ibt凤凰涅磐小组 第四次作业

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1 抱歉晚交作业，因为课业太重，又加上上周两门期末考试
2 对于批改谁的，布置就一定会完成，但是，可能会晚一阵，对不住大家拉，我尽量跟上大家的步伐吧
3 现在我的写作，主要是为了形成自己的模式，并且搜集素材，所以，比较钝。但是很高兴能与大家分享。
enclosed material about MARK TWAIN (no.6)
4 我的作文先让word自查拼写错误拉。正确单词在后面的括号里

谢谢大家拉，辛苦了

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please the team leader, moon, pay attention to this enclosure, thanks a million!


Personal opinions:
About writingI think our writing assignments should be classed into the different group according to its required contents, in order to go through the total before the exam.
So I propose the team leader tell us the No of the each writing assignments. And then after reading the related items, we can write the model compacted with same examples and same conclusions.

老人青年
No, 3 writing assignment
Does u agree or disagree: young people enjoy life more than older people
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

I can not find this in the pool.

But it seemly resembles No. 126
126. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
参考分析：
不能同意。nothing是一个绝对修饰词。
确实，大多数情况下，年龄大一些的人有更多的经验，年轻人要向他们学习。举例。
然而，年龄大不一定等于懂得多。有很多时候哪怕很小的孩子也可以教我们很多东西。举例。

人品问题+ 交友问题

No, 4 writing assignment
It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor。Which kind of people would you prefer to make friends? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

The primitive item should be:
What do you want most in a friend — someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.

The similar ones:
15. Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
参考分析：
共有8道题问及各种人的qualities或者characteristics。[103]提供了最好的答案：intelligence; honesty; a sense of humor。这些都是所有的人都应具备的基本优点。类似的还有optimistic and positive; politeness; loyalty; perseverance; justice等等。[46]要求回答Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture?而以上提到的各个特征都是remained unchanged in any culture, and any period of time的——相对容易回答(只需要说"从来就没有变过"就可以了)。
相关题目：[18]、[22]、[46]、[62]、[93]、[103]、[179]。另外，174题的作文中(这一代人与上一代人有什么不同？)可以用一段的篇幅来描述一些不曾改变过的东西。

18. What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

22. We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.

46. What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

93. Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

103. In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you write your answer, you are not limited to the examples listed in the question.

179. What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer

About the speaking:
There are also rules:
It is appreciated for what the team leader do for us, however, maybe we could think how to make the preparing procedure much easier to follow.

No.4 assignment:
1. Describe a book that you think is interesting
2.家长要约束孩子看的电视节目还是孩子可以看他们想看的任何节目？
No.3 assignment:
1Which kind of magazine do you prefer to read, novels, poetries, or……
2. Do you prefer to live with roommates or you prefer to live by yourself

I bet you can not agree with me more after paying your attention to the NO.4.1 and NO.3.1. Obviously, they are in common, aren’t they?

So I also think the speaking assignments should have some intelligent strategies.
Such as:

Preparing for the NO.1
Place
       Foreign country
       Hometown
       A place to eat
       Former school
People
      Famous people
       Normal people
       The character of a person you admire
the person who influenced you
       the character of a good teacher
       the characteristics of the friends
Event
       Most memorable event/ in your childhood
       Important decision
       Happy event
       Most embarrassing moment
       What to do in the spare time
       A popular activity in your country (sport game activity )
       The most imprtant invention in the recent 100 years
       A social or political celebration events in your culture
Food & eating
       Favorite food
useful food material
    homemade or restaurant
pets
literature
tv or film
comedy music or drama
useful/ interesting book
       fiction/ novel/ poem/magazines/literature
clothes
music
       pop or classical
culture
sports
hobby
motto
wealth is nothing without health
career or job you want to persue
studying alone or studying with others
transportation
       describe the most efficient in your country
object
social problems
       drug abuse/ domestic violence/ unemployment/ crime and weapon control/ resourse shortage/     waste disposal/ world peace/ population explosion/ housing shortage
描述一件自己印象深刻的celebration/ public events或者moment。
2. 杂志,小说,诗歌,喜欢哪个
3. 一个你记忆深刻的ceremony或事件
4. 说一个参加过的memorial活动之类的
5. A popular activity in your country/说说你的国家喜欢的sport, game或者activity
6. 喜剧、音乐剧、舞台戏剧你喜欢哪个？为什么?
7. The most memorable events in your childhood
8. 当你远离家的时候，最想念什么？/When you are away from home, what do you miss most


We can go through these one by one. When faced with the real exam, we just to remember what we have practiced a million times, especially for No.1, the first question of the complete test.

