这个题目真难写 大家讨论下

xugelanUID: 2336294

11楼文中的例子举得好，要好好学习了

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[ 本帖最后由 ericssh 于 2007-9-1 05:52 编辑 ]

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.. 每篇都值得好好学习...

yuanyuan@560806UID: 2513323

Earn more money or Live comfortably？？

When it comes to the lifestyle, quite a few would claim that they are fond of working hard for more money and better live condition. Yet, if we do not understand the true meaning of life, it equals nothing; therefore, according to my rule of thumb, there is a rhyme and reason to live comfortablely.

First of all, the ultimate goal for human is not the material condition but happiness. Those who want to live comfortably know how to find happiness around them. Since life is not always full of pleasure - and shock and stress are part of human life – humans need to know how to make their life easier and less stress. For example, travel is always exciting. You have the opportunities to access to new interesting people, and learn their distinct cultures – such as the Chinese traditional paintings, Japanese ethnic foods, Indian unique dance and songs, the list goes on. The meaningful travel not only relaxes you, but also gives a happy experience.

What is more, comfortable life offers a positive attitude. With a relax life, you feel lightly, and behavior freely. By contrast, if everything is rushed in your life, there is no time to smell the roses. You may be tired of life, let alone the details of beauties. Just imagine, you exhausted yourself after a long day of hard work, you must seldom have interested in everything but sleeping. Your resultable tired attitude may ruin your friends’ prepared party, or irritate your girlfriend. Then you come to distrust your goal to earn more money, thus doubt your goal to live.

Finally, living comfortably contributes to keep healthy. Everyone knows that severe stresses could cause many diseases like live cancers, or the degrading of immunization. Besides, one live in a comfortable situation would have more time and energy to exercise – a mountain to climb up, a stream to fish in, a beach to walk on, or just a football game to play with your kids. You not just gain enjoyments from these entertainments, but obtain health, either physically or mentally.

By and large, I like to enjoy a comfortable life. Slow down your life, and enjoy the roses around you.

yuanyuan@560806UID: 2513323

yuanyuan@560806UID: 2513323

Speaking more important   

In human’s history, speaking language is, without a doubt, earlier than written language, and by virtue of convenience, easiness and provoking emotional echo, speaking wins its distinctive popularity.

First of all, individuals could vent their feeling more directly, easily, and, of course efficiently when they speak. Speakers could notice their listeners’ response, which helps them decide what to say or what not to say later. And listeners could smile or keep eye contact with their speakers to show that they are keen to this topic. Also, I like the principle to say what they want to say. It makes my life easy and light. Nowadays, with the development of technology, even individuals in the opposite hemisphere could talk face-to-face with each other through the Internet.

In addition, it would save much time for modern citizens to talk face-to-face, irrespective of thinking too much or writing them in paper. With too many written reports to submit, or mountainous mails to return, people feel a great deal of stress. In contrast, if they choose another way, that is speaking directly, to communicate, they may enjoy more comfortable life. In other words, they would slow down their pace, and find more time to enjoy their life – a stream to fish in, a beach to walk on, a mountain to climb up - the list goes on. It is a thrilling experience. This happiness comes from human’s wise choice – to speak it directly rather than write it slowly.

Finally, talking face-to-face creates emotional echo among their group members. people feel close when they communicate face to face because they could speak freely without any restriction. Every comedian knows that people laugh often, and laugh louder and more frequently when others around are also laughing. It has a magic power for audience to follow. For example, Martin Luther King’s speech I Have a Dream once provoked millions of Americans to fight for the freedom of the Black People. Also, friendship can be strengthened when friends gather together and share their happiness together.

By and large, besides convenience and efficiency, speaking skills benefit humans considerably to forge and deepen friendship.