Issue51【0710G 五一互助小组】第1次作业

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51"Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."
提纲：1.小班教育能让老师更好的了解学生，并为学生制定不同的学习计划
2.小班教育对老师要求更高
3.高教育质量以为着高收费。不是每个家庭都能承受的。
According to the above statement, specious education system is useful and effect to students. As each student has his or her own critic and study habit, a common education system is not suitable for all students. But designing specious education plan for every student is a large, time-waste and money-waste project. So we should call for a balance in common education and specious education.

When I was a child, in the primary school, there were more than 50 students in a classroom. We share a common education system, no matter whether it is fit you. Maybe some students learn things quickly, some students learn things slow, but we must suit for the teacher, not the teacher suit for us. Nowadays, more and more schools offer classes that only have less than 20 students. In that case, teachers have more time to stay with each student to know everyone better, what is her prefer subject, which subject made him losing his heart, what time is the best time for studying to her…And the teachers can designed different education plans for students. As I know, the schools which take the small class education system have a higher than others. So I think it must have effect for students studying.

On the other hand, Obviously education that specifically designed takes much more time of teacher’s. And that system requires teachers have higher quality and more experience. They must be a psychologist to know the student very well, and they must be an educationalist to know many ways of education so that they can afford a suitable education to the student.

Moreover, with the higher quality of education, those schools charge higher fees. Admittedly specious education takes teachers more time and has more needs to the education equipment. But not every family can supports their children for the education system. Are there any ways to resolve the problem? The answer is yes. Through every students are different, there are some similar characters in a group of students. Those students can share a same education system. Though they still have a little difference, at least that education system doesn’t go very far from their own characters. They can take some changes by themselves to make it fit them better.

Nowadays, our society needs us becoming more different from others, not producing from a same mold. The individual characters call for the individual education. But for some families are not rich enough to support that charges, sharing a similar education system maybe a better way for education.

gluttonUID: 2330210

According to the above statement, specious education system is useful and effect to students. As each student has his or her own critic and study habit, a common education system is not suitable for all students. But designing specious education plan for every student is a large, time-waste and money-waste project. （仅仅因为钱，费时间就不应该进行meets interetst education 呢吗？感觉觉反驳没有力度）So we should call for a balance in common education and specious education.

(TS呢？论点都没有怎么就举例呢？)When I was a child, in the primary school, there were more than 50 students in a classroom. We share a common education system, no matter whether it is fit you. Maybe some students learn things quickly, some students learn things slow, but we must suit for the teacher, not the teacher suit for us. Nowadays, more and more schools offer classes that only have less than 20 students. In that case, teachers have more time to stay with each student to know everyone better, what is her prefer subject, which subject made him losing his heart, what time is the best time for studying to her…And the teachers can designed different education plans for students. As I know, the schools which take the small class education system have a higher than others. So I think it must have effect for students studying.（感觉举的例子没有说服力，看了感觉很平淡，）

On the other hand, Obviously education that specifically designed takes much more time of teacher’s. And that system requires teachers have higher quality and more experience. They must be a psychologist to know the student very well, and they must be an educationalist to know many ways of education so that they can afford a suitable education to the student.（没有展开）

Moreover, with the higher quality of education, those schools charge higher fees. （这句能当TS吗？）Admittedly specious education takes teachers more time and has more needs to the education equipment. But not every family can supports their children for the education system. Are there any ways to resolve the problem? The answer is yes. Through every students are different, there are some similar characters in a group of students. Those students can share a same education system. Though they still have a little difference, at least that education system doesn’t go very far from their own characters. They can take some changes by themselves to make it fit them better.

Nowadays, our society needs us becoming more different from others, not producing from a same mold. The individual characters call for the individual education. But for some families are not rich enough to support that charges, sharing a similar education system maybe a better way for education.
感觉论证说服力不够，举例太过于平淡，

alps22UID: 2338541

According to the above statement, specious (special) education system is useful and effect to students. As each student has his or her own critic(这个词删) and study habit, a common education system is not suitable for all students. But designing specious education plan for every student is a large, time-waste and money-waste project. So we should call for a balance in common education and specious education.

When I was a child, in the primary school, there were more than 50 students in a classroom. We share a common education system, no matter whether it is fit you. Maybe some students learn things quickly, some students learn things slow, but we must suit for the teacher, not(rather than) the teacher suit for us. Nowadays, more and more schools offer classes that only have less than 20 students. In that case, teachers have more time to stay with each student to know everyone better, what is her prefer subject, which subject made him losing his heart, what time is the best time for studying to her…And the teachers can designed(design)different education plans for students. As I know, the schools which take the small class education system have a higher than others. So I think it must have effect for students studying.(感觉这种讲故事的方式适合toefl作文,而不大适合G)

On the other hand, Obviously(obvious) education that specifically designed takes much more time of teacher’s. And that system requires teachers have higher quality and more experience. They must be a psychologist to know the student very well, and they must be an educationalist to know many ways of education so that they can afford a suitable education to the student.

Moreover, with the(删) higher quality of education, those schools charge higher fees. Admittedly specious education takes teachers more time and has more needs to the education equipment. But not every family can supports their children for the education system. Are there any ways to resolve the problem? The answer is yes. Through(Though) every students are(student is) different, there are some similar characters in a group of students. Those students can share a same education system. Though they still have a little difference, at least that education system doesn’t go very far from their own characters. They can take some changes by themselves to make it fit them better.(最大的问题是TS未明显交代)

Nowadays, our society needs us becoming more different from others, not producing from a same mold. The individual characters call for the individual education. But for some families are not rich enough to support that charges, sharing a similar education system maybe a better way for education.(最后一段要有总结Q全文的东西)
可能是第一次写G的作文或者是对范文没研究,文章太散了,举例,论证格式离G的要求也有差距.文章欠通顺,有比较严重的chinish的嫌疑.文中还有一些错误,就不一一指出了,如果改错了,请见谅哈,加油.