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支持!!

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泡沫 批改moon的作文
As social animals, human beings have to get public relationship network if he want to live well. So as a human being, you have to get families, friends, wife or husband. You can not choose your family numbers, but you can choose which kind of friends you want to make. Most people can be classified into two kind(加复数形式) of man,(of man 可以删掉感觉有点多余) a (这里我觉的用the 好一点)man with intelligence or a man with humor sense(sense of  homor). So the question has changed into which kind of people you want to make to be friends(friends with), the intelligent one or the humor(homorous  用形容词)one? As(用 to 感觉好一点) my point, I prefer the humor one.

First, the intelligent people often are conceive( 这个词是动词) and obstinate. If a man is called intelligent guy, it means the man do have some extent of intelligence(这句话很奇怪,是在说这家伙确实有点智商吗?). And usually two question coming up. One, the man will became conceive because of his intelligence. Two, the man will became obstinate because of his conceive. How a man with conceive and obstinate can (删掉 can 好一点)hold (加一个 the)friendship long? If you have different opinion about his, the conceive man will advise you adopt his advise again and again because his view is definitely right. If you just do things making (改成 to make 好一点)yourself happy, the obstinate one will tell you that you shouldn’t do this or that, never stop until you follow his advice. This is (加一个what 感觉好一点)a horrible friend do. And I don’t want this kind of friends.

Second, a humor(用形容词 humorous) friend won’t command you to do the “right” tings while he will alleviate you. Maybe a friend with a good sense of humor can not help you solve the problem that make(加 s) you worried(改成  worry about). But the humor(形容词) friend can alleviate you by a joke which makes you feels(去掉 s) better. After all, the problem is your responsibility which shouldn’t be solved by others and you should get the ability to solve this kind of problem. For instance, if you get problem in studying(应该用study ), maybe the intelligent friend can tell you how to solve it, but you still don’t understand why the problem could be solved in this way; a humor friend can tell you a joke, make funny and inspire you , you will get better and you feel the warm(用 warmness) from friendship which support you to fight with problems cause (书面语 应该用 because 否则会扣分)you know there’s a friend will back you forever.

As two reasons above, I choose the friend who has a good sense of humor. It never means that I won’t make friends who got intelligence. I just want to tell I welcome(用appreciate 感觉好一点) every kinds of friends, and the humor(改用形容词) one is the best choice.

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moon 的口语感觉上去比我的好  至少在音量上和气势上  !

下次我会大声的读出来的!!!

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先给大家道歉，前段时间课程和考试太忙没上gter。从现在开始，认真参加小组的每次作业。下面补上我第四次的作文
As being gregarious is one of the fundamental characteristics of human being, everyone will have, more or less, some friends in their lives. Some times we have to consider with what kind of people we should make friends, for different people have different personalities. Some would prefer friends who are intelligent, while other would like to choose friends with a great sense of humor. When it comes to me, I prefer the later.

To make friends with humorous people can make our life comfortable. I enjoy every minute I spend with my humorous friends because the atmosphere is always agreeable and harmonious when talking with them. Their funny jokes and words can really make me relax and laugh after a whole day’s stressful work and study. Also, I can share my mind with them when I am depressed and they can always find me an easy and joyful way to release. I will never feel boring or tired with them.

Also, friends with a sense of humor can inspire me. The attitudes towards life of those humorous people are always positive. They have the magic power to turn the dark side of life into bright with their humor because they always look at the world in which we live through a positive way and are optimistic. I can be easily influenced when chatting or playing with friend of such kind. They inspire me with this positive attitude in the time when life is really hard and I am deeply down. They give hope and the strength to journey on.

Last but never the least, why I prefer friends with a sense of humor is that humorous people are always intelligent, while intelligent people are not necessarily humorous. I believe that humor comes from intelligence. People are humorous because they can see the essence of the world and our life, and can solve the problems of life in a wise way. However, when people are just intelligent, sometimes they are too serious with everything around them and life can be hard for them and it is difficult for them to become humorous.

