ibt凤凰涅磐小组 第四次作业

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谢谢moondy,
做好口语第一题时就已经发现有点偏题了，以后一定在说以前反复斟酌一下。
第二题作的没什么感觉，所以一定错误连连了。
我会继续努力的，谢谢

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moon批泡沫文章
通篇第一感觉，字数太少！才224。ibt的要求可是300字以上，450为佳I think it is better to make friends with people who have a sense of humor.

First, it is comfortable to be with humorous person. There is(are) always laughters(laughter 笑，笑声,不可数) during the conversation. It is just a kind of relax（relaxing） which will prove(promote) your work. Humor always adjust the pressive(貌似没有pressive这个词，建议the high-speed rhythm in the ) work and life. A good joke could serve as a good psychologist to rescue your life with a good mood everyone could do better and efficient work.

second humor is always being considered as a charming character .sometimes humor can solve the problem when the situation is ebrassy(embarrassing). Many people often run into akward(awkward) conditions, where there is no one you can turn for help(turn to) .humor is the best thing to pull you out of it. Whatever how stupid the mistake is ,you are forgived(will forgive) with laughters(laughter).

third  humor help to build the harmonious relationship. For example if you come to some stranger, you ought to have homor(be humor), It do much help to be close with them, and be easy to make friend with each other. While the person with high intelligence is also a good choice to make friends with. They always have excellent idea, they solve the problem with better ways, intelligent people urge you to work hard if you do not want to be far behind.
(这段到底是说哪个好？希望能立足一个中心上，后半段不好。)
so whatever your friend is  like ,clever or humorous ,they all have something we appreciate.
（最后的结尾都……唉，中心阿中心！）
这次的文章泡沫真的用心了？？感觉不是很好啊，时间不多了，泡沫抓紧了。

[ 本帖最后由 ibt凤凰涅磐小组 于 2007-4-7 13:25 编辑 ]

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moon--------->泡沫
snow--------->zdjmark
zdjmark------>amadeus_shea

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4th assignment---speaking
abstact:

A book I think is interest.
Harry Potter and chamber of secrets written by J.K. Rowling (the second book of the series)
The words and phrases used  simple (kids)
Easy for me to follow, read whenever I want, second-language learner, without keeping electronic-dictionary in hand
Well-planed plots
Magical adventure of a boy named Harry Potter, what he experienced, school story (in common), attractive, totally be lost, forget to eat or reluctant to sleep（废寝忘食的native说法是这样么？才学较浅，不了解）
Full of fantastic and lively descriptions
Wizard, make magical things come true, creative imagination

Set limitations or not on the programs kids watch
Should set limitations on the programs kid watch
Full of the screens unsuitable for kids to watch
Sexual or violent screens, (intend to) reveal the dark side of the society or to be attractive to the adults who have the abilities to consume.
Quick learner
Powerful potential to learn new things, especially for kids, less than 1-year old baby can speak simple words, astoundingly, imitate
思维清晰，我要学习~！
补：3th assignment--speaking
Assignments:

1.      Which kind of magazine do you prefer to read, novels, poetries, or……
2.      do you prefer to live with roommates or you prefer to live by yourself

Abstact:

2

Prefer to live with roommates or live by yourself
The former:
I prefer to live with roommates
;Promoting the efficiency in studying
Discuss any doubts about the assignments, not worried about bothering others; for project of FAV2 (什么东西？我不懂。。。)the roommates are the partners, an excellent idea came into our minds during shopping
Reduce the expenditure
Share expenditure, such as management fares and garbage fares; informed person, once knowing sth sold in attractive discount, send the short message
Became easy-going
Never Self-centered, consider others feeling, tolerate of the differences,

The latter:
I prefer to live by myself
;Personal preference
Not talkative, no more than 3 sentences, like quite living situations, buy the house in the countryside far away the urban
Weight the private things a lot
Feel irritated if others move the items I have placed. Once\ a roommate\ curious about my private life\ irritated by her behaviors
Fascinated with reading
Reading whenever I want, mid-night or meal time, easy to disturb others\ when lost in virtual world, does not want to be interrupted
（这样两边都准备的方法值得借鉴~ ）

[ 本帖最后由 janesnow 于 2007-4-7 22:55 编辑 ]

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moon批amadeus
409字，好标准的范文
As being gregarious is one of the fundamental characteristics of human being, everyone will have, more or less, some friends in their lives. Some times we have to consider with what kind of people we should make friends, for different people have different personalities. Some would prefer friends who are intelligent, while other would like to choose friends with a great sense of humor. When it comes to me, I prefer the later. （流畅）

To make friends with humorous people can make our life comfortable. I enjoy every minute I spend with my humorous friends because the atmosphere is always agreeable and harmonious when talking with them. Their funny jokes and words can really make me relax（貌似relax这样用不是很合适，也查了一些例句,使我放松，该是用relaxed) and laugh after a whole day’s stressful work and study. Also, I can share my mind with them when I am depressed and they can always find me an easy and joyful way to release. I will never feel boring or tired with them.

Also, friends with a sense of humor can inspire me.(这个观点有点呛) The attitudes towards life of those humorous people are always positive. They have the magic power to turn the dark side of life into bright with their humor because they always look at(这里真的需要at吗？不要的吧) the world in which we live through a positive way and are optimistic. I can be easily influenced when chatting or playing with friend of such kind. They inspire(d) me with this positive attitude in the time when life is really hard and I am deeply down. They give hope and the strength to journey on(渡过难关，建议用tide me over).

Last but never the least, why I prefer friends with a sense of humor is that(用those吧，我知道你这里的that是连词，没特殊意思，但是这里的that不必要，而those who之类的可以用到) humorous people are always intelligent, while intelligent people are not necessarily humorous. I believe that humor comes from intelligence. People are humorous because they can see the essence of the world and our life, and can solve the problems of life in a wise way. However, when people are just intelligent, sometimes they are too serious with everything around them and life can be hard for them and it is difficult for them to become humorous.（这段不错，就是条理可以在清晰点，比如那人intelligent people太serious导致你和intelligent people处理关系难之类了，还有就是可以加例子，貌似你的文章很少有例子）

For all the reasons mentioned above, I prefer a friend who is humorous. Yet, the process of finding a friend is not a selection. A person becomes a friend of yours because you have something in common and would like to share your life with each other. Not simply because that person has the right characteristic you like（最后一段最喜欢）

文章很不错，语感也很好，应该是高分文章哦！如果有批的不对的地方，请见谅。

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