issue97 【五一互助小组】第三次作文 by 剪刀石头布

为了忘记UID: 2317994

97. "It is unfortunate but true that political decisions and activities affect all aspects of people's lives."

I agree with the idea that political decisions and activities affect all aspects of people’s lives, what the author said above. No matter whom we are, no matter where we are, no matter whether we want, obsulutly, political play an important role in history, also our lives.

Look though the long history of human’s lives, political make a great effect. On one hand, political makes the society progress. Many countries passed the act about antiracism. It not only make benefits to the blacks, yellow race and some other races, but also, even more important, progress the communicate between different people of different color. For instant, the antiracism act says all people have the equral right of working. That means people of different color or different background can work in a same office and work together. They can learn from other strong point to offset their weakness and so make their work more effective. Though the impact and communion of different culture, the society improved.

On the other hand, political brings us benefits in different ways. Take the medical care system for example, the government provides the society medical insurance to us. In this way, we take the medical care better and cheaper. Similarly, in the field of education, government spends a great mount of money in improving education, such as building schools, training teachers and supporting the subject research and so on. Without those actives, we can not receive such well education. In this way, we can live without politic, because it is so important and make so many benefits to us.

By contract, political decisions and actives also take us disadvantages. For example, some political discord cause wars within one country or between countries. As the war in Iraq which has lasted for 2 years, thousands of harmless people lost their lives, and hundreds of thousands of people lost their houses, their works, even their families. They are the victims of wars. In another word, they are the victims of politic.

To sum up, political decisions and actives affect our lives deeply, even politic has became a part of our normal lives. I hope the political leaders could think carefully before they make decisions or take actives, because their decisions and actives will make great effect to people’s lives as the same as society.

zhoumaye425UID: 2262458

I agree with the idea that political decisions and activities affect all aspects of people’s lives, what the author said above. No matter whom we are, no matter where we are, no matter whether we want, obsulutly(absolutely?), political play an important role in history, also our lives.Look though the long history of human’s lives, political make a great effect. On (the) one hand, political makes the society progress. Many countries passed the act about antiracism. It not only make benefits to the blacks, yellow race and some other races, but also, even more important, progress the communicate between different people of different color. For instant(instance), the antiracism act says all people have the equral(equal) right of working. That means people of different color or different background can work in a same office and work together. They can learn from other(others’) strong point to offset their weakness and so(then) make their work more effective. Though(这个词的逻辑关系不对吧，是不是改成With好些) the impact and communion of different culture, the society improved. On the other hand, political brings us benefits in different(换成various更好吧)  ways. Take（Taking） the medical care system for example, the government provides the society medical insurance to us. In this way, we take the medical care better and cheaper.(us, in which case can we take the medical care better and cheaper. 感觉这两句话合成一句好些，要不前面的Take…for example读起来怪怪的。那某某来举例，政府给我们提供了某某和拿某某来举例，政府给我们提供了某某是我们更能怎么样读起来后面一个好些吧) Similarly, in the field of education, government spends a great mount(amount) of money in improving education, such as building schools, training teachers and（这个and不要要不和后面的and有重复的感觉） supporting the subject research and so on. Without those actives, we can not receive such well education. In this way, we can（can’t笔误吧） live without politic, because it is so important and make（makes） so many benefits to us.By contract(没见过), political decisions and actives also take us disadvantages. For example, some political discord cause wars within one country or between countries. As the war in Iraq which has lasted for 2 years, thousands of harmless people lost their lives, and hundreds of thousands of people lost their houses, their works, even their families. They are the victims of wars. In another word, they are the victims of politic.To sum up, political decisions and actives affect our lives deeply, even politic has became(become) a part of our normal lives. I hope the political leaders could think carefully before they make decisions or take actives, because their decisions and actives will make great effect to(on) people’s lives as the same as society.

Political是形容词不能当名词用吧。By KloseChou

ruczephyrUID: 2181202

I agree with the idea that political decisions and activities affect all aspects of people’s lives, what the author said above. No matter whom we are, no matter where we are, no matter whether we want, obsulutly, political play an important role in history, also our lives.

Look though the long history of human’s lives, political make a great effect. On one hand, political makes the society progress. Many countries passed the act about antiracism. It not only make benefits to the blacks, yellow race and some other races, but also, even more important, progress the communicate between different people of different color. For instant, the antiracism act says all people have the equral right of working. That means people of different color or different background can work in a same office and work together. They can learn from other strong point to offset their weakness and so make their work more effective. Though the impact and communion of different culture, the society improved. 这一段有点论证的太狭窄,一直在说一个方面,也没有推广到一般情况,所以没有扣到TS上.

On the other hand, political brings us benefits in different ways. Take the medical care system for example, the government provides the society medical insurance to us. In this way, we take the medical care better and cheaper. Similarly, in the field of education, government spends a great mount of money in improving education, such as building schools, training teachers and supporting the subject research and so on. Without those actives, we can not receive such well education. In this way, we can live without politic, because it is so important and make so many benefits to us.

By contract, political decisions and actives also take us disadvantages. For example, some political discord cause wars within one country or between countries. As the war in Iraq which has lasted for 2 years, thousands of harmless people lost their lives, and hundreds of thousands of people lost their houses, their works, even their families. They are the victims of wars. In another word, they are the victims of politic.这两段的问题一样就是只是在堆砌例子,而且对例子没有分析,说的也很浅,没有联系到主题上.

To sum up, political decisions and actives affect our lives deeply, even politic has became a part of our normal lives. I hope the political leaders could think carefully before they make decisions or take actives, because their decisions and actives will make great effect to people’s lives as the same as society.

感觉似乎没有什么话可说,建议多思考一下,用中文写一下提纲也是可行的,有时间下我的,thx