issue185 【米国有米】寒假第5天1－31

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185."Scandals—whether in politics, academia, or other areas—can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."

提纲：
1、  丑闻是存在的，而且它可以吸引人的注意力。
2、  丑闻可以把平时人们看不到的东西暴露出来，让你了解真相。
3、  但是人们不应该过分注意丑闻，而要把主要注意力放在人们的主要贡献上。


Scandals, which focused our attention on problems we did not know, always can tell more facts whether in politics, academia, or other areas. Although the scandals would tell us more, we should notice the mainly contribution in these fields, but not put all of our attentions on it.

Admittedly, scandals exist in almost every field of our life, which always attract most attention when they are showed to population. They are something that people did not know in normal life, because of which they are interested to every one once reported. In politics, some officers are corrupt and defalcate using the authority hold by them. In the normal work, they are pretend to be equity and probity instead of the greed when corrupting. In the field of academia, also, some professors who want to gain some achievements in their research fields go to copy others’ research report or work out some data without experiments at all. Scandals can also be found in some other areas as a result of the lazy lust of the human being.

The reason why the scandals are attractive is that the scandals themselves are the things and process which people can not know before they are reported, which is also the reason why scandals are useful at the same time. Once some scandals are reported, people will have their new cognition of our living environment, such as the government, academic field and so forth. For example, considering the information given by scandals in the process of the management of government, the popular would have their new suggestion of leaders and their management. By the way, the government itself may have a progress by showing up some problems and then solving them. Scandals can not only explore something that are hided, but also and more importantly promotion the improving of our life and removal of the shortages around us.

At the same time, we should concede that the scandals are just a part of our life, as a result, we should pay our most attention to the mainly contribution of other people. Take Clinton who is the former president of United States as an example. He had a scandal which was almost cause the impeach to him. Meanwhile, in the management of him and his cabinet, United States had its prosperity of development in his history which embodies in not only finance and economy but also some other fields such as education, health and so on. Whether Clinton is a excellent leader and president or not? It is ordinary that we should not neglect all his contribution only focus on his mistakes, because evaluating a person only by mistake he or she have is not advisable. In the matter of fact, most people agree with this according to their behaviors when Clinton left White House. They gave more applauses and praise to him because of the contribution than scolding caused be scandal. Therefore, we should appraise a person according on the mainly benefits toward society, instead of the scandals he or she has.

To sum up, the scandals are useful of improving our society and benefit to our developing. At the same time, after the scandals are reported and already solved, we should consider a person subjective and remember the contribution of him or her instead of scandals.

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提纲：
1、  丑闻是存在的，而且它可以吸引人的注意力。
2、  丑闻可以把平时人们看不到的东西暴露出来，让你了解真相。
3、  但是人们不应该过分注意丑闻，而要把主要注意力放在人们的主要贡献上。


Scandals, which focused our attention on problems we did not know, always can tell more facts whether in politics, academia, or other areas. Although the scandals would tell us more, we should notice the mainly contribution in these fields, but not put all of our attentions on it.

Admittedly, scandals exist in almost every field of our life, which always attract most attention when they are showed to population. They are something that people did not know in normal life, because of which they are interested to every one once reported. In politics, some officers are corrupt and defalcate using the authority hold by them. In the normal work, they are pretend to be equity and probity instead of the greed when corrupting. In the field of academia, also, some professors who want to gain some achievements in their research fields go to copy others’ research report or work out some data without experiments at all. Scandals can also be found in some other areas as a result of the lazy lust of the human being. [题目的核心是在说丑闻是否有用，而作者确实在说丑闻是否存在？ 感觉有点不是很切题]

The reason why the scandals are attractive is that the scandals themselves are the things and process which people can not know before they are reported, which is also the reason why scandals are useful at the same time. Once some scandals are reported, people will have their new cognition of our living environment, such as the government, academic field and so forth. For example, considering the information given by scandals in the process of the management of government, the popular would have their new suggestion of leaders and their management. By the way, the government itself may have a progress by showing up some problems and then solving them. Scandals can not only explore something that are hided, but also and more importantly promotion the improving of our life and removal of the shortages around us.[这段有例子，但是对例子的分析还不够]

At the same time, we should concede that the scandals are just a part of our life, as a result, we should pay our most attention to the mainly contribution of other people. Take Clinton who is the former president of United States as an example. He had a scandal which was almost cause the impeach to him. Meanwhile, in the management of him and his cabinet, United States had its prosperity of development in his history which embodies in not only finance and economy but also some other fields such as education, health and so on. Whether Clinton is a excellent leader and president or not? It is ordinary that we should not neglect all his contribution only focus on his mistakes, because evaluating a person only by mistake he or she have is not advisable. In the matter of fact, most people agree with this according to their behaviors when Clinton left White House. They gave more applauses and praise to him because of the contribution than scolding caused be scandal. Therefore, we should appraise a person according on the mainly benefits toward society, instead of the scandals he or she has.[如果把最后一句话用来做TS， 把第一句话用来结尾，就好了，不然看了开头一句，觉得论述的主体变成了人们而不是丑闻了]

To sum up, the scandals are useful of improving our society and benefit to our developing. At the same time, after the scandals are reported and already solved, we should consider a person subjective and remember the contribution of him or her instead of scandals.