Issue154 【0710G 五一互助小组】第二次作业by涟漪

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Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators."
提纲：父母最终决定着孩子学习的课程及方法
      父母是孩子最好的老师
      父母是鼓励对孩子的学习有很大的帮助
      社会也应该参与到培养孩子教育的行列中，使学校的教育与社会接轨
Today, parents spend more time and energy on the work to ameliorate and promote their life quality and therefore fail to take notice for their child, expecially for child’s education. Some  parents consider that schools, which is the biggest educators, take the crucial responsibility of their child. Others shift the responsibility onto the schools as the excuse of the busy work. Without necesseray communication with schools, teachers are unable to understand their students conprehensively, which is disadvantageous for the development of the child. Parents are necessary and obligate to be involved in the local schools.
Firstly, parents hold the ultimate legal authority to make key decisions about what and how their own chinlren learn including choices of curriculum and text books, pace and schedul for learning. Parents need to know what their children have learned and how they behave in class. It is helpful for them to be cognizant of their own children’s merits and demerits. Also, by communicating with the schools, parents could discover children’s interests and cause in good time and assist them to fulfill their dreams.
Secondly, parents are the first and best educators for their children’s growth.In the daily life, children basically is together with their parents. Thus other than the knowledge learned from the schools,children imitate their surrounding people, particularly their own parents. These trivial but significant matters would play a potential role on their work, sociality, study and life. So parents should give an good example to their children and take more attention to the material needs as well as the spiritual needs.
Thirdly, encouragement coming from parents would has an important effect on their children. Especially when they come up against the frustration and failure, parents have the responsibility to motivate their children’s curiosity and interests, help them set up new confident, which is able to facilitate children to receive the best education.
Finally, communities should be involved in the school education,the effect of which is no less important than the parents’. Without fully communication with local schools, society cannot provide veracious information and therefore the knowledge which students learn from schools do not accord with t society’s requirement. It is disadvantageous for the studens to enter the society as soon as possible after leaving schools.
In sum, the school education is incapable of the dispensability of both parents and society. Students not only need the professional knowledge from schools, but also need to learn what they should do when they confront a pretty pass, how to keep in with family, friends, workmates and surrounding people. These information couldn’ t be got hold of only from schools.

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Today, parents spend more time and energy on the work to ameliorate and promote their life quality and therefore fail to take notice for their child, expecially for child’s education. Some  parents consider that schools, which is the biggest educators, take the crucial responsibility of their child. Others shift the responsibility onto the schools as the excuse of the busy work. Without necesseray communication with schools, teachers are unable to understand their students conprehensively, which is disadvantageous for the development of the child. Parents are necessary and obligate to be involved in the local schools.我觉得应该在第一段把社会也写进去,而且这一段不像开头,像是家长这一部分的总起,所以应该再加个开头这样结构更完整前后更照应
Firstly, parents hold the ultimate legal authority to make key decisions about what and how their own chinlren learn including choices of curriculum and text books, pace and schedul for learning. Parents need to know what their children have learned and how they behave in class.在这句话前应说虽然家长有选择权,但并不知道怎么选才能对孩子最有利,所以应该和学校沟通 It is helpful for them to be cognizant of their own children’s merits and demerits. Also, by communicating with the schools, parents could discover children’s interests and cause in good time and assist them to fulfill their dreams.
Secondly, parents are the first and best educators for their children’s growth.In the daily life, children basically is together with their parents. Thus other than the knowledge learned from the schools,children imitate their surrounding people, particularly their own parents. These trivial but significant matters would play a potential role on their work, sociality, study and life. So parents should give an good example to their children and take more attention to the material needs as well as the spiritual needs. 个人感觉这应该是Firstly,这样再把上一段的最后一句放到这段里,因为是经常在一起家长更了解孩子而不是跟学校沟通了才发现吧
Thirdly, encouragement coming from parents would has an important effect on their children. Especially when they come up against the frustration and failure, parents have the responsibility to motivate their children’s curiosity and interests, help them set up new confident, which is able to facilitate children to receive the best education.
Finally前面的一二三都是家长方面,现在最后来个社会似乎有点突然吧,把上面三段合并一下再加个开头正好标准的五段试会不会好些, communities should be involved in the school education,the effect of which is no less important than the parents’. Without fully communication with local schools, society cannot provide veracious information and therefore the knowledge which students learn from schools do not accord with t society’s requirement. It is disadvantageous for the studens to enter the society as soon as possible after leaving schools. 应该是学校按社会的需求来教学吧
In sum, the school education is incapable of the dispensability of both parents and society. Students not only need the professional knowledge from schools, but also need to learn what they should do when they confront a pretty pass, how to keep in with family, friends, workmates and surrounding people. These information couldn’ t be got hold of only from schools.

本人也才开始写,这些紧代表个人意见,改得不好请多多包涵,望有空拍拍我的 By KloseChou