Issue51 【METTLE小组】第一次作业 by Benjamin9

Benjamin9UID: 2306677

Issue51
"Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."


In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to improving education more and more, both positive and negative effects among persons call for a balance in which education will be designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student and it will be designed to generality.

It must not be ignored to educate the individual predominance and interest. If a person has predominance to others, he will be emulatory in the society. If everyone’s ability is the same, it will counteract the selection of talents and the improvement of the society. A man want to be alive in the society, he must have a professional skill. It is evidence that not everyone has the same interest, so their interests must be respected, and it also should be improved in the education.

But the education system will be chaos if the interest is emphasized excessively in the education, and the education will be difficult to be managed. And then we must to face many problems, for example the classroom, the length of schooling and so on. Anyway, much knowledge is necessary to each student. Each worthy has profound knowledge. If a student only learn what he is interest in, he will can not acclimatize himself to the society because of his ignorance. However, the society also needs generalist sometime.

Therefore the education should be designed to meet general needs and individual needs, we must find out a balance between them. It is importance to improve individual predominance and interests, but we must also learn some necessary knowledge. More elitists would be brought out only in this kind of education.

yonglecUID: 2311105

In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to improving education more and more, both positive and negative effects among persons call for a balance in which education will be designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student and it will be designed to generality.(模板痕迹太明显，不过对于初学者来说可能是较好的学习方式，以后改造出自己的模板）

It must not be ignored to educate the individual predominance and interest. If a person has predominance to others, he will be emulatory in the society. If everyone’s ability is the same, it will counteract the selection of talents and the improvement of the society. A man want to be alive in the society, he must have a professional skill. It is evidence that not everyone has the same interest, so their interests must be respected, and it also should be improved in the education.（感觉此段的逻辑不是很清楚) 另外最好加上论证的例子充实内容，其实我自己也做不到，大家都是新手，共同努力吧

But the education system will be chaos if the interest is emphasized excessively in the education, and the education will be difficult to be managed（用得是否恰当？）. And then we must to face many problems, for example，应该改为such  df   the classroom, the length of schooling and so on. Anyway, much knowledge is necessary to each student. Each worthy has profound knowledge. If a student only learn what he is interest in, he will can not acclimatize himself to the society because of his ignorance. However, the society also needs generalist sometime.

Therefore the education should be designed to meet general needs and individual needs, we must find out a balance between them. It is importance(important) to improve individual predominance and interests, but we must also learn some necessary knowledge. More elitists would be brought out only in this kind of education

yonglecUID: 2311105

还有就是字数也不太够，汗，我自己也一样，积累太少啊，共同努力