ISSUE 4【0706G－cheer作文互改小组第一次作业】 思路啊思路啊 飘走了~~

christine-sevenUID: 2132371

请猛拍吧。ISSUE思路为什么总是在最需要的时候都飘走了:o ~~~
希望大家能给点思路上的建议，苦恼中...

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I strongly agree with the speaker's viewpoint that advancement in every field of study benefits significantly from the knowledge and experience of outside studies. Although exceptional cases may exist, which are so rare that I can hardly conceive, I agree with him for the following two reasons: first, every field of study in human endeavor bears some correlation in themselves; second, new breakthroughs of one study can exert an enormous impact to that of other fields of study.

The first and the foremost reason why I fundamentally agree with the speaker is that, in my point of view, every field of human endeavors are closely connected with each other. There are not many studies can exist isolated from society, because society, by nature, is an intricate web knitted by countless different threads. Consider the most widely used computer we can now see nearly everywhere in our everyday life. Computers can never be invented or highly advanced, if the study of mathematics are not so well developed, which enables the computer to conduct complicated and tedious calculating effectively and efficiently; or if the study of materials have never been introduced, which makes possible that computers today are so much compacted and easily portable.  Besides, consider the study of sociology, which, in itself, is a discipline that have so rich a background and so complex a context, with each studies of anthropology, history, arts, comparative literatures, business, statistics, so on and so forth, nearly every corner of the world involved.

The second reason why I strongly stand by the speaker's side is that breakthroughs of one certain field of study can be a powerful stimulus to that of other studies. In my observation, although each specific field is different from others in appearance, they have, in general, analogous model and pattern in themselves. Take train, the most frequent-used means of transportation when people conducting long-distance travel, for example. It is the advancement and breakthrough of physics science which emerges constantly throughout the history that drives this delicate mechanism to move forward at an incredibly ever-increasing speed. From its very first use of steam engine, to the electricity-motivated phase, and to application of the study of electromagnetic, the history of the train development is a history consisted of many the most cutting-edge breakthroughs in physics science.

To sum up, although in very few exceptional cases, the advancement of a certain study confines within its own realm, nearly every field of study of human endeavors bears some correlation with each other to a certain extent; and every breakthrough of a specific study can make a great difference to the advancement and development of other fields of study.

caiminUID: 2303220

对于完全赞同的文章，能正面证明就行，所以在观点上基本上没什么改的。但是，个人认为，issue 这篇文章还是要兼顾一下问题的复杂性，这样分析的才会更深入一些！

I strongly agree with the speaker's viewpoint that advancement in every field of study benefits significantly from the knowledge and experience of outside studies. Although exceptional cases may exist, which are so rare that I can hardly conceive, I agree with him (the speaker) for the following two reasons: first, every field of study in human endeavor bears some correlation in themselves; second, new breakthroughs of one study can exert an enormous impact to (on) that of other fields of study.
The first and the foremost reason why I fundamentally agree with the speaker is that, in my point of view, every field of human endeavors are closely connected with each other. There are not many studies can exist isolated from society, because society, by nature, is an intricate web knitted by countless different threads. Consider the most widely used computer we can now see nearly everywhere in our everyday life. Computers can never be invented or highly advanced, if the study of mathematics are not so well developed, which enables the computer to conduct complicated and tedious calculating (calculations) effectively and efficiently; or if the study of materials have never been introduced, which makes possible that computers today are so much compacted and easily portable.  Besides, consider the study of sociology, which, in itself, is a discipline that have (is) so rich a background and so complex a context, with each studies of anthropology, history, arts, comparative literatures, business, statistics, so on and so forth, nearly every corner of the world involved.
The second reason why I strongly stand by the speaker's side is that breakthroughs of one certain field of study can be a powerful stimulus to that of other studies. In my observation, although each specific field is different from others in appearance, they have, in general, analogous model and pattern (models and patterns) in themselves. Take train, the most frequent-used means of transportation when people conducting long-distance travel, for example. It is the advancement and breakthrough of physics (physical) science which emerges constantly throughout the history that drives this delicate mechanism to move forward at an incredibly ever-increasing speed. From its very first use of steam engine, to the electricity-motivated phase, and to application of the study of electromagnetic (electromagnetics), the history of the train development is a history consisted of many the most cutting-edge breakthroughs in physics science.
To sum up, although in very few exceptional cases, the advancement of a certain study confines within its own realm, nearly every field of study of human endeavors bears some correlation with each other to a certain extent; and every breakthrough of a specific study can make a great difference to the advancement and development of other fields of study.


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