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发表于 2007-3-28 22:19:25 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

还是不知道些什么,论据也少,好痛苦啊,呵呵
TOPIC: ISSUE120 - "So much is new and complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little

guidance for living in the present."
WORDS: 354          TIME: 1:05:00          DATE: 2007-3-28

Though the understanding of the past is not relevant to our daily life and so much is new and complex today, it also can provides guidance for living in the present.

First, it promotes the development of our society to explore the nature. Just think that if the Wright brothers did not think about how the bird can fly, they won't invent the first heavier than air flying machine, what we now know as the aeroplane, and it is difficult to image what the vision of the world will be, and how can we fly in the air freely as we do today? Moreover, if we do not investigate the laws of the ocean, how can we forecast the tsunami to protect ourselves. Otherwise, if we do not study why the sun rises from the east and falls to the west, when we will know the world is not even but rotund? In short, for as much as the researches of the nature, man invents a lot of things and benefits our society.

Secondly, in the course of investigating the unfathomed puzzles in society, we can learn how to communicate with others felicitously. For example, after we have studied the ethical totem which we did not understand, we come to discern that it is the belief of their own nation and we should respect it. When we know that every nation has their own ceremonies, we begin to understand each other, and when we visit them, we will not be embarrassed by the reason of misunderstanding the ceremonies of other nations.

Finally, with the investigation of the economy, we can explain many puzzles that we did not understand before. Then we can use what we have leant to develop our country. In the study of why stocks rise or fall, we know more about the laws of the development of the economy. From the economy crisis of Asia, we understand that we should optimize the system of economy in order to long-drawn development.

In sum, the puzzles in the past are our wealth. We should investigate them deeply, and we will benefit from it.
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发表于 2007-3-29 12:24:15 |只看该作者
Though the understanding ofthe past is not relevant to our daily life and so much is new andcomplex today, it also can provides guidance for living in the present.

First, it promotes thedevelopment of our society to explore the nature. Just think that ifthe Wright brothers did not think about how the bird can fly, theywon't invent the first heavier than air flying machine, what we nowknow as the aeroplane, and it is difficult to image what the vision ofthe world will be, and how can we fly in the air freely as we do today?Moreover, if we do not investigate the laws of the ocean, how can weforecast the tsunami to protect ourselves. Otherwise, if we do notstudy why the sun rises from the east and falls to the west, when wewill know the world is not even but rotund? In short, for as much asthe researches of the nature, man invents a lot of things and benefitsour society. (觉得讲的是研究自然现象对人类的好处,可能您的意思是对自然现象的历史的研究,但觉得把这作为对历史的研究不太贴切。)

Secondly, in the course ofinvestigating the unfathomed puzzles in society, we can learn how tocommunicate with others felicitously. For example, after we havestudied the ethical totem which we did not understand, we come todiscern that it is the belief of their own nation and we should respectit. When we know that every nation has their own ceremonies, we beginto understand each other, and when we visit them, we will not beembarrassed by the reason of misunderstanding the ceremonies of othernations.

Finally, with theinvestigation of the economy, we can explain many puzzles that we didnot understand before. Then we can use what we have leant to developour country. In the study of why stocks rise or fall, we know moreabout the laws of the development of the economy. From the economycrisis of Asia, we understand that we should optimize the system ofeconomy in order to long-drawn development.

In sum, the puzzles in the past are our wealth. We should investigate them deeply, and we will benefit from it.

我觉得文章没有强调题目中现在世界的复杂性和在复杂的世界中对过去的研究有没有用。
我想应该在切合题目的基础上安排文章。
我这篇也写得很头痛。

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