issue11 欢迎大家拍砖，谢谢

宇文化天UID: 2236904

11. All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems.
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Nowadays our human beings not only have achieved great improvement and built a colorful civilization, but also have made many serious problems all over the world. If we don’t solve the problems well, they might threaten the live of our race and might have very bad affection to the future of the earth. So I think the speaker’s idea that all nations help to build a global university designed to engage students to solve the world most persistent social problems has significant meaning.

Although different countries are not in the same situation. Many of them are facing the similar social problems, and many problems have the same ground. No nation can solve the problem only by itself. For example, pollution and the ozone problem. We all breathe the air and drink the water from the same planet. We can image that if one country has serious air pollution, do you think the people in the neighbor country can breathe the clean air? The answer is no. And the ozone is our world’s, no its problem will effect the whole world no just one country. So does many other problems. There is border between people from different countries, but there is no boundary of the problems in different countries. This global university can offer a place to discuss and to solve these problems. The youth worldwide can work out the problems by mutual understanding and cooperation in the global university.

Admittedly, there are many different culture and religion in the world. Different nations have different ideas about some problems. They are disagree with each other, this condition causes many new problems. For instance, war, culture crisis, religion crisis and so on.. why Muslim don’t like west world? Why Arab fight with Israel year by year? These problems all caused by this reason. The global university also build a platform that different countries could know each other and they learn to respect each other. People from different nations can communicate with each other and in this process they can understand each other. This problem can easily be solved by this way.

There are two sides for every coin. We must pay attention to some problems, otherwise the global university will be a failure. The rule in the university should be fair to every one from different nations. We should build a democratic environment in the university and hear the different sound from every side. So that the global university will not become the tool of some super powers.

Youth are the future of our human being. The global university is not only a place where they can learn the method to solve the problem, but also a good place for them to learn to cooperate with each other and learn the international spirit. When they graduate from the university, they will play the important role to build our world a beautiful garden.

In sum, building a global university is useful and necessary for us to solve the world's most persistent social problems.

[ 本帖最后由 宇文化天 于 2007-2-24 23:58 编辑 ]

MrCanantUID: 2284428

晕...你比我写得好多了,我就说你的例子比我多比我好吧.思路很清晰,赞一个!!!

disyooUID: 2223964

Nowadays our human beings not only have achieved great improvement and built a colorful civilization, but also have made many serious problems all over the world. If we don’t solve the problems well, they might threaten the live of our race and might have very bad affection to the future of the earth. So I think the speaker’s idea that all nations help to build a global university designed to engage students to solve the world most persistent social problems has significant meaning.

Although different countries are not in the same situation. Many of them are facing the similar social problems, and many problems have the same ground. No nation can solve the problem only by itself. For example, pollution and the ozone problem,which is the problems for countries and even problems for the whole world. We all breathe the air and drink the water from the same planet. We can image that if one country has serious air pollution, do you think the people in the neighbor country can breathe the clean air? The answer is no. And the ozone is our world’s, no its problem will effect the whole world no just one country.我觉得没有必要用大量的语句论述污染到底应该属于谁负责，而应该重点论述污染问题如果在全球大学里讨论会更容易解决。可以从技术共享和节省资金角度论述。 So does many other problems. There is border between people from different countries, but there is no boundary of the problems in different countries. This global university can offer a place to discuss and to solve these problems. The youth worldwide can work out the problems by mutual understanding and cooperation in the global university.

Admittedly, there are many different culture and religion in the world. Different nations have different ideas about some problems. They are disagree with each other, this condition causes many new problems. For instance, war, culture crisis, religion crisis and so on.. why Muslim don’t like west world? Why Arab fight with Israel year by year? These problems all caused by this reason. The global university also build a platform that different countries could know each other and they learn to respect each other. People from different nations can communicate with each other and in this process they can understand each other. More understanding will lead to less struggle, So This problem can easily be solved by this way.（写中东战争给老美不太好吧？）

There are two sides for every coin. We must pay attention to some problems, otherwise the global university will be a failure. The rule in the university should be fair to everyone from different nations. So in such nuiversity,We should build a democratic environment in the university and hear the different sound from every side. So that the global university will not become the tool of some super powers.(这段我觉得观点有些模糊，否的力度不是很大，应该多强调下what will be going on in the university without fair rules.)

Youth are the future of our human being. The global university is not only a place where they can learn the method to solve the problem, but also a good place for them to learn to cooperate with each other and learn the international spirit. When they graduate from the university, they will play the important role to build our world a beautiful garden.

In sum, building a global university is useful and necessary for us to solve the world's most persistent social problems.

PS。挺好的我觉得，只是最后写的论据不是很充分，可能是时间不够把？宗教那一段写的挺好
在结构上我觉得lz是并并转吧？前面两个并可以用递进关系处理一下会更好。

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-615693-1-1.html

[ 本帖最后由 disyoo 于 2007-2-25 15:22 编辑 ]