issue56 [米国有米］bailamo27第五次作业

bailamo27UID: 2191717

(2006-12-11)
Issue56. "Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future."
(政府应该把更多的注意力放在解决当务之急，而不是试图解决将来预期的问题上。) /(issue3)
时间之当务之急和百年大计

syllabus:
1.当前和未来都应关注。
2。为什么要关注当前。
3。为什么不能忽视对未来的关注。
4。总结，两者同等重要。

Full text: (8:25-- 10:15 昏！花了这么长时间，我到底在干嘛啊？晕死了！  417words)
While astronomers are investigating the tremendous and enigmatic universe, we ordinary people are concerning more about our habitat---the earth, where is the only place we can live today.  Once I saw an cartoon, depicting that a son is curious to find out the reason why he's far more taller than both of his parents. His mother tells him because the global is warming. It seems absurd, but it reflects global warming becomes an urgent problem that the mass are talking in daily life and governments are handling with. Nowadays numerous problems deserve close attention by the governments, such as, hunger and poverty, AIDS and cancer, nuclear energy investment, terrorism and so forth. It's obviously to focus on these contemporary problems by governments. Furthermore, we are advocating a sustainable development of the world, anticipated problems of the future should not be ignored at all.

Generally speaking, immediate problems are directly related to the future, sometime it can cause unpredicted consequences, even disasters, without appropriate handling. We are already suffered from the formers' wrong actions, for example, many years ago, people fell trees at great niches, consequently, landslide and water flood are rampant, which cost generations to improve the environment and to prevent the disasters to happen again. So if governments don't pay enough attention to today's regency, it absolutely will lead to plague to next generations. Solving current problems will pave the way for future blueprint, just as the effect of non-trouble foundation for a processing building. (i cited the sentence.)

In the meantime, the governments must concentrate on the future with far-reaching vision while handling with today's problems. Take clone for instance, nowadays, clone technology is a hot spot of society. While some scientists are preparing to clone human, after succeed of cloning several animals, others are discussing the ethical and moral problems, such as the identity of clone men in the future. This complex issue will lead chaos of the whole society, if it's not handled with appropriately. So to the anticipated problems, the governments should not ignore cause they're critical to the future of human beings. When a problem is predicted, we should take it into account, and place it on the agenda.

In sum, solving immediate problems and anticipated problems are equally significant to our human beings. (In sum, we should juxtapose solving both immediate problems and anticipated ones.) They follow like a shadow, one will actually affect another. What we need is a sustainable developing world, and will serve generations by generations.

lzen5UID: 2216060

there is a lot you can improve.

This essay can only score you a 3.

introduction is way too long.

you need more points to support your arguemnet.

merryjeanUID: 2243650

水平有限啊, 改不出来啊,好好啊
可是楼上的为什么说不好呢？
我再努力改改argu吧