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sisong2003UID: 2154005

TOPIC: ISSUE83 - "Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people."
WORDS: 498         TIME: 上午 00:47:00          DATE: 2007-2-1
提纲
观点：同意
1.       荒野应当保护
2.       即使偏远地区也要保护
3.       政府应该在保护中起关键作用
Should government preserve publicly owned wilderness areas even though they are extremely remote in their natural state, as the speaker asserts? I strongly agree with the speaker that these wilderness areas should be protected even though they are extremely remote and government should play a vital role in this preservation.

To begin with, wilderness areas should be preserved for their importance in ecosystem. As an indispensable component of the ecosystem, wilderness areas contribute not only to the ecological balance but also to social health and well being. Among all these value, the most significant one is biodiversity. For example, in the late 1970s, due to the Yellow Dwarf virus (YDV), more than 25 million acres of rice was dead in Southeast Asia. And the scientists wanted to find out some rice species that can resist this YDV. But unfortunately they gain nothing after checking all the rice gene pool in the world. Several years later, some scientists found a wild rice which can resist the YDV in a wilderness in India, and by cross-fertilizing they eventually dissipated this disaster. So this example aptly illustrates the importance of wilderness areas to human beings. And we should try our best to protect the wilderness areas.

In addition, though some extremely remote wilderness areas are accessible to only a few people, they should also be preserved. As know to all, the world is an indivisible whole, so one part damaged will soon transmit to the rest. For example, the depletion of Ozone layer in Antarctica aptly manifests this. Due to the overuse of refrigerator and other electric appliance, a lot of Freon was spread to the atmosphere and thus caused the increasing depletion Ozone layer. The Ozone layer prevents harmful ultraviolet radiation, thus depletion of Ozone layer may cause weakening immunity of human being and global warming. Therefore, even with respect to some remote areas, we should do whatever we can to preserve these wilderness areas, and consequently protecting ourselves.

Finally, government should play a key role in the preservation of wilderness areas. As the government has far more advantaged functions such as legislation, it can protect wilderness much better than other nongovernmental organizations or individuals. For example, there is an unofficial organization called Wild Yak Team in Tibet protecting Tibetan Antelope. Comparing to the governmental preservation, this team has several disadvantages. First, the team members must work full time to combat those illegal hunters and thus they have no financial supports. Second, they have limited members and they have no right to punish those illegal hunters. To the contrary, the government can establish some special laws by legislation and it had enough financial budgets. The Wilderness Act of 1964 established the National Wilderness Preservation can best prove this. Thus, the government should take the major responsibility to preserve the wilderness areas.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that no matter how remote these wilderness areas are, government should preserve the wilderness areas for the benefits of present people and future generations.

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TOPIC: ISSUE83 - "Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people."
WORDS: 498         TIME: 上午 00:47:00          DATE: 2007-2-1
提纲
观点：同意
1.       荒野应当保护
2.       即使偏远地区也要保护
3.       政府应该在保护中起关键作用
Should government preserve publicly owned wilderness areas even though they are extremely remote in their natural state, as the speaker asserts? I strongly agree with the speaker that these wilderness areas should be protected even though they are extremely remote and government should play a vital role in this preservation.

To begin with, wilderness areas should be preserved for their importance in ecosystem. As an indispensable component of the ecosystem, wilderness areas contribute not only to the ecological balance but also to social health and well being. Among all these value, the most significant one is biodiversity. For example, in the late 1970s, due to the Yellow Dwarf virus (YDV), more than 25 million acres of rice was dead in Southeast Asia. And the scientists wanted to find out some rice species that can resist this YDV. But unfortunately they gain nothing after checking all the rice gene pool in the world. Several years later, some scientists found a wild rice which can resist the YDV in a wilderness in India, and by cross-fertilizing they eventually dissipated this disaster. So this example aptly illustrates the importance of wilderness areas to human beings. And we should try our best to protect the wilderness areas.
手段强调wilderness areas 的重要性，使1，2两段有层次，挺好！

In addition, though some extremely remote wilderness areas are accessible to only a few people, they should also be preserved. As know to all, the world is an indivisible whole, so one part damaged will soon transmit to the rest. For example, the depletion of Ozone layer in Antarctica aptly manifests this. Due to the overuse of refrigerator不太合适吧 and other electric appliance, a lot of Freon was spread to the atmosphere and thus caused the increasing depletion Ozone layer. The Ozone layer prevents harmful ultraviolet radiation, thus depletion of Ozone layer may cause weakening immunity of human being and global warming. Therefore, even with respect to some remote areas, we should do whatever we can to preserve these wilderness areas, and consequently protecting ourselves.
这段说的是间接伤害，最后点出wilderness areas ，不错。

Finally, government should play a key role in the preservation of wilderness areas. As the government has far more advantaged functions such as legislation, it can protect wilderness much better than other nongovernmental organizations or individuals. For example, there is an unofficial organization called Wild Yak Team in Tibet protecting Tibetan Antelope. Comparing to the governmental preservation, this team has several disadvantages. First, the team members must work full time to combat those illegal hunters and thus they have no financial supports. Second, they have limited members and they have no right to punish those illegal hunters. To the contrary, the government can establish some special laws by legislation and it had enough financial budgets指代不明？. The Wilderness Act of 1964 established the National Wilderness Preservation can best prove this怎么prove了. Thus, the government should take the major responsibility to preserve the wilderness areas.
大家都用了Tibetan Antelope的例子，但是，你用的角度更好，学习中....
In conclusion, I strongly agree that no matter how remote these wilderness areas are, government should preserve the wilderness areas for the benefits of present people and future generations.

发现我和你每次思路都有共同点，可能是咱们一起写得多了，看了你的文章，自然就想起来我的了，有个共同点是咱俩都是靠例子撑文章的字数，例子一定要围绕TS展开，否则就空洞了。看specialist and generalist 5分那篇文章就明白了。
加油，我们几个也快考了！！

sisong2003UID: 2154005

thank you,由于issue和argument提纲都没写完，着急中