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[i习作temp] issue26 [smile-B组] 第八次作业,大家请拍!~ [复制链接]

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发表于 2006-8-11 11:54:38 |只看该作者
26"Most people would agree that buildings represent a valuable record of any society's past, but controversy arises when old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes. In such situations, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings so that contemporary needs can be served."

Whether the modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of the historic buildings has always come with controversy. However,(你前面只是提了一个问题,没有任何观点这里就马上来however我觉得不恰当)in my view the valuable historic buildings have inimitable position in a society's culture, people should make every effort to preserve them.

Historic buildings are the symbols of a country's developing process, which should be remembered by the descendant forever, they embody both the historic significance and the contemporary value. Historic building was identified as "solidified history", it witness (witnesses) the important history moments and has its perpetual meaning. Take the triumphal arch for example, triumph means victory, when the French won the French Revolution, they founded the great triumphal to record this unique moment. Their offspring and the later people from all over the world come Paris to admire it. There are many such buildings in the world, with the enduring value and beauty, they would stand there eternally, and they are not only the heirloom of a nation but also the treasure of human race. (这个例子不错)

Moreover, with its unique beauty and profound significance, historic building has its particular economy value, it can be the primary imputes of the economic development, any purpose to damage the valuable buildings is a near-sighted behavior. It is a common sense that those valuable historic buildings are always having world-wide reputation, such as White House, Great Wall, Big Ben, many tourists come to the cities in order to view these buildings,(句号!) if people visit the city but overlook its symbolic construction, it seems that they have never been to this city.(这样说似乎是中国人说法,我觉得应该从他们参观这些名胜古迹的理由来说比较好) So it is very important to protect the valuable historic buildings.

However, if the historic building has little characteristics and no historic value, people should consider tear down it and leave the space for the modern planning. By doing so, it both benefits the government and society. As for the government, they do not have to waste a lot of energy and money to repair and preserve those buildings, they can apply the funds and time in other useful ways. As for the society, the new buildings would provide them much more convenience and bring beauty and tidiness to city. In addition, if the modern building is designed by famous architect inclines to create experimental and futuristic construction, many tourists would like to visit the building. And, it would boost the improvement of local economy and reputation.(偶以为这一段的内容应该在第一段提一下)

In sum, whether a historic building should give precedence to the modern buildings depends on the merit of the historic buildings, for those lacks the historic value people should consider to replace it with another modern building, but for those contain significant value constructions people should spare no effort to preserve them.

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