issue159 oceanus4月作文小组3月26日作业

oceanusUID：2283238

TOPIC: ISSUE159 - "The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds."
WORDS: 375         TIME: 01:04:04          DATE: 2007-3-26

It is sure that the human mind will always be superior to machines.

First of all, man's brain is mysterious and is of infinite potential. It almost can accomplish everything only if we want. Observing the history of human, people invent things to satisfy human's need no matter how difficult they will affront. When we want to bake food, we create fire. When we need light in night, Newton invents electric light. When we fell it is too slow to work, we create carriage, bicycle, automobile and train. In sum, human can make any kind of machine to serve us at the right moment.

Secondly, machines are created by human. It is lack of the ability of study. In most instances, machines are only crusts. They will act as we teach them. They are in our control. For example, we can only use the mouse and the keyboard to control the computer, and it will work by our conducting. The machines in factories is conduced by the beforehand designed programs. Even in some times, we lose control of them; we also can restart them conveniently. Maybe there are some machines which can study something, but their study abilities are limit. A super-computer can learn form playing chess with man using certain arithmetic, but the computer is limited by the arithmetic, it can only work with the arithmetic and can’t beyond it.

Thirdly, there are several premises for machines’ working in the course of nature. Most machines, computers, cars, airplanes, lights and telephones, can’t work without electricity. Many of them must be started by man. On the contrary, man can do everything what he wants only if what he does is legitimate.

Finally, man is conscious. One has an awareness of one’s environment and one’s own existence, sensations, and thoughts. Man will have the consciousness of transcend others when he is exceeded, but machines will not have. So, maybe machines will have an enormous ability, but that’s only temporary. Man can surpass them with the consciousness of progress.

Overall, machines are made by man. They are only the produce of human wisdom. They have no consciousness and can not work without man’s help in most instances. So, the human mind will always be superior to machines.

vivien3773UID：2308910

It is sure that the human mind will always be superior to machines.

First of all, man's brainis mysterious and is of infinite potential. It almost can accomplisheverything （only if） we want. Observing the history of human, peopleinvent things to satisfy human's needs no matter how difficult they willaffront. When we want to bake food, we create fire. When we need lightin night, (Newton)Edisom invents electric light. When we fell it is too slow towork, we create carriage, bicycle, automobile and train. In sum, humancan make any kind of machine to serve us at the right moment.

Secondly, machines arecreated by human. (It)they (is) lack (of )the ability of study. In mostinstances, machines are only crusts. They will act as we teach them.They are in our control. For example, we can only use the mouse and thekeyboard to control the computer, and it will work by our conducting.The machines in factories is conduced by the beforehand designedprograms. Even in some times, we lose control of them; we also canrestart them conveniently. Maybe there are some machines which canstudy something, but their study abilities are limit. (A super-computercan learn form playing chess with man using certain arithmetic, but thecomputer is limited by the arithmetic, it can only work with thearithmetic and can’t beyond it.)觉得最后这句应该调整一下说法，读起来不顺。

Thirdly, there are severalpremises for machines’ working in the course of nature. Most machines,computers, cars, airplanes, lights and telephones, can’t work withoutelectricity. Many of them must be started by man. On the contrary, mancan do everything what he wants only if what he does is legitimate.

Finally, man is conscious.（One）he has an awareness of (one’s ) the environment and (one’s ) his own existence,sensations, and thoughts. Man will have the consciousness of transcendothers when he is exceeded, but machines will not have.这句读起来费解 So, maybemachines will have an enormous ability, but that’s only temporary. Mancan surpass them with the consciousness of progress.这句有点问题，机器有的能力恐怕人很难超过。这段的主要意思应该是说人是有意识的，最后这句总结和这段话不太对应。

Overall, machines are madeby man. They are only the produce of human wisdom. They have noconsciousness and can not work without man’s help in most instances.So, the human mind will always be superior to machines.

vivien3773UID：2308910

我觉得每一个论点应该再深入展开点，分析的还不够透彻。
修改不当出见谅哦。
加油。！！;)

oceanusUID：2283238

恩，好的，谢谢vivien的建议