issue43 求拍

flysnowUID：2260213

43. "To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."
一个公仆如果想成为一位杰出的领导者就必须保持最高的伦理和道德标准。

思路：
1、my position:公务员应该保持最高的伦理和道德标准，但是光有最高的伦理和道德标准还是不够，必须要有卓越的领导能力、正直的人格魅力，全心全意为人民服务的信念等才能成为一位杰出的领导者。
2、支持观点：最高的伦理和道德标准是公务员的前提素质要求。On the one hand，高尚的道德情操和伦理标准可以使领导者赢得人们的信任和对手的尊重。举例：Martin Luther King, Nelson Mandela. On the other hand，高尚的道德情操和道德标准能够有效的防止权力滥用。举反例：Hussein Saddam, Stalin杀害官员in Soviet, Watergate Nixon.
3、反对观点：光有伦理和道德标准不够。卓越的领导能力、正直的人格魅力，全心全意为人民服务的信念等都是成为卓越领导人的条件。举例：Deng Xiaoping, Washington.
4、总结

Is he necessary to be an effective leader, if a public official maintain the highest ethical and moral standards? To some extent, I agree with the speaker's general assertion that a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards to be an effective leader. However, the speaker unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks certain compelling factors impacting this issue. In my observation, an effective leader should possess the highest ethical and moral standards, but, strong lead ability, honest personalities, the belief of do one's best severing for public are same important to a public official become an effective leader.

In the first place, it is the basic prerequisite that an effective leader must possess the highest ethical and moral standards. On the one hand, the highest ethical and moral standards can win the trusts from public and be respected by his political opponents Consider notable figures such as Martine Luther King and Nelson Mandela, whom few would disagree were eminently successful in leading others to practice the high ethical and moral standards which they advocated. Martine Luther King, a Black politician in United States, gained worldwide respect as a leader of civil right campaign in American, that "I have a dream" is his firm conviction. Nelson Mandela, an honorable president of South Africa, is one of the greatest moral and political leaders of our time. His role in fighting apartheid, his imprisonment of Robben Island, and his ability to steer South Africa through the crisis of its re-birth, earned him the international reputation of benevolent negotiator and quintessential peacemaker. Nelson Mandela also is an international hero whose lifelong dedication to the fight against racial oppression in South Africa won him the Nobel Peace Prize and the president of his country. The important role of the highest ethical and moral standards is significant. On the other hand, the highest ethical and moral regulation in an effective leader's mind can prevent leaders from abusing their authorities and also the corruptions. Consider the many leaders, such as Hitler, whom most people would agree were egregious violators of public morality. Or consider Hussein Saddam-authoritarian pre-president of Iraq, who led two devastating wars. Ultimately, such leaders forfeit their leadership as a result of the immoral means by which they obtained or wielded their power.

However, it is not enough for an effective leader only possess the highest ethic and moral regulations. It is same important, even more important that an effective leaders possess the strongest leadership, creative ability, the honest personalities and the belief of try one's best severing for public. For example, Deng Xiaoping, an excellent leader in China, who is the total designer for China's reforming and opening. And, he leaded China's people to build the preliminary system of market economy in China, which great enhanced people's living level and changed the poor face of China. Besides, he raised creatively the theory "One Country, Two System" to solve the problem of China-Taiwan.

To sum up, history informs us that an effective political requires adherence to the highest ethic and moral standards. However, an effective also requires other abilities, such as strong leadership, special knowledge, honest personalities and adhesive belief, and so on.

iq28UID：2152875

Is he necessary to be an effective leader, if a public official maintain the highest ethical and moral standards? To some extent, I agree with the speaker's general assertion that a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards to be an effective leader. However, the speaker unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks certain compelling factors impacting this issue. In my observation, an effective leader should possess the highest ethical and moral standards, but, strong lead ability, honest personalities, the belief of do one's best severing for public are same important to a public official become an effective leader.

In the first place, it is the basic prerequisite that an effective leader must possess the highest ethical and moral standards. On the one hand, the highest ethical and moral standards can win the trusts from public and be respected by his political opponents Consider notable figures such as Martine Luther King and Nelson Mandela, whom few would disagree were eminently successful in leading others to practice the high ethical and moral standards which they advocated. Martine Luther King, a Black politician in United States, gained worldwide respect as a leader of civil right campaign in American, that "I have a dream" is his firm conviction. Nelson Mandela, an honorable president of South Africa, is one of the greatest moral and political leaders of our time. His role in fighting apartheid, his imprisonment of Robben Island, and his ability to steer South Africa through the crisis of its re-birth, earned him the international reputation of benevolent negotiator and quintessential peacemaker. Nelson Mandela also is an international hero whose lifelong dedication to the fight against racial oppression in South Africa won him the Nobel Peace Prize and the president of his country. The important role of the highest ethical and moral standards is significant. On the other hand, the highest ethical and moral regulation in an effective leader's mind can prevent leaders from abusing their authorities and also the corruptions. Consider the many leaders, such as Hitler, whom most people would agree were egregious violators of public morality. Or consider Hussein Saddam-authoritarian pre-president of Iraq, who led two devastating wars. Ultimately, such leaders forfeit their leadership as a result of the immoral means by which they obtained or wielded their power.

