1000 成都 8月11日 被杀手拒

sammiwei911UID: 2211555

直接来说说我的经历 大家帮忙分析下 谢谢了
M: Good morning sir
VO: morning, 左手食指 放上去 换一只手
M：ok （照做）
VO：so you are going to the university of L````（估计是洛山基大学 反正肯定不是LA VERNE）
M：No, it is the university of XXX
VO：La Verne？where is it ？
M：it located about 35 miles east of XXXXX
VO：（点头）why do you choose this university？
M：because it has a long history and good study tradition 。it foucus on student 。so I choose it.
VO: when did you graduare?
M: 2005
VO: you study in 新东方?
M: yes
VO:how many hours it takes in one week
M: from 3o’clock in the afternoon till 9o’clock in the evening
VO: how much it cost?
M: 1350 yuan every semester
VO :did you have TOFEL score?
M: yes  VO也没再问
VO: what are you doing now?
M: prepared for studying in the USA
VO(在我的156表上写下了1350 记录这个费用.抬头问):what is you father do?
M: my father is the general manager of chengduXXXXXcompany(抬头 眼珠动 好象在反映这个公司是干什么的`)
VO: how much is his salay?
M: it is a family company my parents can earn XXXXXper year(点头 然后在计算这个钱数.)
M:dou you want see the documents about this company?
VO:yes (我就把公司的资料包括收入证明 等东西递进去 他仔细地看了英文那份收入证明 然后随意翻看了下面的材料)说:you mother is the chair man of this company?
M:yes
V0点头 接着问我要房产证 我就递给他了
VO翻看房产证 并且问:which do you live in now?
M:the largest one 他将第一个房产证拿我看 说this?
M:no the last one
VO: I see 对比156表上的地址以及我房产证明上的地址 说:chengdu garden?
M: yes
VO:然后不理我了 又看了下房产证明 继续比对 接下来说:if your study plan did not work ,what is you second plan?眼睛直盯着我
M:I did think about that I have confidence that you will give me the visa (有点中气不足)
皱了下眉头 拿章 盖上 递护照给我
M: sir could you tell me the reasons?
VO: en``` that you have to consider it clearly and then can come back in a few days.

忧郁ShakaUID: 2123647

bad answer to a VO that" you will give me the visa."
为什么选这个学校,我觉得你回答得也不怎样啊...

clement23UID: 203660

感觉你在回答"为什么选这个学校上"回答的很不好,建议你多在精华去看文章,看高手们的分析和2000对答思路贴,不过有个搞不懂,你是本科还是master?学什么的呢?帮顶~等高手来分析拉~

magic_zhaoUID: 2137791

有几点不足：
1，回答选学校原因不好，要从自己角度来说，不能从学校角度说，还是那句话：好学校好专业不一定适合每个人。
2，说参加过新东方不太好，VO完全知道新东方是教什么的。2000时VO不问最好不要再说了。
3，VO: what are you doing now?
不要只说你在准备出国，那样VO认为你又去新东方上课，又专门准备出国，花了很多时间精力，回来可能性就小了。
4，在问到你家庭资金情况时应该主动些。象问到你母亲那里，应该马上把工作收入证明也一起给看，而不是只说一个yes。
5，最后那个问题，要强调去美国读书对你以后发展的重要性和必要性，你的回答太无力了。
多看看版内签经，2000顺利！