ibt凤凰涅磐小组 第七次作业

iamarielUID: 2321269

i prefer to watching news rather than to reading news.i have to reasons, one reason is that, news in the tv always with vedio and 解说怎么表示? it make things easy, i can quickly understand what happened.i mean, it is different from news in papers which only have words and quite a few pictures. another reason is that , watching news sitimulate me both in vision and hearing, it is more effective for me to accept the messages . in addition , i think that watching news is more interesting than reading news, i mean, it is funny!

iamarielUID: 2321269

泡沫是？

iamarielUID: 2321269

我改的泡沫兄！！！！！


     our media often present the tales(talent)  of successful people,we always admire they(their)  fortune and the amazing experience to approach to the success. but few people know how they make thier life such a big success. someone said the success people always take new things and take risks rather than the thing that they've done well. from my point view, I agree with the saying. Obviously successful people always have the courage to take new things which they may never done before

It also give them the chance to gain the fortune.(it 直代什？) There is a old saying,"more risk ,more reward." though （through）this way they often be nearer(be  nearer 是什么意思？)  to they （their）dream. It is  a fast way leading to success.(指代啥？) for example scientist are eager at（应该是be eager to） finding new things which may make them remembered by the society(呵呵)   ,merchant choose to trade the rare things to gain fortune（这有啥冒险？不如说他们偷渡宝贝和和） .It is also take the risk to make money。

If you want to be successful you have to try new thing or take risk in your business（life 吧，也不都之商业啊）. at least you have the chance to be successful. If you keep doing the daily thing in your life(人必须要keep daily things，它不等于the things you have done well.) , you may not make any progress at all all the repeating thing makes one indifferent to his talent and his protential ability .Life become boring during the mechanical movement 。（我觉得，还是，不要if 到底。，）

Take risk and take a new thing makes one to fit the rapid groth of the world and make himself to be competitive in his work .Through this experience , they could improve thieir ability ,add to their knowledge . defeat is the mother of success(我晕！)  ,so It showed us that rome was not built oneday （为嘛它show us that tome was not built oneday 呀？）,though（through） times of try news things and taking risk,there is always(应该说，there will be one day that you succeed, or finally ,you will succeed someday!)  one day you  will succeed. evero (?) successful people is through(is 不与through 使用吧。)  the pain period and final to get to the success. （可以说，follows this pain period, it will be the success. ）

last but not least ,imagine the boring life is full of repeated work in your life .do you still have the will(willing)  to be successful .if you never take the risk to do one thing ,you will never taste to happiness of success you might just be a common people for ever it is not said that taking no  risk could not lead you to success, but it may be a very long way or even an endless way.(别这样说嘛。我 文章第一段就否定了这个说法，我寒)

So if you have the desire to gain success,you could choose to take risk and  try news thing .It could not be a ensured way to succeed .but It is ture that it is a way approaching to success

iamarielUID: 2321269

泡沫，口语很厉害阿。可是只有45秒的说！！你可以弄短点！！

ibt凤凰涅磐小组UID: 2308768

ibt凤凰涅磐小组UID: 2308768

作业 全部放在一个楼里。

横行泡沫UID: 2267226

批改iamariel作文

when it comes that Successful people take new things and take risks rather than the thing that they've done well. I always take it back with some famous athlete whoes achievements are owe to the thing that they practice millions of times and which they done really well.
   so ,some people get(用become 好一点) successful because they persuit a meaningful life,they are willing to change and get some new experiences. those kind of people have a great  adaptability to a （用 the） new enviroments.（environment拼写错误） they must face the difficulties and try their bests to overcome them. what's more, thoes kind of successful people have some perfect qualities such as ndependent（independent）,ambition,  
confident and so on,and thoes qualitys benefit them in competing for success in the society.  more and more examples of elite ,especially in the high-tech area, aprrove（拼写错误approve） themself the man of making good in an increasingly competitive market according to taking risks.
   on the other hand, doing something already done well is really easy for almost everyone. and have at least one  thing that you doing well is a prerequisite for you to find a way that suit your particular needs and interests. although thoes  people who success for they have taken a new thing, they still need to keep their achievement by maintain it well. additionally,in a job market,emplyers（employers） are willing to pay a premium for workmanlike applicants rather than who like adventure（adventurer）.
   as far as i am（去掉 am） concerned, keeping the thing that you have done well is the（改成 a） convenient way for you to get sccessed. nevertheless, we should improve our adaptation and try to take more new thing . it is not only make（making） your life meaningful, but also can adjust yourself in the competitive world.



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