeed, reputation provides with the "lucky dog" comfort or even luxurious life, broad horizon with chances to step into the so-called upper-class society, as well as to make bigger fortune, and feelings of self-actualization etc. Nevertheless, one cannot always be favored somewhere without being taken anything from him in other sides. To be a public figure, one gains a lot while take pains to lose privacy to certain extend.


TOPIC: ISSUE93 - "The concept of 'individual responsibility' is a necessary fiction. Although societies must hold individuals accountable for their own actions, people's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making."
Do people behave under a threat of punishment or out of the pure merciness and kindness from the deep heart? One may argue that individual responsibility is a "man-made" conception with the help of which human beings release their fierce tension from being scolded by themselves. From my point of view, individual should and can take the hold of their own behaviors, especially in nowadays.


TOPIC: ISSUE54 - "History teaches us only one thing: knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today."
A ten-year-old child may ask why we should study history; things happened thousands of years ago while the world is changing with rapid speed. When we confront ourselves with the same question, the speaker underevaluate the function of history by overlooking the probability we should benefit from history study, which not only informs us but also enlightens us in various circumstances. To better present my idea, let me illustrate it in details.


TOPIC: ISSUE63 - "To truly understand your own culture-no matter how you define it-requires personal knowledge of at least one other culture, one that is distinctly different from your own."
When we are talking about culture, most people will not hide their proud of the culture he himself lives in. However, does everyone really hold a true understanding of the culture by which he/she is surrounded? When you hastily show your humbleness while being praised by someone else, when you ask the old guy you run into in the morning "Have you had your breakfast?", and the like, do you realize the culture you live abide by？The speaker asserts that knowledge of at least one different culture is helpful for people to attain the thoroughly understanding of his own culture, I mildly agree with him and let me illustrate my viewpoint in details.


TOPIC: ISSUE144 - "It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."
*a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.
When you are wandering through the hall of an elegant art museum, appreciating the works of famous painter, sculptor, or musician, have you ever wondered in what way these artists came up with such extraordinary pieces of arts? Besides their own talents, we can not neglect a group people standing behind these great works who give their sincere and enlightening advice to improve the quality of the artists' works, who are often referred to as critics, whose contributions we should never put aside.

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开头和结尾是我的痛.......