【0706G中华龙小组作文大帖】

lih008UID: 2269470

原帖由 Ammmy2000 于 2006-11-10 10:39 发表
建议下，我们在发的文章前面加个统一的符号怎么样，便于查找啊，嘿嘿

这样做严重不符合作文版的规定，现在这种管理模式我们可以很方便的找到我们组任何一个人的任何一次作业了啊。
如果ammmy2000还不明白的话我再重复一遍,按如下步骤操作：
1）进入寄托作文版，先登陆
2）进入GRE作文互动论坛论坛
3）进入置顶的  0706G各作文小组讨论大贴链接汇总 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
4）进入我们小组的大帖
5）在一楼最上面找到你要找的组员的作业帖的楼层，就是每个组员后面的那个括号里的楼层（没有把链接放到相应楼层的组员请赶紧自觉的把他放到相应楼层，以方便整个其他组员，同时也会获得更多的被修改的机会哦。）
6）去到该楼层就可以找到作业了

明白了没有？？？

xbullfrogUID: 2180016

哈哈哈哈
lih008误会Ammmy的意思啦
他的意思是说在每个贴子的前头加个图标什么的
比如什么那个什么大拇指，问号，盾牌之类的
那些图标是在帖子主题前面那一列的

lih008UID: 2269470

原帖由 xbullfrog 于 2006-11-10 12:30 发表
哈哈哈哈
lih008误会Ammmy的意思啦
他的意思是说在每个贴子的前头加个图标什么的
比如什么那个什么大拇指，问号，盾牌之类的
那些图标是在帖子主题前面那一列的

呵呵，不好意思啊。如果真是这样的话那我向Ammmy道歉了，对不起啊。

xbullfrogUID: 2180016

哈哈哈哈，
Ammmy是好同志啊
今天就交作业了，给我很大的压力啊

tao123UID: 2251056

怎样加入该小组啊?

hjackyUID: 2179923

组长同志：
      我们这晚上12点卡网线，你要是凌晨一点传题目 明显对我比较不利啊～而且对你老的身体也不利啊～

lih008UID: 2269470

第三次作业

issue8
It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public.

argument51
The following appeared in a medical newsletter.

"Doctors have long suspected that secondary infections may keep some patients from healing quickly after severe muscle strain. This hypothesis has now been proved by preliminary results of a study of two groups of patients. The first group of patients, all being treated for muscle injuries by Dr. Newland, a doctor who specializes in sports medicine, took antibiotics regularly throughout their treatment. Their recuperation time was, on average, 40 percent quicker than typically expected. Patients in the second group, all being treated by Dr. Alton, a general physician, were given sugar pills, although the patients believed they were taking antibiotics. Their average recuperation time was not significantly reduced. Therefore, all patients who are diagnosed with muscle strain would be well advised to take antibiotics as part of their treatment."

互改顺序：A-D,B-E,C-F,D-G,E-A,F-B,G-C(后一位帮前一位修改)
提交作业最晚时间：下周三晚12：00
提交修改最晚时间：下周六晚12：00
提交总结最晚时间：下周日晚12：00

道歉：由于今天晚上有点事，作业布置晚了，按照小组规定，自我批评一次。

[ 本帖最后由 lih008 于 2006-11-12 09:42 编辑 ]

lih008UID: 2269470

原帖由 hjacky 于 2006-11-11 23:08 发表
组长同志：
      我们这晚上12点卡网线，你要是凌晨一点传题目 明显对我比较不利啊～而且对你老的身体也不利啊～

呵呵，不好意思。刚刚放上来，请原谅。

xbullfrogUID: 2180016

是第三次作业吧？
哈哈
组长
看来今天你的确是有点忙过头了啊

注意休息啊

lih008UID: 2269470

原帖由 xbullfrog 于 2006-11-12 01:17 发表
是第三次作业吧？
哈哈
组长
看来今天你的确是有点忙过头了啊

注意休息啊

恩，看来真的是有点晕头了，严重道歉！！！

xbullfrogUID: 2180016

原帖由 lih008 于 2006-11-9 18:53 发表
建议大家在修改作文时用gter提供的作文修改工具，可以在这里下载https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1，还有使用教程，我刚试了一下，很好用，不过注意方括号[]要在英文输入状态 ...

