Issue48 [Victors小组]第3次作业

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Issue48"The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals. The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few, but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten."



提纲:
1 Famous few played a crucial role in the progress of history, so they should be etched in history.

2 It is often the masses other than famous few that created an epoch .

3The progress of human being is often at the masses’ sacrifice, without which no genius can achieve glorious feats.

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Ferdinand Foch(福煦）， the commander of the army of the Allies in World War1，was written in history textbook, but thousands of soldiers rare got their share of credit. In my opinion, of cause, famous individuals who shaped the history should be etched in history, however, group who created the history must be emphasized more.

Admittedly, famous few, with excellent intelligence, particular charisma and iron will, played a crucial role in the progress of history. Their achievements promoted the human being's progress. For instance, German physicist Wilgelm Roentgen(伦琴) found X rays, which save lots of patients' live. Similarly, Darwin's theory of evolution had a far-going influence on human beings. Undoubtedly, these giants whose achievements changed the fate of human beings should be commemorated forever.

Famous few did accelerate the development of history, but the decisive power of history is from the masses. It is often the masses other than famous few that created an epoch. For example, Lincon is considered as the greatest president in American history, because he abolished the slavery. However, Lincon is not the earliest forerunner. Before the civil war of America, many normal men and women had devoted themselves to rescuing black slaves from South America, many of whom lost their lives. Their effort evoked more and more persons to join in them. These men and women , as great as Lincon, should be written in the history of human beings.

Moreover, without the sacrifice of the masses, it is impossible for famous few to achieve glorious feat. Genius with foresight disseminated their thought to the masses, united  them and organized them, but can not substitute them. Empirical evidence indicates that democracy, freedom, civilization often is at cost of the masses’ sacrifice. Franklin Roosevelt whose strong will gave American confidence made a great contribution to beat Nazi. However, it is millions of soldiers, their family and ether citizens that played a decisive role in the arduous cause. They should be written in history as replete as Franklin Rooseselt, if not more.

In sum, although famous few played a crucial role, but groups of people should not be forgotten. It was just their sacrifice that created new eras, besides, without their sacrifice, no genius can achieve glorious victories. when we enjoy freedom, democracy, civilization, we must thank to those lives, blood lost at every step of the progress of human beings.

[ 本帖最后由 乳虎 于 2007-5-6 15:27 编辑 ]

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Issue48

提纲:
1 Famous few played a crucial role in the progress of history, so they should be etched in history.

2 It is often the masses other than famous few that created an epoch .

3The progress of human being is often at the masses’ sacrifice, without which no genius can achieve glorious feats.



Ferdinand Foch(福煦）， the commander of the army of the Allies in World War1，was written in history textbook, but thousands of soldiers rare got their share of credit. In my opinion, of cause, famous individuals who shaped the history should be etched in history, however, group who created the history must be emphasized more.

Admittedly, famous few, with excellent intelligence, particular charisma and iron will, played a crucial role in the progress of history. Their achievements promoted the human being's progress. For instance, German physicist Wilgelm Roentgen(伦琴) found X rays, which save lots of patients' live. Similarly, Darwin's theory of evolution had a far-going influence on human beings. Undoubtedly, these giants whose achievements changed the fate of human beings should be commemorated forever.

Famous few did accelerate the development of history, but the decisive power of history is [from] the masses. It is often the masses other than famous few that created an epoch. For example, Lincoln is considered as the greatest president in American history, because he abolished [manumitted]the slavery. However, Lincoln is not the earliest forerunner. Before the civil war of America, many normal men and women had devoted themselves to rescuing black slaves from South America, many of whom lost their lives. Their effort evoked more and more persons to join in them. These men and women , as great as Lincoln, should be written in the history of human beings.

Moreover, without the sacrifice of the masses, it is impossible for famous few to achieve glorious feat. Genius with foresight disseminated their thought to the masses, united  them and organized them, but can not substitute them. Empirical evidence indicates that democracy, freedom, civilization often is at cost of the masses’ sacrifice. Franklin Roosevelt whose strong will gave American confidence made a great contribution to beat Nazi. However, it is millions of soldiers, their family and ether citizens that played a decisive role in the arduous cause[accomplishing the great success]. They should be written in history as replete [much often] as Franklin Rooseselt, if not more.

In sum, although famous few played a crucial role, but groups of people should not be forgotten. It was just their sacrifice that created new eras, besides, without their sacrifice, no genius can achieve glorious victories. when we enjoy freedom, democracy, civilization, we must thank to those lives, blood lost at every step of the progress of human beings.

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