这个题目真难写 大家讨论下

青天大老爷UID: 2211672

In today'world, to speak well is more importance than to write well, agree or disagree
怎么写啊  我就下了一点
Speaking is the process of communication with others and transmitting information
in modern society.We hold this capability inborn, as compared to writing, all of us need
time to practise it everyday.But in my view, to write well is more importance than to speak well

First of all, various kinds of books that recorded down a large number of the accumulated knowledgeand experiences are very necessary and crucial part of resource in that we can learn much useful skills,belief andthought. an excellence compositing skill would make what books include more smooth, easy understanding and critical. For instance, lovers of philosophy can take a good understanding of Plato'theory or Socrate'theory in deep way by comprehensive of what words express.When a travel writer got into a beautiful place, if she or he had a sense of sensitiveness, she or he can use a lively language to record what she or he perceives and what she or he touches by the usage of writing on booknote Therefore, writing well would make our life more funny and colorful.

In addition, I perfer to writing something when I am alonely, happy and sad. There is a specific thing peoplecan not express under the help of language,they are emotion and desire and appetite.any speak seem very meaningless and redundant.In this situation, I like to write down my mood and feels.these which I recorded may turn into forever memories for some special days. Moreover,
If I could not speak very well, or this means some misunderstand with other people, but to some degree，this is not very importance to myself because I can speak few.

大家有主意吗 写写看

[ 本帖最后由 lintelle 于 2007-5-3 16:26 编辑 ]

lintelleUID: 2297267

会说话比会写作重要
1. 讲话和写作都能交流思想，但是讲话与听者面对面，讲得好会更有感染力。
2. 讲话比写作节省时间，符合现代社会的生存之道。
3. 有的时候直接说话比写信、公布日记的方式更加有诚意，必须讲话才能达成效果。

楼主的两点和“现代社会”这个切题点没有关系，写得些许跑题了，也是因为这个原因才找不出观点。下次注意审题，另外注意研究OG（官方指南，超级入口中有下载）上的口语、作文评分准则，切题来做。——一来帮助高分，二来也帮助扩展思路。

lintelleUID: 2297267

最后，注意要写结尾段。外国人也很讲究有始有终的。

最後の使徒UID: 2257608

补充;d:

平衡观点: 二者没有谁更重要之说
1, 的确说话很重要, 没有语言就没有人类社会
2, 写作同样重要, 历史纪录, 文学, 新闻
3, 二者应用于不同领域,相互补充相互促进

反面观点: 写作更重要
1, 语言能力是人们的天生能力, 而写作不是, 需要后天习得, 是人类文明进步的标志
2, 写作自成体系, 严谨而且有效, 应用范围更广, 可以成为复杂的学术体系, 而说话只是一种交流模式, 一种工具
3, 写作能够流传为后人所知, 成为社会财富的一部分, 而说话转瞬即逝

青天大老爷UID: 2211672

谢谢你们 呵呵

hyacinthUID: 2184492

貌似是我当时考的作文题

我用的是4楼的平衡观点.感觉两个都强调要容易写点

zhangran555UID: 2188609

There is a specific thing peoplecan not express under the help of language,they are emotion and desire and appetite.
第一行的under应改成without吧
to write well is more importance than to speak well
应为important嘛,或在importance 前加OF
感觉楼主有好多地方词性用的值得商榷哦~~

最后一句也有点看不懂

补充
In modern society, writing reports is an essential skill for the employers to show their perfoemance to the supervisor in the company

bearlaughyouUID: 2316440

我这样写的，写之前没有看上面的思路，觉得很难写。
这是我的作文。
In today’s world, to speak well is more important than to write will, agree or disagree?

Our world presently is experiencing a rapidly change in every aspect of people’s mind, economic situation and social structure. This tendency requires people’s reaction much quicker than before they did. Therefore, speak well is undoubted to be of vital importance. Only if you communicate with others more easily, could you obtain those opportunities easier.

The first and foremost reason I commit to the notion is that speaking well can impress others deeply and that is essential in contemporary world. Take hunting job as an example. The youth nowadays may not do a job for their entire life, they may change job frequently. As a result, every time when they try to find a job in a company or government, they have to answer the boss’s question face to face. Obviously, this step can not be done by writing. If someone is good at speaking, he/she may leave a deep impression to the boss and win a better chance to work, which is impossible for those people who are good at writing. Therefore, from this angle, to speak well is more important than to write well.

Another reason I think to speak well is more important is that it is a better way to communicate with others compared with writing. Needless to say, we must communicate with different people in our daily life and in the harness in today’s world because we have to contact more persons than in the past decades we did. And the technology is developed and advanced, which allows to us talk to anyone wherever they are. To make the communication goes well, we must focus on our skills of speaking. We had better to make our efforts to sound enthusiastic, warm and trustable and to explain something more clearly.