微软拼音模式下，中英文状态的[]都被认可

Ammmy2000UID: 2265680

周末比较忙，忘记及时交提纲了，今天一定完成任务，呵呵

Ammmy2000UID: 2265680

郁闷这个帖子怎么回事啊

xbullfrogUID: 2180016

原帖由 Ammmy2000 于 2006-11-13 13:07 发表
郁闷这个帖子怎么回事啊

什么帖子?
怎么回事啊？:confused:

[ 本帖最后由 xbullfrog 于 2006-11-13 13:17 编辑 ]

lih008UID: 2269470

各位，到现在为止，我只收到Ammmy2000和hjacky的第一次作业提纲。

Ammmy2000
issue 36
1. Within the ability of public appreciation and  comprehension, the masterpiece created by celebrities could be understood and appreciated by the public. Mark Twain's novel; A father of computer,  Neumann
2. The greatness of individuals can't be decided by their contemporaries since the capacity of comprehension of science and appreciation at art couldn't reach the same level of creator's talent. Galois's Group theory, Van Gogh
3. Under the control of some politicians or religions, some ture theory couldn't be accepted by people, however, the posterities can't be controlled any more, that is why they can understand the theory.

argument 147
1.the author fails to testify the accuracy of this recent survey. In one hand, we can hardly see the number of total people,In another hand, people at different ages may have different preference.
2.if the survey is precise, there is no causal relationship between the games directed at 10 to 25 years old and the popularity of such games.
3.even if the assumptions above are correct and reasonable, the author never convinces us that people will probably buy the video games producted by Whirlwind since the factors effecting the sales are multiplicate.

Lih008
Issue36
1)        On the one hand, many individuals' greatness was recognized by their contemporaries soon after they had delivered great contributions to the society.
证明这个观点主要用了李嘉诚和周恩来的例子
2)        On the other hand, in the long history, there were many individuals whose greatness just could be decided by their offspring for the complex politic and social background at that time or the profundity of the masterpieces the great people brought to the society.
证明这个观点主要用了凡高、哥白尼的例子
3)        Finally, from the above statement, it is not difficult to conclude that whether the greatness of individuals could be decided by the people who live after them or by their contemporaries is related to many factors.

Argument147
1）        In the first place, the survey referred in this argument is not necessarily reasonable.
2）        In the second place, even though the survey is sound, there is no guarantee that people will really play such games which could provide lifelike graphics.
3）        Finally, this argument fails to take into account many other factors which could influence the sales of Whirlwind video games.

Issue36
OPINION: In my opinion, the greatness of individuals is objective, and unless we get the two essential factors--scientific thinking and enough message—which are required to make a true judgment, we cannot expect people at any time to decide.
1 Firstly, it is true that not all the greatness of diverse individuals can be recognized and understood by their contemporaries, not to mention be decided by them.
2 Nevertheless, does that the greatness of individuals cannot be decided by contemporaries equals thatthey can and only can be decided by the people who live after these great persons?Obviously, the answer is no.
3 In fact, in my opinion, the greatness of individuals before is somehow objective, which means no matter what people at any time think of them, their greatness cannot be changed a bit.

hjacky
Issue36
OPINION: In my opinion, the greatness of individuals is objective, and unless we get the two essential factors--scientific thinking and enough message—which are required to make a true judgment, we cannot expect people at any time to decide.
1 Firstly, it is true that not all the greatness of diverse individuals can be recognized and understood by their contemporaries, not to mention be decided by them.
2 Nevertheless, does that the greatness of individuals cannot be decided by contemporaries equals thatthey can and only can be decided by the people who live after these great persons?Obviously, the answer is no.
3 In fact, in my opinion, the greatness of individuals before is somehow objective, which means no matter what people at any time think of them, their greatness cannot be changed a bit.

主要例子：And that's why people in Athens supported the verdict of Socrates’ sentence, and despised Van Goth’s paintings during his life path, and the church  which was also patronized by the contemporary people would burn the scholar Bruno who insisted on his scientific truth, which only turn had turned out to be recognized by people nearly 100 years after his death.

我个人认为：这篇文章很有思想，很有深度。一般，我们中国大陆学生（包括我在内）在写这些艺术、历史性的话题时，总是难于入手，难于表达自己的思想。可是，我自己得反复看这篇文章了。
_By SUBFENG