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TOPIC: ARGUMENT206 - The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Parkville Daily Newspaper.
"Throughout the country last year, as more and more children below the age of nine participated in youth-league softball and soccer, over 80,000 of these young players suffered injuries. When interviewed for a recent study, youth-league softball players in several major cities also reported psychological pressure from coaches and parents to win games. Furthermore, education experts say that long practice sessions for these sports take away time that could be used for academic activities. Since the disadvantages apparently outweigh any advantages, we in Parkville should discontinue organized athletic competition for children under nine."
WORDS: 430 TIME: 0:55:05 DATE: 2007-4-2
In the argument, the author concludes that people in Parkville should discontinue organized athletic competition for children under nine. To support the author’s conclusion, the author provides several evidences. However, after a careful analysis of the argument, the evidence provides little credible support for the argument.
To begin with, the mere fact that over 80,000 of these young plays who are below the age of nine and participated in youth-league softball and soccer suffered injuries is insufficient evidence to support the author’s claim. Because the author does not point out the total number of children below the age of nine participated in youth-league softball and soccer, it is entirely possible that the total number is so enormous that the proportion of the number of injured children to the total number is infinitesimal. Besides, the author provides nothing about the particular of the injured children; maybe most of them only suffered a little injury. In short, lacking more specific information about the injury and the total number of the children, the author cannot convince me.
What’s more, the author provides no evidence that the youth-league softball and soccer have cumbered the development of the children. First, though youth-league softball players reported psychological pressure from coaches and parents to win, the pressure may inspire their potential and promote their development. They may learn how to try their best to accomplish their task at the pressure. Secondly, even it is true that the long practice sessions take away time that could be used for academic activities, it is possible that they may learn how to manage their own time and common sense tells us that taking part in sports can benefit one’s study. So, that the disadvantages apparently outweigh any advantages is unconvincing.
Furthermore, granted that to some extent the disadvantages outweigh any advantages, it is also unfair to conclude that Parkville should discontinue organized athletic competition for children under nine. First, the conclusion that the disadvantages outweigh any advantages is gained from the evidence that comes from the country and several major cities, so it may not adapt to Parkville. Parkville may be not a major city. Perhaps Parkville maintains more stringent safety standards; or perhaps children’s sporting events in Parkville are better supervised by adults. Secondly, the evidence in the argument is only about the softball and soccer, hence they can only discontinue organized softball and soccer competition, how can they discontinue organized athletic competition?
In sum, the argument is unconvincing as it stands. Unless the author provides other sufficient evidence and rules out other possible alternatives, the author cannot persuade me. |
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