However, it is not enough for an effective leader only possess the highest ethic and moral regulations. It is same important, even more important that an effective leaders possess the strongest leadership, creative ability, the honest personalities and the belief of try one's best severing for public. For example, Deng Xiaoping, an excellent leader in China, who is the total designer for China's reforming and opening. And, he leaded China's people to build the preliminary system of market economy in China, which great enhanced people's living level and changed the poor face of China. Besides, he raised creatively the theory "One Country, Two System" to solve the problem of China-Taiwan.

To sum up, history informs us that an effective political requires adherence to the highest ethic and moral standards. However, an effective also requires other abilities, such as strong leadership, special knowledge, honest personalities and adhesive belief, and so on.

iq28UID：2152875

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都要改完了不小心让这个网页跳转了...只能重改

Is he necessary to be an effective leader, if a public official maintain the highest ethical and moral standards? To some extent, I agree with the speaker's general assertion that a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards to be an effective leader. However, the speaker unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks certain compelling factors impacting this issue. (臆断.作者只是说了standards是必要不充分条件) In my observation, an effective leader should possess the highest ethical and moral standards, but, strong lead ability, honest personalities, the belief of do one's best severing for public are same important to a public official become an effective leader. (观念清楚)

In the first place, it is the basic prerequisite that an effective leader must possess the highest ethical and moral standards. On the one hand, the highest ethical and moral standards can win the trusts from public and be respected by his political opponents. (层次清楚.不过ts有跑题之嫌.必须要说明白赢得信任和尊重对于做一个有效的领导具体帮助在什么地方.否则就是跑题) Consider notable figures such as Martine Luther King and Nelson Mandela, whom few would disagree were eminently successful in leading others to practice the high ethical and moral standards which they advocated. Martine Luther King, a Black politician in United States, gained worldwide respect as a leader of civil right campaign in American, that "I have a dream" is his firm conviction. Nelson Mandela, an honorable president of South Africa, is one of the greatest moral and political leaders of our time. His role in fighting apartheid, his imprisonment of Robben Island, and his ability to steer South Africa through the crisis of its re-birth, earned him the international reputation of benevolent negotiator and quintessential peacemaker. Nelson Mandela also is an international hero whose lifelong dedication to the fight against racial oppression in South Africa won him the Nobel Peace Prize and the president of his country. (这么一大段例子极其失败.没有和那两个standards靠上去 beat around the bush.篇幅也太长.废话多.不需要你写曼德拉的平生传记,只要你把他如何有standards了如何赢得信任的点写出来就ok) The important role of the highest ethical and moral standards is significant. (例子没有让人信服.所以这句话同样让人无法信服) On the other hand, the highest ethical and moral regulation in an effective leader's mind can prevent leaders from abusing their authorities and also the corruptions. (上一层是讲的外部,这一层讲的是leader自己的内心,可以考虑用这个逻辑关系作为层次间转折.on one hand on the other hand虽然清楚但是毕竟低级) Consider the many leaders, such as Hitler, whom most people would agree were egregious violators of public morality. Or consider Hussein Saddam-authoritarian pre-president of Iraq, who led two devastating wars. Ultimately, such leaders forfeit their leadership as a result of the immoral means by which they obtained or wielded their power. (希特勒萨达姆不是没标准的典型.至少你的论述里面没有体现出这一点.本段完败.例子基本无用)

However, it is not enough for an effective leader only possess the highest ethic and moral regulations. It is same important, even more important that an effective leaders possess the strongest leadership, creative ability, the honest personalities and the belief of try one's best severing for public. For example, Deng Xiaoping, an excellent leader in China, who is the total designer for China's reforming and opening. (不要你写他的功绩,只要写他的能力) And, he leaded China's people to build the preliminary system of market economy in China, which great enhanced people's living level and changed the poor face of China. Besides, he raised creatively the theory "One Country, Two System" to solve the problem of China-Taiwan. (讲了半天功绩.能力呢?而且无总结,直接结束了)

To sum up, history informs us that an effective political requires adherence to the highest ethic and moral standards. However, an effective also requires other abilities, such as strong leadership, special knowledge, honest personalities and adhesive belief, and so on.