For all the reasons mentioned above, I prefer a friend who is humorous. Yet, the process of finding a friend is not a selection. A person becomes a friend of yours because you have something in common and would like to share your life with each other. Not simply because that person has the right characteristic you like

[ 本帖最后由 amadeus_shea 于 2007-4-2 17:49 编辑 ]

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批改 orange的文章
When I was a little girl, if you asked me the questions which friends do you prefer intelligent or humorous, I would definitely choose the intelligent people as my friends. Because they can teach me the lesions (单词拼写错误lesson)which I do not know and can not understand. Also, my mother only allow me to play with the intelligent children, she considers them as the good people which have excellent performance at the(去掉 the) school. But who have a pretty good sense of humor the teachers will think them have a little clever. In common parlance, they have poor grade about their lesions(单词错误). Nevertheless, when the time goes by, I changed my mind. I think a good sense of humor which is the most important quality should friends have.(整段的时态变化无常, 个人觉得应该用一个时态,既然是写过去的事情)

Someone will argue(是不是该加with,我也不是很确定) me, someone will ask me why. There are several examples and my own experience could explain why I prefer to make friends with humorous(用名词humor) rather than intelligent(intelligence).Two days ago, I took part in the school’s union department of volunteer. They sent me to the “sunshine home” which teaches the special people English. I am one of the three volunteers. When we are arrived there, I see almost 40 special people at the classroom waiting for us. They are not normal people which have difficult to study and their intelligence below the common person(用 ordinary level  更合适一点). It is the (改成 a)challenge for us the teach them well. The first people are good at the English, she is major in English. she is very intelligent people and teaches them very carefully. But the results(加一个 are) very disappointment (dispointed)they don’t know anything. (有些people的地方建议 换成person)

Second people of us, he teaches them to remember the word vividly. He is very kindly( 用 kind). let them consider him not a teacher but a brother. He always use the laugh(用 funny 或者用 interesting) word to make them happy. He brings a lot of happiness to them class(病句). He uses his humorous (名词humor)to won this special people’s heart. The miracle is they remembered most of the English word.

To compare with them(their) experiences, I learn from this. the humorous could gain people’s heart let them remember you and like you, at the same time like your teaching and pay attention to what you are talking(加个 about).

At the other hand, the humorous people can bring a lot of fun, they know how to control people’s heart. When I got a poor grade, they use the jokes to let me forget the depressed(depressing) thing. And pull up my slacks to make me gain the powerful and strong confidence, to make me brave in the face of great difficulties.

In a conclusion, I prefer make friends who have a sense of humor to have intelligent.(抱歉 没看懂)

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有空的话 帮剩下的人批一下

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abstact:

A book I think is interest.
Ø  Harry Potter and chamber of secrets written by J.K. Rowling (the second book of the series)
ü  The words and phrases used  simple (kids)
Easy for me to follow, read whenever I want, second-language learner, without keeping electronic-dictionary in hand
ü  Well-planed plots
Magical adventure of a boy named Harry Potter, what he experienced, school story (in common), attractive, totally be lost, forget to eat or reluctant to sleep
ü  Full of fantastic and lively descriptions
Wizard, make magical things come true, creative imagination

Set limitations or not on the programs kids watch
Ø  Should set limitations on the programs kid watch
ü  Full of the screens unsuitable for kids to watch
Sexual or violent screens, (intend to) reveal the dark side of the society or to be attractive to the adults who have the abilities to consume.
ü  Quick learner
Powerful potential to learn new things, especially for kids, less than 1-year old baby can speak simple words, astoundingly, imitate

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Assignments:

1.      Which kind of magazine do you prefer to read, novels, poetries, or……
2.      do you prefer to live with roommates or you prefer to live by yourself

Abstact:

2

Prefer to live with roommates or live by yourself
The former:
Ø  I prefer to live with roommates
ü  Promoting the efficiency in studying
Discuss any doubts about the assignments, not worried about bothering others; for project of FAV2 the roommates are the partners, an excellent idea came into our minds during shopping
ü  Reduce the expenditure
Share expenditure, such as management fares and garbage fares; informed person, once knowing sth sold in attractive discount, send the short message
ü  Became easy-going
Never Self-centered, consider others feeling, tolerate of the differences,