Admittedly, to writing well is also important, but it always is a indirect means to communicate with people, besides, nowadays people do not like writing to discuss something, they may feel it is too troublesome. It is easy to imagine that whether a person prefer talking something to others directly by phone or write to the people and wait the reply in another several days.

Consequently, with all the dimensions mentioned above, to speak well must be put to the top priory.

polo1478UID: 2217680

speak well is undoubted to be of vital importance. vital 与importance 重复
文章逻辑较强，但例子不是很支持论点。
最大弊端是结尾太短，可以考虑现将开头，结尾写完在写主体段落。
水平有限，就能说这么多了

bearlaughyouUID: 2316440

谢谢指教，我30分钟差点没写完，主要都用到想例子上面了。要是你们写，写什么例子和论点啊？

kevinliu6883UID: 2338522

Communication becomes more and more important at present, an era called information age. As the main tools to output what we think, speaking and writing are equally important. It is hard to make a comparison, becaue they are applied in different occasions. No one can be completely substituted by others.

Take job huting as an example. After the announcement of vocanted position, perhaps the employer will receive more than one applications. The human resource managers may first look at writen material such as applicant's resume, recommending letters. They select a couple of potential candidates to have a job interview. The candidates may be required to give an oral presentation. A successful applicant must be good at both writing and speaking.

Speaking has some advanges in delivering message. In a short time conversation, two speakers may gain a much big amount of information. They can get feed back in seconds. People can judge a person from a short face to face talk. However these advantages may also turn into disadvantages. People may have difficulty in absorbing an oral presentation. People may make error in judge a person who is excel of speaking or lack skill in it.

Writing, on the other hand, allows people enough time to prepare. Many writing is serious and after deep consideration. It is official record of many important things. If you rent a house, you have to sign a lease. If you load from a bank, you must sign your name on the relavant documents. Government agencies keep all your important records in writing, not in oral.

Writing is vital for business development. You will not be successful in making a movie without script, though movie goers don't see the script.When you apply a patent, you are writing. When you are to publicate your research results, you are writing. When you write your great ideas in clear and convincing way, millions of people may accept your proposition, and these ideas may become powerful impetus to advance our civilization.  Even for a good speaker like Former US president William Clinton, writen script and recital are necessary.

Comparing speaking with writing just likes comparing apple with orange. They server same function in communication but at different occasions. No one can go far if he only know skill in speaking or writing.

[ 本帖最后由 kevinliu6883 于 2007-6-11 10:51 编辑 ]

gonglezhongUID: 2353468

个人觉得第二篇  行文流畅了很多   但是内容不是很突出   例子也不充分
第三篇 就好了很多   从不同方面 突出两者都重要  而且例证丰富

alice19800326UID: 2334132

真是个难得题目吗，估计中文我都说不出什么

mxh06UID: 2367511

感觉 还可以加一个论点，随着当今社会科学技术的进步，原来writing相对于speaking的优势渐渐消失。如录音机可以将声音符号完整清晰的保存下来。人们对知识的保存方式再也不局限于writing和书籍。电话的发明使得speaking在促进人与人之间的沟通方面获得了前所未有的便利。（这里可以做一个递进）这些都使得speaking well变得important.

xugelanUID: 2336294

Speaking and writing are two ways of interpersonal communication,they are used to convey informations.Although they each have their own vantages,in my opinion,speak well is of more improtance than writing well.

Firstly,speaking is a kind of communication face to face.One can make his/her speach more infectious when standing among his/her audiences.In psychology it is also sugguested that listeners are more likely to be convinced when they can see the speaker,because speaking seems more polite and sincere than just writing materials on paper. That's why sometimes the president Bush insists in making a TV talk to all the americans hoping to get a firm support from them.

Another advantage of speaking is that people are passively receiving informations when they are listening ,no matter whether they like or not.It doesn't happen to writing as writing is a active process of getting informations.Advertisements on radio or TV take advantage of this and instill their products to the potential customers.

In modern world,people emphasize more on the working efficiency.Speaking can save your time and be more efficient than writing.It is an inborn capacity to speak,comparing with writing ,we could express our ideas more clearly when put them in words without necessary to think about how to organize them.Besides,in the process of speaking and talking,we are also using facial and gestural ways to interact with each other.The speaker could judge whether the listeners really understand him/her from their facial expression and then adjusts his/her speaking strategy. For example,classlearning is always better than selflearning due to the fact that students are able to interact with teacher in class.

For those reasons above,to speak well is more important than to write well and a perfect skill of speaking will help you to be more successful.

[ 本帖最后由 xugelan 于 2007-8-27 09:55 编辑 ]