Issue50 【CSMY作文互改小组】第三组第二次作业

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Issue50

"In order to improve the quality of instruction at the college and university level, all faculty should be required to spend

time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach."

【翻译】
为了提高大学的教学质量，所有的教职员工应该去校外参加一些和他们教的课程相关的工作

观点：
并非所有的学科的教职员工都应该参加参加outside work，但是有些学科参加了会对本职工作更有裨益


提纲：
1。对于某些学科，偏向于理论方面的学科，则此类outside work不存在
2。对于有些学科，离不开实际应用，所以也不可能不参加outside work
3。对于某些学科，与社会应用相关的程度介于其间，则应该参加而有度

Not only to improve the educational qualitybut also to apply academic achievements to improve professions in certainfields, it is essential to require college faculty to working outside theacademic world in professions of their major. With respect to the differentways in which disciplines serves and benefits the society, although there aresome merits in doing so, it is still arbitrary to adopt this requirement to thefaculty of all academic area. This statement seems reasonable but a bit unrealisticto carry out.

As a matter of fact, in certain areas, nowork can be thought outside academia. Some disciplines are too abstract to beapplied in professions of outside academia directly, although the theory andthinking of them has already deeply applied in social life. The typicalexamples of such kind of discipline are literature, philosophy and other humanitysubjects.The professors of those subjects have nowhere to find work which is relevantto his subjects yet not academic.

Meanwhile, in other areas, the relationshipbetween the academic world and professions outside the academia is so tightly boundedthat they can even hardly be distinguished. There are some disciplines,although they have their theory and principles to research, whose purpose is solelyto make more elaborate work or artifact, for instance, many disciplines of finearts. The faculty should take active part in such outside work to gain theappreciation of both his students and specialties in this field.

Except those disciplines which seem alittle bit extreme, I quite agree with the statement that faculty should attendsome work outside academic world. Especially in many disciplines of science,large amount of most advanced techniques and theories in the past are appliedand adopted into modern industry to motivate the changes of life and growth ofeconomy continuously, while the needs and requirements during this transitionalso summons the new founding and theories, shows directions of future researchand inspires the scientists. In my point of view, There are at least two meritscan be benefited from the faculty of those subjects compliments theiroutside-academia achievement. One is that the professor who solved practicaldifficulties with academic achievement will gain respect and recognition as anexpert in that field. And the professor himself can observe the trends andneeds of current application of his subject so that he may find valuabledirection of research. The other one is that the professor can help his studentbetter prepared to have an understanding of latest career environment,information of the application of techniques, even the needs of current jobmarket. Besides, his practical experience can make his lesson more vivid to raisestudents’ interests.

In conclusion, whether the faculty should berequired to spare their time to work in the profession that is relevant to hissubject outside academia should be judged by conditions. It will improve thequality of education to do so in some area, while some others area will notbenefit from it. Even in those subjects who need that work, we should not overemphasisit which is also detrimental to academic work.

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Not only to improve the educational quality but also to apply academic achievements to improve professions in certain fields,不是很通 it is essential to require college faculty to working outside the academic world in professions of their major. With respect to the different ways in which disciplines serves and benefits the society, although there are some merits in doing so, it is still arbitrary to adopt this requirement to the faculty of all academic area. This statement seems reasonable but a bit unrealistic to carry out.
As a matter of fact, in certain areas, no work can be thought outside academia. Some disciplines are too abstract to be applied in professions of outside academia directly, although the theory and thinking wayof them has already deeply applied ininfluence social life. The typical examples of such kind of disciplines are literature, philosophy and other humanity subjects. The professors of those subjects have nowhere to find work which is relevant to his subjects yet not academic.
Meanwhile, in other areas, the relationship between the academic world and professions outside the academia is so tightly bounded that they can even hardly be distinguished. There are some disciplines, although they have their theory and principles to research, whose purpose is solely to make more elaborate work or artifact, for instance, many disciplines of fine arts. 这句有点乱The faculty should take active part in such 这里用such很奇怪outside work to gain the appreciation of both his students and specialties in this field.
Except those disciplines which seem a little bit extreme, I quite agree with the statement that faculty should attend some work outside academic world. Especially in many disciplines of science, large amount of most advanced techniques and theories in the past are applied and adopted into modern industry to motivate the changes of life and growth of economy continuously, while the needs and requirements during this transition also summons the new founding and theories, shows directions of future research and inspires the scientists.这句话我还是没懂 In my point of view, There are at least two merits can be benefited from the faculty of those subjects compliments their outside-academia achievement. 这句？One is that the professor who solved practical difficulties with academic achievement will gain respect and recognition as an expert in that field. And the professor himself can observe the trends and needs of current application of his subject so that he may find valuable direction of research. The other one is that the professor can help his student better prepared to have an understanding of latest career environment, information of the application of techniques, even the needs of current job market. Besides, his practical experience can make his lesson more vivid to raise students’ interests.
In conclusion, whether the faculty should be required to spare their time to work in the profession that is relevant to his subject outside academia and should be judged by conditions. It will improve the quality of education to do so in some area, while some others area will not benefit from it. Even in those subjects who need that work, we should not overemphasisit which is also detrimental to academic work结尾段很好的，最后一句这个overemphasisit 是什么意思？


总的看来，文章还是比较流畅的~我觉插入居多了点，显得有点乱
嘻嘻，水平有限，有什么不对的地方见谅……