段内问题就是例子用的太糟糕
不多说了
正面论证基本就没有看到

段间问题也很大
开头ms给出的是平衡观念
但是支持topic的篇幅远远超过了反对的
篇幅之间要做到平衡

flysnowUID：2260213

谢谢iq28版主，写了一二十篇，老觉得自己写的有问题，就是不知道错在哪里。谢谢指教。重写中......
写完了再请你指教。

nianliu413100UID：2211729

issue43 求拍
43. "To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."
一个公仆如果想成为一位杰出的领导者就必须保持最高的伦理和道德标准。
思路：
1、my position:公务员应该保持最高的伦理和道德标准，但是光有最高的伦理和道德标准还是不够，必须要有卓越的领导能力、正直的人格魅力，全心全意为人民服务的信念等才能成为一位杰出的领导者。
2、支持观点：最高的伦理和道德标准是公务员的前提素质要求。On the one hand，高尚的道德情操和伦理标准可以使领导者赢得人们的信任和对手的尊重。举例：Martin Luther King, Nelson Mandela. On the other hand，高尚的道德情操和道德标准能够有效的防止权力滥用。举反例：Hussein Saddam, Stalin杀害官员in Soviet, Watergate Nixon.
3、反对观点：光有伦理和道德标准不够。卓越的领导能力、正直的人格魅力，全心全意为人民服务的信念等都是成为卓越领导人的条件。举例：Deng Xiaoping, Washington.
4、总结
Is he necessary to be an effective leader, if a public official maintain the highest ethical and moral standards? To some extent, I agree with the speaker's general assertion that a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards to be an effective leader. However, the speaker unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks certain compelling factors impacting this issue. In my observation, an effective leader should possess the highest ethical and moral standards, but, strong lead ability, honest personalities, the belief of do one's best severing for public are same important to a public official become an effective leader. （好， 论点突出， 但最后的Become 有问题）
In the first place, it is the basic prerequisite that an effective leader must possess the highest ethical and moral standards. （语法，an effective leader should behavior according to the highest ethical and moral standards.）On the one hand, the highest ethical and moral standards can win the trusts from public and be respected by his political opponents Consider notable figures such as Martine Luther King and Nelson Mandela, whom few would disagree were eminently successful in leading others to practice the high ethical and moral standards which they advocated( 能解释下吗？) .  (The highest ethical and moral standards contribute to the leader win respects and trusts from public.) Martine Luther King, a Black politician in United States(of the United States of America), gained worldwide respect as a leader of civil right campaign in American, that "I have a dream" is his firm conviction(好). Nelson Mandela, an honorable president of South Africa, is one of the greatest moral and political leaders of our time. His role in fighting apartheid（这个词你也能查到，N）, his imprisonment of Robben Island, and his ability to steer South Africa through the crisis of its re-birth, earned him the international reputation of benevolent negotiator and quintessential peacemaker. Nelson Mandela also is an international hero whose lifelong dedication to the fight against racial oppression in South Africa won him （可以这样用吗？）the Nobel Peace Prize and the president of his country. The important role of the highest ethical and moral standards is significant. On the other hand, the highest ethical and moral regulation in an effective leader's mind can prevent leaders from abusing their authorities and also the corruptions. Consider the （the 不要）many leaders, such as Hitler, whom most people would agree were egregious violators of public morality. Or consider Hussein Saddam-authoritarian pre-president of Iraq, who led two devastating wars. Ultimately, such leaders forfeit their leadership as a result of the immoral means by which（用怎样的方式做事，in?） they obtained or wielded their power.
However, it is not enough for an effective leader only possess the highest ethic and moral regulations. It is same important, even more important that an effective leaders possess the strongest leadership, creative ability, the honest personalities and the belief of try one's best severing for public. For example, Deng Xiaoping, an excellent leader in China, who is the total designer（总设计师super-designer?）for China's reforming and opening. And, he leaded China's people to build the preliminary system of market economy in China, which great enhanced people's living level and changed the poor face of China. Besides, he raised creatively the theory "One Country, Two System" to solve the problem of China-Taiwan.
To sum up, history informs us that an effective political requires adherence to the highest ethic and moral standards.(这句好。) However, an effective also requires other abilities, such as strong leadership, special knowledge, honest personalities and adhesive belief, and so on.

我主要看了其中词的用法，例子3楼上的看法不错。但Mandela的例子个人认为很好，他是以品行高尚出名吧。
关于破题,   如果 重点考虑 题目中的 must , 这文章 应该写成，不must 也可以称为一个杰出的领导。这样立意是不一样的。不知你们的看法？我觉得和 那道写 政治家应该隐瞒一些事情一样,