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[i习作temp] Issue212 【0706G-LOVEAW小组】第十二次作业 by iq28 [复制链接]

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发表于 2007-2-25 17:08:04 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
这次如果要按时完成的化估计body可能就只有两个了|||
缺点,语言很失败,句子写得也非常仓促
主要是审题用了很长时间,而且还没有申得准|||
第一个body写了一半改了很多次,先前偏重于'如果一条路不通那就得换别的路' 明显是错误的
段内的论证结构我比较满意,大概就是这两天看和想的结果了
当然几天不写issue导致现在速度下降 这个也情有可原^_^
自己再鼓励下自己|||~~

TOPIC: ISSUE212 - "If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable."
WORDS: 661          TIME: 0:52:45          DATE: 2007-2-25

In my point of view, the assertion of the author that any means can be considered if one is willing to pursue a valuable goal is premature for the intricacy of the issue. I will discuss them in the following details.

Undoubtedly, to overcome all the difficulties in the way to the final success in natural science and technology, one should take various means to achieve the goal. Take Thomas Edison for example, before he at last invented the light, Edison had already failed hundreds of times. After each failure he changed one kind of the materials of the light, but still this did not work. In the end, Edison found that it is the air in the glass ball that prevented him from success. Immediately, the vacuum glass ball with a bamboo wick in it became the first lamp in the world. It can be imagined that, if Edison did not switch from changing the materials to drive the air in the glass ball away, the birth of lamp may be centuries later. Among the ways to a certain goal, oftentimes merely one method is not enough to succeed, or at least may waste the people who pursue the goal myriad energy and time. If he can climb the peak from other plan sides, double achievements can be made with only half efforts. Therefore it is significant to use the very means to strike directly to the target.

However, when the discussion comes from the naive science and technology to other realms, like social problems and politics, the conclusion may be fundamentally different. Unlike the forgoing pursuits, the goals in the politics involve in the connections and beneficial conflicts between people and people, organizations and organizations, or even nations and nations. Behaviors without the deliberation of the whole situation will bring about disorder or even calamity to the human race, just as it did in the Second World War. Hitler and his Nazi Germany posed the world violence and slaughter for the better living space for the German race. Although the freedom world consequentially defeated Hitler, no nation is indeed the winner of the cruel war. Hitler not only failed to made his Empire, but caused the long time recession in west Europe after the war. One man's goal entirely possible may be the same one of others. As the illustration shows us, rational ways should be taken rather than the one-sided actions. Merely trying to apply the way which can maximize the benefits of their own rather than taking cautious deliberation of the others around them and then discuss to a contract will inevitably bring about countless infightings, legal battles, boycotts, and finally, the wars. Each of the result apparently counters the original purpose of the irresponsible activity.

Martin Luther King has set us a lasting model. The way he took to fight for the rights for the blacks is not the direct one, but the non-violence protest as he realized that he must lend a proper and gradual improve which white men will not fear. Perhaps it seems to be more effective for King to provoke the disappointment and fury of the blacks that they will hunt their liberty with violence; however, history has proved that King's endure strategy is the best one. Although King was murdered, his campaign succeeded, and his assertion at last has been accepted by the mainstream of America. If the violent actions were taken towards the white men, the troubles obviously cannot assuage but became worse and severer. Hence, in the long term, those methods which appear useful in the short time may not really work at last; therefore it is stupid to take them.

In summary, there is no denying that all means should be taken into consideration to purse the goal; nevertheless, this does not equal to the application of these ways. Careful scrutiny and consideration should be conducted before they take their ways, otherwise the prosperity may be vague, or dim.
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