The latter:
Ø  I prefer to live by myself
ü  Personal preference
Not talkative, no more than 3 sentences, like quite living situations, buy the house in the countryside far away the urban
ü  Weight the private things a lot
Feel irritated if others move the items I have placed. Once\ a roommate\ curious about my private life\ irritated by her behaviors
ü  Fascinated with reading
Reading whenever I want, mid-night or meal time, easy to disturb others\ when lost in virtual world, does not want to be interrupted

[ 本帖最后由 zjdmark 于 2007-4-3 02:29 编辑 ]

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Friends are vitally(vital, adj. 这里用vital是不是程度太深了哦...) people in our life. Some would like to make friends with the bright person(对应前面friends), while/and others prefer to with(删掉) those who are full of humor. In my situation, . What I value(care) most is the good character(characteristics) of them, such as if they are(being) justice(just, adj.), reliable, and considerate. Besides these, I prefer to make friends with those who are intelligent.(这里提出观点和前面的那些叙述矛盾,逻辑比较混乱. "I do not care whether my friend are with high EQ，or have a good sense of humor"??) The reasons are as follow(follows). Firstly, I admire those who are bright. In my point(opinion), the intelligent people are fancy(n. PS: 这个词不适合形容人) and attractive. Owing to the intelligent(intelligence), those people are nimble on the thinking(不太明确想表达什么意思). They create new thoughts, new products, and methods in advanced level. Under their help, our society finds the faults, leads revolution and corrects the wrong things(chinglish...). The wisdom(wise) people are the pioneers who pull our world developing and advancing. They are tantalizingly(用这个词是想表达什么意思? PS: 前面那句太Chinglish...) close to the truth. Secondly, my intelligent friends taught(teach) me various things and help(时态混乱) me grow batter(better). They lead me the road(删掉) to see through the things(Chinglish...). With those wisdom teachers, I can find more aspects to considerate one event and widen my horizon(Chinglish). I also become more mature in the(my) mind. For example, once some girls in my class have some misunderstand with(misunderstood) each other and both sides don’t(时态...) want to forgive each others(compromise). What’s more, both sides had one candidate for the competing of monitor; and they all attack other side’s fault(时态+Ching..). Conditions seemed to be in a mass. However, one of my clever friends hit the point, arranging the chaos(chaotic) clues. Finally, we chosen(chose) the right one and I learnt the way to solve this kind of problem. Last but not the least, as my humorous is enough(I am humorous enough), my friends may not have a good sense of humor. Not many people are both wisdom and have sense of humor. As a result, I may find that little(no) one can be my friend if I ask for too much. (观点太牵强.自己幽默就不需要幽默的朋友l了？) All in all, I choose those kind person to make friends with, who are justice, reliable, and considerate. Apart from that, it would be better if he or she is with intelligent .

PS: 真诚的建议：这位同学的英语基本功实在需要好好加强...多看一些书吧，我能明白的你意思，但是一些基本的英语表达方法还是要掌握的...毕竟T是语言考试...另外，对单词的掌握还是要多注意一下单词的词性的...

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谢谢泡沫的多次批改，辛苦啦！
谢谢zdjmark对小组的建议。
欢迎amadeus_shea的回归。

更新剩余批改次序，周五前一定要批改好

moon--------->泡沫
snow--------->zdjmark
zdjmark------>amadeus_shea

p.s: 泡沫，我这周比较忙，估计得迟点批，但是周五以前一定批好。

janesnowUID: 2272881

很感谢amadeus的建议！！我也正为自己的chinglish苦恼中。。。
有什么推荐的英文书么？

orange3333UID: 2245161

有本英文书推荐下,historian,不错

moondy74178945UID: 2231844

a meet on tuesday ? 是《相约星期二》吗？好像英文名应该叫做 Tuesdays with Morrie 。
楼主的口语第一题，貌似有点跑题，我觉得题目中的中心词是 book , interest 显然出题人要想让你形容一本你喜欢的书，然后解释原因，而楼主的论点是我喜欢电子书，针对这个回答的题目应该是你喜欢什么形式的书，电子书，传统书籍，彩色印刷，大尺寸还是小尺寸的，hardcover or paperback ?
第二题我觉得可能立场在明确一点比较好，就选一个说，比如让孩子自己选择，原因是培养孩子的个性，构建与儿女沟通的桥梁，解除孩子的逆反心理.....
作文里 conceive 是动词，楼主可能把词性记错了。
说了点愚见，希望大家互相帮助，改天我也写一篇贴上来，麻烦大家也给我改一改。